The Beast God's Pact

Very nice! The setting is very interesting, but I have a small suggestion: there are too many exclamation points, which makes people feel very excited (the writing is very good elsewhere, I hope the author will continue to work hard! ❛˓◞˂̵✧)

Thank you very much for coming to read my book as a novice writer There are always some small problems I hope you can help me find more thank you all again

The plot at the beginning is good and very attractive, but the rest of the writing is good, but there are too many words describing details and emotions. It could be a little more concise. There is also a lot of space for the emotional drama. I feel that I could write more about the career line. However, the article is written in such detail that I can see that it is very careful and the quality is good. Good review👍👍

The author writes well The story is very compact, with a few emotional lines but it's okay. It's a little one-sided in some places, but it captures the bond between the two. The logic is very strict.

Everything is good, but the physics is a bit hurt...

The introduction is quite good, and the plot is also good (but a bit boring for me (makes me sleepy))

Not bad, good, good, promising

Not bad, can't dwell on it.

It's very interesting, the setting is very attractive, and the article goes from shallow to deep, attracting readers to the depths bit by bit. In short, it's very interesting and recommended! !

Great work for the author [please update] The writing is very beautiful, why is there no one? Five-star praise and support [please update] [send heartfelt thanks]