Transmigrate into a Book: The Villainous Roughneck Isn't Acting Right

The article is still okay, the two-way secret love, the combination of a rough guy and a fresh young man, has the conventional elements of a time-traveling novel, smart in reception, and capable in attack, which is more in line with the situation at that time. However, there are still many shortcomings, such as the typos that everyone has mentioned, and there are even many characters that are uncertain in some places. There is also the sudden introduction of other wonderful factors (I won't mention spoilers) at the same time as the 1970s, which makes the article feel torn and somewhat inexplicable. But I still hope that the article can be written better and better.

I was caught by the "era", "villain" and "rough guy" elements in the title of the book. I glanced at the introduction and felt that the setting was okay. After reading a few chapters of the main text, I also liked the characters of the two male protagonists. I didn't write this review until I finished the book. Generally speaking, the author's writing skills are quite good. He is accustomed to running multiple lines in parallel, and each branch line has a beginning and an end. Features of this book: There are few bloody plots and misunderstandings. The most important thing is that it is not sadistic or violent. It basically has a happy ending including the original owner's father. For people like me who are easily upset, there is no need to worry. Although I am not under control, being under control allows me to avoid brainstorming. It's just that sometimes there are typos, extra words, and omitted words, which somewhat affects the viewing experience, especially when the exciting parts are fascinating, and they are suddenly interrupted and have some ideas [laughing] I will talk about my subjective feelings in parts: Zhangjiatun Chapter (Making a Living in the Countryside): This should be my favorite part of the book. As an educated youth, Su Yanyin lives in Qin Yue's house. Since he can't do much farm work and may starve to death for the work points he earns, he hugs Brother Yue's thigh tightly and uses this as the basis for the subsequent story. When I first met Qin Yue, through the character dialogue, actions and psychological descriptions, I already liked this character [send my heart] Later, when I had a two-way secret love, I preferred the ambiguous but not exposed, and the feeling of each other in my heart. This is also the place where I think the two of them are the best in this book. It is very interesting, chapter after chapter, and I can't stop [laughs] So I also wanted to express my feelings to each other a few days before brother Yue joined the army and we parted ways, but I didn't expect it was too early. The following ideas for this part of the plot are highly subjective: 1. The space is acceptable. Many period documents I have read have space at the back of the book. This also makes it much more convenient for two people to do things together without being discovered. Especially in Chapter 77, the rationalization of space is refreshing. 2. I suddenly adopted three children, which was a little hard to accept for a while. Three children are too many, and it makes the use of space very inconvenient. [Pout] The most unacceptable thing is that it takes away part of the care for my brother-in-law. However, from the time when Qin Yue joined the army and later on in the capital city chapter, he gradually became accustomed to it, mainly to serve the expansion of the side plot, so it was no longer necessary [rolls eyes] I think it is more appropriate to adopt at most 2 children. 3. The biggest shortcoming in the early stage may be that some of the descriptions of the banquet are too delicate [laughing awkwardly], it feels like he was directly written as a woman. Even if he is a woman, it will be off-putting and uncomfortable to watch. I don't know if this will dissuade some people, but anyway, I persisted until the end because Qin Yue wrote well in the early stage. County Storm: I most remember the chapters where Brother Yue assists the police in solving crimes. Qin Yue's line alone has a unique flavor. Later he joined the army and I didn't write about him for a long time. At that time, I really wanted to see the plot written from Qin Yue's perspective. It is recommended here that if you join the army, you should write more chapters like those about how Qin Yue performed meritorious services. It is quite good. Beijing Chapter (Towards the Future): This article spent a lot of space on banquets about starting a business from scratch. In addition, I haven't written about Brother Yue for a long time. I think this place is a bit weak. In other words, during that period, it lost the attraction it had in the early stage... But fortunately, Su Cheng and Zhong Siyuan later added a bit of fun, and Qin Yue also appeared, so it was not too boring. The banquet also finally received the love from blood relatives [blowing kiss] The broken family line was resumed! Because the Zhangjiatun chapter is my favorite part of the book, I was very angry later when I saw that the house where Qin Yue had lived for more than 20 years was burned down by the scumbag Zhang Xuewen [angry] This house was the first home where the two met and fell in love, carrying many beautiful memories [crazy], and it was also the only thing left to Qin Yue after his parents died [crying] author, how can you be so cruel [grieved] Let's talk about the final Hong Kong City chapter. After Brother Yue returned, there were several chapters that kept describing Qin and Yue's resentment [laughing awkwardly] and almost turned into a resentful woman... I didn't like the characters very much [rolled my eyes]. When I saw the end, I felt that the ending was too rushed... But when I came back to my senses, I didn't want to finish the book so quickly at first, but then I gradually accepted that the Capital Chapter was about 300 chapters long. I wrote a book review after about two weeks. Although Qin Yue has been trained and baptized by the army, and his overall quality has been improved in all aspects. In the end, the overlord is no longer the taciturn young man in Zhangjiatun. But in terms of character portrayal, the Qin Yue in Zhangjiatun is the best. I also like the soldier Qin Yue very much [sending my heart]. In the end, it is the overlord Qin Yue who [rolls eyes]. At the banquet, he was sometimes too coquettish and unlikable in the early stage, but his liking for him did not change much later. Also: Somehow, I like to see Qin Yue and Fang Yimo being jealous [laughing] I can't help but laugh every time I see this. This laugh line is really tried and true [note] It's a bit regretful that I didn't watch Banquet Counterattack once [smiles] There are also Qiu Shaoyuan and Xi Feng. The author dug holes but did not fill them [angry] negative reviews. All in all, it should be 4 stars, and the fifth star for Qin Yue [laughs] should be a little higher, at least around 8. After reading through the book reviews, I found that my reading time was the longest in a discontinuous manner. [You taste carefully] This book will also be read by more and more people, which is enough to support the author to reach lv4. However, it may take a long time to write extras at lv5 [face covering]. Maybe by then I will only remember the protagonist...

