Period: I'll Make Money First, Romance Can Wait

Qingqing's character design is very good, and she is very nice. Currently, there is only one attacker who appears, Qin. I am very optimistic about him✌ But there is something to say about the original owner's newly recognized parents and family. It turns out that He Yeye and the protagonist's younger brother are sincere, and the parents' concern is superficial. The wife always describes her mother as being moved to tears, which is too frequent and annoying (it feels like you know how to cry when you cry, and you have no luck in crying). Parents care more about face. When the two of them were having sex with their grandma, no one said anything back. It may also be the case with the character. The grandma is also greedy. It is understandable that the character is so, but the protagonist still wants to get into their psychology with money, well...😮‍💨I think it is like this anyway, it is very unpleasant. Forget it, everyone has their own taste! Except for this big family thing, everything else is good, but from a God's perspective, it gives me the feeling that the protagonist gets dizzy when he encounters family problems, which makes me feel that the protagonist has been dehumanized.

When I first read Chapter 7, I wanted to run away, but it was rare for a novel to tackle this subject in this era, so I jumped to more than 20 pieces of grandma's signature on the family separation note and started reading, wanting to try again. The protagonist is courageous, smart, and able to withstand pressure. He finds multiple ways to do things and tries his best to leave himself an escape route. I like the writing very much. The protagonist goes to Shenzhen to sell things and buy land. The writing is very detailed and the subject matter is novel. Something to mind. 1. I have read more than 80 chapters since I was in my twenties. The plot arrangement is too tight. As soon as one thing is solved, another thing rushes towards me. There is no moment to relax and slow down. My heart is always tense. (It's reasonable from the perspective of plot arrangement, but it looks uncomfortable from the perspective of reading) 2. (In the early stage, I only saw Chapter 7) In the early stage, when the protagonist returns home, his parents show love in words, but there is basically no compensation in actions. My parents have always said that grandma has a hard mouth and a soft heart, but grandma has always been partial to Dafang, and being soft-hearted can be profitable. When the protagonist comes back from work, his grandmother gives him the benefit of two eggs for later benefits. When the protagonist ate, he gave one to his younger brother and the other half to his parents. The parents ate it without thinking about the protagonist. (It's easy to dissuade... There are also my own problems. I jump directly from Chapter 7 to more than 20 pictures. The plot is not connected, I don't know the people, and the motivation for finding trouble is unclear. The writing on the back is quite nice. It would be better if the front part can be fixed and the plot rhythm is arranged reasonably. Come on 💕

The overall plot is okay. The protagonist is also very cautious in his work in that era. He is not like other protagonists who treat others as fools as soon as they pass through. However, some points are too detailed, such as the actions of collecting things, thoughts and notes. It makes people tired to read it over and over again. The relationship between people can sometimes be a bit inexplicable. It may be the author's foreshadowing. There are really few emotional scenes haha. Good luck, author.

It's good to watch, but the only thing that makes people feel uncomfortable may be the early scenes with family members, but considering the situation of the protagonist in the article, this is normal. The biological parents of the protagonist suddenly welcome the protagonist, and it is normal not to kiss them without any emotional foundation (ps: I almost forgot that the protagonist also has a real and fake young master's script). However, the gap between the protagonist's emotional line and career line is too big, which makes it seem that the protagonist becomes a little depressed after starting his career line. But in fact, it is understandable that in that era, there was a lot of pressure in doing business, and it was not okay to be careless. However, the excessive proportion of the relationship and career lines will also lead some people who come here to gain more labels to think that the author tricked people into killing them and then gave them low scores. However, I personally like this kind of large-scale career mixed with some emotions (people just have to make progress!!!). In addition, the protagonist's relationship line in that era could not be open and aboveboard, so the only emotional lines were written in a rather obscure way. So far, I have seen that these are the possible poisonous points in Chapter 183 from my personal point of view. Those who like to watch the protagonist develop his career step by step can jump straight into the pit. Regarding the image creation of the protagonist, the author often borrows from the development of the career line. The protagonist's caution when safely converting the money in the system into practical items, and the steady and enterprising attitude in developing the clothing factory all create a rational, cautious but extremely stressful image. However, the inner turmoil of the 182 protagonist due to Qin gave the protagonist a three-dimensional image. He broke away from the rational entrepreneur image, has his own emotional troubles, and also has a little humanity, and the image is more three-dimensional. To sum up, the author, you must finish writing [I'm almost crying] and don't stop updating [I'm almost crying] It's not easy to find a book that suits your taste on Tomato. When I saw the author saying that he wanted to give up, my heart stopped for a moment, and I hurriedly wrote this comment.

How can I put it, it is a good watch. I thought about giving up in the middle, but Qingqing was not used to the best family at all. Occasionally, I felt a little refreshed and persisted. I have been pursuing it until now, and my career line has stabilized and I have begun to develop a love line. But I have something to say about the love scene. Maybe the author is a little partial to Qin. After writing the love line, Qin's role is greater than the other two, and after Qin's showdown with Qingqing to eat meat, his role is obviously much more, and they are all in several chapters. He is jealous or sweet with Qingqing. The other two only come out to assist Qingqing when he is in trouble. They are almost all taken care of in one stroke. As for the label multi-attack, the career is still developing in the early stage, and there is a Shura field. The emotional drama after the career development cannot be seen at all. It is completely Qin's arbitrary and domineering. It is really a little tiring to watch. For those who like multiple lines to develop together, I am skipping to watch 🥺

The protagonist is emotionally indifferent but not cold-blooded. Although he feels overwhelmed by the love of the He family's parents, he still remembers their kindness. When the protagonist asked the He family's parents if they wanted to split up the family with him, the two of them lowered their heads in silence, which made people feel a bit disappointed - that little bit of blood relationship still couldn't wake up a person who had been a coward for half his life. In addition to the help of people like the system and Qin Ye, the protagonist has been able to reach this point. In addition to the help of people like the system and Qin Ye, his own abilities are also crucial. If he hadn't traveled through time, he would have become a successful man over time. At the end of the day, it feels like the positive energy and momentum in the protagonist has gradually faded since the family was separated, replaced by more and more silence. When others are talking to him, or they don't know what to say in reply, or they don't know how to say it, they don't answer at all. The protagonist may be depressed, and his depression can be clearly felt between the lines. In the past, his family and connections were his help, but now they seem to have become two big mountains weighing on his heart...

See Chapter 7 - the protagonist is admitted home by his biological parents, and briefly has a place to stay and a job. Dear author, I can't recognize the names of the people. Can you make a relationship list if you have time? My eyes are dizzy Of course there are good people and there are bad people, but in fact the old lady is not evil-minded, she is just used to being poor and wants to get some benefits and hide them (it doesn't matter who she gives them to). Did the author originally save the manuscript? The previous explosion made me a little more suspicious, and the plot was a bit watery, and the description was too detailed, making it a bit tiring to read.

The writing is very good, the protagonist is a growth type. After reading for many days, it was easy to find the right one, but I felt a little uncomfortable when I looked at it 🤦 🤦 🤦 Of course, it is normal to pay first and then get something in return.

I haven't read much, but I wanted to give up because I really didn't like the early plot, but after reading all the book reviews, I feel that the later plot should be quite good, and the author has also responded positively and given feedback, so I plan to continue reading it. I am looking forward to it, so I will give it a four-star rating first and give the author some motivation to update. Cheers to the author 😘

It's very beautiful, and the writing style is also very good. It can make some ordinary and trivial things interesting. I'm really happy to see the protagonist succeed in his career, but I also hope that he doesn't have to be so tired. His tiredness is not physical but psychological.