I'm a Rapper, So Taking Over Showbiz Is Only Natural

The content is well written, but it's not easy to bring it in [face covering] Imagine Edberg participating in the new rap. This point is too abstract. Everything else is okay, and the song selection is also good.

I have read a few chapters so far and found a lot of rap jokes, which are quite interesting. Plus, I am coming from the adb comment area. After a while, more people will probably read it. I suggest you write it in more detail. Maybe adb will see it [laughing]

So far, the only author who really understands rap writes rap novels. The aesthetics of the works included are also very online. The author is very tasteful and the rare thing is that the author's views on rap works are the same as mine. He does not take sides and just listens to the songs. GAI listens to it, Ma Siwei listens to it, the living dead listens to it, and the Five also listens to it. It doesn't matter who you are, as long as the song is good. This is much better than the chuck author who calls GAI "tacky" when he hears it, and the Five Guys "foreign" when he hears it. It just feels like it's not popular. The author can use some AI to turn it into a comic and post it on Douyin, so he can earn just a penny more and promote his novel.

It can be seen that he must be a newcomer. The disadvantage is that the writing style is still poor and a bit awkward. The advantage is that there are too few rap novels. This one is already very good among them. It can be seen that the author is a vertical audience of hip-hop, and his taste is much better than some people who are like the old uncle Elevator God of War when they write rap. The further back you go, the more awkward it becomes.

Sakee wants to slap adb, keep up with current events, and hurry up and get a chapter out. Can't you just write and rap honestly?

Not bad. It's rare to see books of this type and subject, so I still want to encourage them! There are still a few questions I would like to ask: ① There are too many explanatory elements in the early stage. For those who don't know, I think that they are reading popular science books and have a certain impact on the perception. Can they be placed where the author has something to say? But it's okay now ② The plot is very compact, but is it a little too compact? I feel that the content is not very rich, but it can still be appropriately interspersed with some variety shows, games, program effects, daily life, etc. Entertainment-type articles can still include this kind of content. ③ Is the emotional line pushed a little faster? And a little embarrassing. These are the big problems at the moment, but overall it's still okay, and I hope we can continue to work hard. There is also a little bit of personal stuff mixed in... Could you please add more songs about Kindergarten Killer or Pharaoh? The current plot is very suitable for the entire "Rebound Pipa", please!

At first it was written in the third person and a bit short, but as I got used to it it got better and better. By the way, I would like to recommend a song that I like very much. Those Flowers, by Yu Zhehao, is a very nice and meaningful song, the author can listen to it

Some people pretend to be deep, some pretend to be elegant, some pretend to be free and easy, some pretend to be melancholy, and I am going to start pretending~ The song "Factory" is not good, even if there are two lines of lyrics, but it is not good, just like "Anhe Bridge" that many people say dogs will get sick of after listening to it. I have no impression, some things have been overhyped, and have exceeded its own meaning. I dare to say this here, purely because there are few people in this book, and there must not be many people who have been criticized [laughs] I haven't finished reading it, but I saw the championship. I like the overall rhythm and song selection of this book. In addition, although Hayabusa and Lian Ma are twins, Lian Ma's voice and accent definitely beat Hayabusa in an instant. Hayabusa wins the championship, pure capital, after the criticism, time!

The disadvantage of reading this kind of novel is that most of the songs are not that awesome

The language is very clever. It's the kind that makes my eyes light up when I hear it. It's the one you know what I mean (the castle of the old times...)