Nice article Shou looks kind, but is smart and witty, allowing the villain to see his light. The villain is a little silly at first, but the villain is also growing in the future. At present, it seems to be a double crush, and I look forward to the follow-up.

The description of the environment is close to reality, the emotional line of the protagonist is solid and step-by-step, the character description is meticulous, the storyline is interlocking, reasonable and compliant, in short, it is great! [Like][Like][Like][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

It's a female-male video with two male protagonists. It's quite heartwarming. The main attraction is that the two people are entangled there. It's easy to understand. The sweet text is controlled and can be watched.

(Personal evaluation, don't criticize if you don't like it) I have read this novel for a long time. The plot in the novel is rich, but what makes me feel the best is watching the relationship between Su and Qin go from strangers to putting their lives together for both of them. Thinking of Qin Yue's heart disease, I think the author has arranged it well, because Qin has been beaten, scolded, and not favored by others since he was a child, which makes his world in a state of chaos. Although it is dark, the sky will always light up. Su's arrival is like a sun shining into Qin's world, preventing Qin from being bullied or misunderstood, giving him light and heat, just like that medal, completely preventing Qin from being looked down upon by others, and allowing Qin to move towards Su firmly. Because of his childhood situation and seeing Su's excellence, his mood became very complicated and his image became fuller. He not only longed for Su's light to always shine on him, but also didn't want Su to be trapped in the countryside. He took this as an opportunity to continuously improve himself, but because of this, his goals and desires were all centered on Su. There was no other way. It was Su who gave him a second life, so it was strange that he didn't have separation anxiety. So they have done a lot for each other. Seeing the extra story, they are still happy. I have thousands of words, but I am stuck in my throat. I can only say "Qin Su 99"

I finished reading it in one go. It's really good. Both parties are working hard for a common future. The protagonist's views are very upright. It feels like it really happened in that era. The writing is very real and feels. It's pretty good for a period novel. I recommend it [Like]

I've finished reading two more books, so I'd like to praise you. It's been a long time since I've seen an article that treats the original male and female protagonists kindly. Many articles will write the protagonists of the original books as vicious villains. I really don't understand. I hope that the deputy CP's new article will be completed soon. I'm looking forward to it. Since I'm here, I'll stop by to update it [laughter]

I prefer the deputy CP, brother-in-law and brother-in-law, who have a strong sense of treachery. The main CP is a relatively normal person, but the relationship progress is quite a roller coaster. They pretended to be very good at each other in the front, but suddenly they went to the home plate at the break, which was a bit broken and almost stopped at high speed in the car.

It's so beautiful. I really like the background of the 1970s and 1980s. The development of people and the development of the times are intertwined. I can really see the development of the background of the entire era [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] I hope it will be combined with historical facts so that readers can better understand the stories of that era, and then I can occasionally post about it in other places [Love]