After the Broke, Pitiful Guy Successfully Seduced His Rich Classmate

This book is really beautiful. Oh my god, it is about two poor little people who redeem each other, support each other, and grow up with each other. The details are also very well described. What attracts me most is that the male protagonist is willing to give up his identity as the heir of a family in order to marry the girl he likes, and he is also very capable. They planned their future when they had a crush on the heroine. Although the heroine had a miserable life before meeting the hero, and even life was a problem, she did not lose herself when facing money and was very clear-headed. To put it simply, the hero and heroine have brains and their characters are tough. I admire them very much. I thought I would also write about how the male and female protagonists struggled, but it ended, but it did not affect the beauty of the book. Finally, I would like to thank the author for writing this book and wish you a happy new year.

Chapter 55 was not very good before, it was just passable. The writing could not support the emotional expression. I had no sense of involvement after reading it, nor could I feel the sweetness of the heartbeat between the two. In some plots, the heroine had a faint sense of being a pseudo-person. Chapter 55 said that it suddenly became better looking. As expected, the author, you are better at writing long-term and warm love. The extras are far more interesting than the main text! The extras are much better than the main text! A big compliment! Especially the chapters about a family of three are really touching! I would like to give some advice to the author. The character dialogue should not be written line by line. It is also very long. It is a bit difficult to read. Especially the part where the male protagonist's best friend tells the female protagonist about the hero's efforts over the years. It is so long and every sentence is a separate line. It is very tiring to read. Anyway, come on! If you continue to write books at the same level as the extras, they will definitely look great! I would like to make a bold statement. In fact, judging from the writing style after chapter 55, I highly recommend the author to read more of Gu Man's books and learn how she writes emotional dramas. I am clumsy and don't know how to describe the progression of emotions that naturally touches people's hearts. This is what I think is missing from the book before chapter 55. I can only give suggestions from the books I have read. Just my humble opinion, if you mind if I mention another author, I will delete it

After seeing the end of the text, I wanted to write down my feelings. The plot of the whole story is my favorite type, and the characters are also good. The plot line of the whole book moves forward very quickly. I like the sweet and cruel short stories very much. In fact, I can feel the author's thoughts in the work, and I can actually feel that the author's views on love are quite upright. However, the author's output of opinions in the form of long dialogues may be a bit too thin, and there are too many such forms. The author's writing style feels relatively immature. It can feel that the author wants to express a lot, but it is indeed difficult to support the expression of opinions due to insufficient writing. This is just my personal opinion and suggestion~ I hope the author will get better and better~

This is a 100-word book review. (I'm really impressed by why Emma doesn't show the word count of comments. It's only a few words, here we are)

Then you like to read sweet stories, you can read them, they are quite sweet, but I felt uncomfortable in the middle of reading them. I cried several times, three or four times, and more. I felt uncomfortable not because of the abuse, but because of their relationship.

Very beautiful, the male and female protagonists are both good children, sweet, it makes my body feel warm when I look at it [crying]

It's very interesting. I jumped to watch it. The love between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is engraved in the bones. They are destined by fate. Their story has already been planned. It's a sweet little story with only a little bit of abuse in the middle. It's very good. Come on.

It made me cry so much at night, it was so beautiful. It would be better if the main text could be written about college. Actually, I want to see the two of them fall in love on campus sweetly from high school to university, and then fall in love and get married after graduation. Personally, I think the main text is a bit short, and it didn't even finish the college entrance examination.

The content is good and the writing is appropriate. I hope it won't be abusive. Ah Yao and Ran Tang can get together smoothly and live a sweet life. I hope we can see the scene of the two getting married later, and the scene of Ah Yao doting on his wife after marriage. It would be better to have another child so that we can see a family of three living happily and let Ran Tang feel the family affection. Ran Tang's mother passed away early and it is not easy to have such a father. If the two get married and have a child, it will also let Ran Tang feel the family affection! @ Ju

The feelings are very delicate and the foreshadowing is good. Before they were revealed, I really hoped that Tangtang would open up a little more and trust Ah Yao a little more. I also saw Tangtang's concerns. Now that they are revealed, I hope that both of them are well and the misunderstanding is resolved. Tangtang should love Ah Yao more. Both of them should be happy and go home together [Sending Hearts]