Western Fantasy: Immortal, Then Living as an Ancient Sage

This is a great novel about immortality; it really got me excited! I first felt a similar rush when reading *I Am God!*, Although the excitement wasn't as intense as with *I Am God!*, It's still undeniably a masterpiece. The genre is both fresh and somewhat familiar to me.

The writing is delicate and ingenious, but the visuals are too fragmented, making it difficult to read. It's like observing through a pieced-together stained glass window—fantasy but lacking realism and immersion.

🍉 However, the language in the first few chapters was a bit awkward and your writing style combined with the lack of fluency, which made it a little difficult to read. It got better later on, or maybe I just got used to it?

It's a great novel, leaning towards the "invincible" genre, since the protagonist is immortal. However, the narrative is chaotic in the early stages, with events appearing and being resolved abruptly without any foreshadowing. The part where the protagonist becomes a slave gladiator isn't explicitly described, but rather introduced later, leading to confusion in the beginning.

I think it's really good! Why is the rating a bit low? The absence of a female lead is great, and the male lead is rational and cautious, practically immortal, with all his power derived from his own research. The world-building unfolds slowly, and I hope he doesn't become invincible too quickly, even with the presence of an extraordinary being like a "dragon." Author, keep up the good work! More content would be even better.

Most things were left unsaid, and there was too much self-indulgence. Chapter 20 is much better.

The story created by the author belongs to the recent genre of immortality novels. However, unlike other creation novels where the protagonist starts in a high position or is even a creator god, or other unique cultivation novels where the protagonist slowly cultivates to immortality, the protagonist and his companions in the author's story begin in immense adversity.

It's really good. I can't believe Tomato (a famous Chinese writer) published a book like this. It's very well written.

The writing style is clearly good, but the author consistently avoids using straightforward language, leaving readers to guess what this bad habit is. The story is roughly this: a group of Earthlings are transported to another world's royal palace, suffer immense torture, and most die before being thrown into an arena.

It felt like it passed the sanity check once, and then completely failed 😂