On the Brink of Death in Warhammer 40K, I Awaken the Stars and Rise from the Underhive

I think the subject matter is okay, but there are a lot of useless rhetorical metaphors, and there are also inexplicable inner dramas. It can't be polished by AI [laughs evilly]. If it is improved and improved, it should be fine, but the number of words may be reduced by one-third [laughing]

I give it a five-star rating, mainly because of the good writing in the later period. In the early stage, the setting of the Inquisition was a bit deviated from the basic world view setting. Of course, the writing style became more mature and perfect later on, and there is still some writing power. It's just this update efficiency that shouldn't be able to achieve full attendance. If you are a game fan or someone who likes this type of novel, it is worth recommending. Like our foreign game fan works, we just write them for fun and let everyone have fun together. The later writing was not bad

Less self-talk and mental activity

The biggest problem is still being held hostage. Have you never played Rogue Trader before the Inquisition question? Inquisition's Hein was turned into a puppy by me using a female nickname. In fact, if I really want to have an Inquisition girlfriend, I should make the protagonist a bit stronger, but the Inquisition's people are also human beings [face covering] Just like if everyone really traveled through Warhammer, they would probably be old farmers who thought they were medieval until their death [laughing and crying]

The back is really beautiful, believe me In the middle and late stages, the empire will become its most ideal form, such as the return of the original body...? No spoilers, just read it yourself, I recommend reading it one by one. (No money, no money, no money!)

I like this style very much, this kind of literature that is mixed with a little emotion but also has a lot of fighting.

From the middle level, it will be much better later. Come on [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully]

I always feel like there are some paragraphs that I saw earlier, but they appear in the next chapter and 2.

I just want to know where that phone went [laughing]

So far, this is the system text that has the most Warhammer feel to me [sending my heart]