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666, They have created a parallel world, and the protagonist has to wait for Deng Ziqi to break up with her boyfriend before starting to talk about relationships, 666, I like second-hand things so much

After reading it, how can I put it, I think it is unnecessary to write the part about Deng having a boyfriend in the early stage. I don't mean to emphasize that we have not talked about it. If you don't write this, more people will read it. Also, if you think you can stick to the completion, just follow your own pace. If you feel tired, you can speed up the pace and simplify Zhou's outline, then solve the official announcement of Hummingbird and the heroine, participate in a few more variety shows together, and finally finish it perfectly. Generally speaking, it is more in line with my appetite.

The author wants to present a novel similar to prose poetry, which is very possible. Each title is very distinctive (combined with the text and then optimized). However, I wrote about the characteristics of those songs too many times before, which is a bit tedious.

The writing style is adequate. I feel that the author's novel is very messy without an outline. Please sort out the outline and revise the text. The writing style is sufficient, but it is too tiring and messy to read. I am exhausted after reading Chapter 20. This is the reason why so few people read it. The preface and the sequel do not match. The first part is just a song, and then suddenly goes abroad to act. Really revise the previous part, it is too discouraging for people to quit.

Hmm... This is the first time I've seen this narrative method in a novel. I read a few pages but didn't read any further. I'm not sure if it's AI. The novel isn't that interesting, or maybe it's not well written. I don't understand. I personally don't understand it.

Not good-looking, not good-looking, not good-looking

Too much foreshadowing, sorry.

Bonus points for Deng Ziqi, but I haven't read much of the two places. The rhetoric and running accounts are serious. The places I've seen have always given me a flashy and exaggerated feeling. I feel that there is nothing wrong with writing like this, but it is uncomfortable to watch. If you want to engage in the art genre, then on this kind of novel platform, it will give people a feeling of being unworthy. Then, repeating the popularity of a song makes people feel tired. I have to repeatedly experience the shock of the netizens in your article, which is very difficult to understand. From what I've seen so far, I feel that the male protagonist is like a robot. He has seen the warmth and coldness of the world. He does everything with a cold face and no emotions. At present, I don't know why Deng Ziqi likes such a person. I feel that their personalities are incompatible.

Wc, the author wrote five books at once, and you have a person growing on your liver? [Petrochemical]

Except that the questions are a bit AI, the early stage is slow, but the rest is good, keep going [eating melon]