At Last, I Know It's Late Summer

Because I feel like there are relatively few people watching, I'm here to make a long comment to support the author and teacher~ The real pain brought by the family has brought all kinds of unbearable pain to the two young people at an age when their self-esteem is most sensitive and their hearts are most prone to turmoil. However, their background is gentle and their souls are tough. As long as they can feel and absorb a little warmth of goodwill and love, they can go on. What I like best about this book is the delicate portrayal of the characters' emotions. The plot is more realistic and makes people unable to help but worry about them. I have tied up with the more than 20 chapters currently updated in one breath. There are some points that I pay more attention to, for reference only: In terms of character description, some expressions and details are slightly deliberate. For example, "bringing xxxx" is sometimes very specific, and it affects the reading experience if it appears more than once. (The author may want to make the characters more vivid, but it may be better to enrich the expressions to promote the character creation) As far as the current feeling is concerned, Lin Hui should be considered a more three-dimensional character. The others are more or less single. The male protagonist's image is slightly more three-dimensional than the female protagonist's (but it may be that there are more descriptions) I hope to increase the plot's reflection on the heroine's growth! At present, my impression of the heroine Xia Zhi is that she is relatively tough, has a delicate heart, is introverted and silent, and has strong self-esteem. There is also a slight change in the heroine's "trying to become extrovert" brought about by Gu Chi's accident that is deliberately highlighted in the plot. However, the overall view of the heroine as the core character of the novel, her character tension and richness are slightly lacking in the progression of the plot. I feel like it has written a lot of people's miserable and helpless stories, but the portrayal of the characters in the conflict is relatively average (even though the conflict has passed, the impression of the characters in my mind has not changed much, it's light, I'll look at it later) There are currently two characters who have been described in more detail but have not officially appeared. I don't know if this is foreshadowing. One is a short freshman boy in high school who stares at Xia Zhi unfriendlyly by the playground (originally I guessed for a second that he was Uncle Zhao's son), and the other should be Uncle Zhao's son, a muscular boy who helps fight Xia Jianguo away. In terms of character names, "Xia Jianguo" is occasionally replaced by "Zhao Jianguo" by mistake. Sometimes the perspective of some titles is strange. For example, when describing the objective plot, "Lin Hui" becomes "Aunt Lin", but when describing Gu Chi's inner drama, he calls his mother "Gu Mu", which somewhat affects the sense of substitution. Some people also think that for characters with names, it may be better to write the names directly when writing the plot. For example, Gu Chi's mother, directly called Yin Jia, will give people a better impression than "Mother Gu" and "Grandma Gu" (there are not many female characters with names at present)

When we tied the knot in one breath, it was evening outside the window, and the sunset dyed half of the sky red. The story of Xia Zhi and Gu Chi has not waited until dawn. It is not a sweet novel at the moment, and even the "sweetness" is pitiful. It's more sour, forbearing, and restrained. It's two young girls struggling in the mud, cautiously reaching out to each other. I hope you can give them more candy in the future, it will heal them slowly. I simply can't get enough of it, and I'm looking forward to the plot behind it.

Great character descriptions The further we go, the more desolate the road becomes, the heavier the dust, and the sound of the roaring machines becomes clearer and clearer. Xia Zhi followed him and walked step by step to the iron fence outside the construction site. She clearly saw it was Gu Chi walking into the construction site. Xia Zhi stood outside the fence and froze in place for an instant.

It is a slow-heat healing campus article. Xia Zhi, a girl from her native family who has suffered a lot of damage, meets Gu Chi, a young man who has fallen into gloom after an accident. The two scarred people see each other and redeem themselves in both directions. The writing style is delicate and sad, with a strong sense of emotion and atmosphere. The author's writing style is very good and beautiful. I recommend it!

I was really struck by this campus article! Two teenagers who have been hurt by life heal each other. There is no industrial saccharine, and their relationship flows smoothly. The writing is very delicate, and many moments are particularly immersive, quiet and healing. If you like the theme of two-way redemption, don't miss it!

The long-awaited summer finally shined on the two injured people. A broken yet tender campus story that comforts and warms each other. The encounter between Gu Chi and Xia Zhi is a rare glimmer of light in a difficult life.

It is a very touching two-way redemption, not only falling in love and understanding each other, but also the collision of two souls who have been injured but long for love. The author also included the names of the male and female protagonists in the title of the book, which is really thoughtful.

The author's topic is novel, which is different from other novels of the same type. The content is organized around the theme setting, without procrastination, and the rhythm is tight. The plot is interesting and attractive to readers, and has a strong sense of immersion, which can bring readers into the plot.

The characterization is outstanding, I love the heroine Xia Zhi so much Now that I see this, I feel that it is very real and very touching. I can see a lot of shadows of my own youth in the heroine Xia Zhi. She is sensitive and restless, and was isolated in junior high school. This makes people even more touching. There is no stereotype and the image of stepmother is designed to be very bad. Instead, stepmother Lin Hui is a very good and warm person.

It is a rare novel that can be read in one sitting. The story frame is complete and the narrative is smooth and natural. ! 6666