Praying for Rain from the Start, I Shocked Another World with Tang Poetry

The emotions are too shallow and superficial. Halfway through, the feeling of dissonance is too strong. Alas, it's quite good. The thing about emotional enhancement is that the time for the growth of emotions can be written a little longer. It's too fast, too "shallow" and has a "gaudy" feeling. It's okay. Halfway through, the sense of dissonance is a bit strong. I slowly read it again. The subject matter is quite attractive to me. The back part feels okay now, but the problem is that the front part feels a bit inconsistent, which looks good (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ,

Finally found it! Good writing and good logic. The plot is compact and the fantasy writing is refreshing. Main! ! Two male protagonists join forces! ! ! There is no need to worry about the best, just upgrade to fight monsters by reciting poems and fight them, fall in love and then fight monsters, the two male protagonists in this refreshing novel! ! ! Love it, love it! The author urges me to update! ! [Blowing kiss]

It's really good-looking. Bai Bao is really a sincere and good person. [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss]. He has his own principles in dealing with people and things. He has a very good personality. He and Qin Gou (praise) go both ways. The two of them are really nice and sweet. [Blow your heart] [Blow your heart] [Blow your heart]. Moreover, Bai Bao doesn't use poetry randomly. He always says it when it's very reasonable. Some of the climaxes are very enjoyable to watch, such as asking for the Holy Judge, literary fights, etc. Who knows how to use both civil and military skills? [Shy][Shy][Shy] The only thing I want to say is that the author will update soon! ! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

I like it very much. The setting is the first time I have seen it. The emotional line is also very fast. It's very fast. It's quite normal. [Cool] The update speed is also fast.

It's okay, support me~ I have to say here that strictly speaking, literature includes not only poetry and music, but also piano, chess, calligraphy and painting. You can let the protagonist do some repairs~

The author is a novice, and I will definitely write better in the future. Let me explain again, the type of writing you write is really good. I have always wanted to find a double male protagonist in this kind of novel, but there is no one, so this novel is really to my liking, and the protagonist is really hurt! The thoughtful type! Cute little fox! [Shy], the author's character design of the protagonist is really good! Anyway, I like it! Sorry, I didn't look at the author's homepage. It turns out that the author is not a novice! [Sending my heart], I will keep up with this article! Falling in love with updated articles is my destiny [face covering]

It's really beautiful! Although the relationship in this book is a bit fast, I think this way we can have a sweet meal😋. Seeing that the relationship between the two is also going up and down now, supporting each other, omg it poked me so much (I fell to the ground), it is not the kind of mindless love story, even the individual You have a mouth, it's great... The author's writing style is also very good. I think it is of a very high standard for a public document. A poem will not pop out out of nowhere, but the emotion will be highlighted in every verse. It is smooth and not obtrusive. It is really refreshing to read! ! This article is written only because it exists in heaven! We at Lotte really have the feeling of being "gentle and gentle, and then a gentleman"! ! Strong recommendation👍I will never leave here for the rest of my life👍👍I'm scared to death if the boss dares to explode. . . (Little lovers 99, you must be nice😢...

Super beautiful, the emotional line is very smooth, comfortable and has a mouth. But why did Gong seem to disappear after we got together, and the emotional drama also disappeared. Okay, now the newly updated chapter attack has no role. It feels a little uncomfortable.

Feelings, personal opinions, for reference only. I think it is not good for Han Feizi to be exempted from punishment. Can it be eliminated with the words of Confucius? Han Feizi valued the law, and the law must be obeyed to be punished. Although there are reasons for the incident, it can be mitigated. Everything has a price. If the protagonist can be exempted from punishment because of his extraordinary appearance, what about others in the future? Not without penalty.

Although there are still many shortcomings, I can see the author's intentions, and this is one of the few articles in Tomato that I am interested in reading. I don't know if there are similar themes, but I think it is very novel. This is the first time I have seen it. I hope the author's writing will get better and better, and he will practice more emotional lines. Xiaobao [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss]