Western Fantasy: Immortal, Then Living as an Ancient Sage

This is a very good longevity article, which made me a little excited. The first time I had a similar feeling was when I read "I am God!" ", Although the feeling of excitement is not as exciting as "I am God! Strong, but it cannot be denied that it is a masterpiece. For me, it is both a new and somewhat familiar subject matter. Most of the longevity novels I have read before were of the fantasy genre. Immortality novels like this kind of otherworldly, Western fantasy genre are very attractive to me. In particular, the overwhelming sense of history made me feel like I was traveling in the history of civilization, witnessing the epics and miracles of history, and seeing the intertwining of humanity and divinity. The fly in the ointment is that the author's early articles are a bit too stream-of-consciousness, which is a bit difficult to understand, and it is not easy to attract new readers. I mentioned it in the review before, and the author also promised to change it, but who knows, anyway, I have read the latest chapter, and I just want to urge the author to write it quickly! ! !

The writing is delicate and original. The problem is that the picture is too fragmented, and it is difficult to read. It is like observing through a spliced stained glass window. It is fantastic but lacks a sense of reality and immersion.

It's okay [eat melon], but the combination of the language barrier in the first few chapters and your writing style kind of affects reading. It's better in the later chapters, maybe I've adapted to it?

A great novel, I prefer Wudi. After all, the protagonist is no longer dead, but the narrative is confusing in the early stages, as if something suddenly appeared and was solved without any foreshadowing. The story of the protagonist becoming a slave gladiator was not written out, but was narrated later, which led to many things that were confusing when I read it earlier. Moreover, the combat power system was not explained very clearly in the early stage (basically from low to high, ordinary humans, warlocks, rune warriors, and blood warriors). The specific combat power levels were created by the protagonist himself. The protagonist's panel was all figured out and imagined by himself. It was basically an initial whiteboard. The previous things have improved a lot after Chapter 17. After that, there are some spoilers before Chapter 17. If you don't want to read it, you don't have to read it. — — —How to put it, basically the protagonist suffered hardships after time travel and became a slave to unlock strange panels. By creating strange events and letting others know about them, it is equivalent to achieving achievements to upgrade the panels. Afterwards, he accumulates the strength to pretend to others that he is a bloodline person (better to achieve achievements). First, with alchemy Mr. Shi made friends with the cat orcs he created, and then met a blooded person (a non-blooded person is actually a high-dimensional creature with memetic pollution, which can understand everything in the form of answers, and is considered semi-omniscient). Later, he and he worked together to kill the local blooded people and control the place.

I think it's very good. Why is the rating a bit low? It's great without a female protagonist, and the male protagonist is rational and cautious. He drives the immortal, and relies on his own research for his power. At the same time, the world view slowly unfolds. I hope he won't become invincible too soon. Although there are "dragons" who exist outside the specifications, the author will work hard. It will be better if he is more productive.

Most things were not explained clearly, and it was too self-indulgent. Chapter 20 is much better.

The story created by the author belongs to the longevity novels in recent years, but it is different from other creation novels where the protagonist is in a high position from the beginning or even the God of Creation, or even immortality cultivation novels where Changsheng Jiushi slowly cultivates. The protagonist and his companions in the author's works begin to face great adversity. They come from the earth, so we feel the same. They wither one by one, so our wishes change. The protagonist's efforts actually meet the readers' expectations. The emotional drive makes the storyline more attractive. However, it is undeniable that the author's pen The touch is a bit obscure, and the way of character creation is somewhat in-depth and simple. This conflicts with the fast-paced narrative method of online articles, and also leads to new readers not getting started. How to deal with the conflict between this magnificent legendary story or epic and the simple and easy-to-understand narrative requirements is a difficult challenge for the author. Good luck

It's very interesting. It's amazing that Tomato can publish a book like this. It's very well written.

The writing is obviously good, but he always doesn't like to speak human words, leaving readers to guess what his bad habits are. The story is about a group of earthlings who traveled through a palace in another world and were tortured to death. Most of them were thrown into the arena. The protagonist awakened the system in the arena. After completing achievements, he could lock or improve his physical state, directly locking the immortal life. Later, it was discovered that every earthling was a natural necromancer. There are three types of supernatural beings in this different world: warlocks, warriors, and bloodlines.

It feels like I went through a sanity test and then failed miserably [laughing and crying]