Seer: The Elusive Lone Moon

The psychological journey is very well written, from the beginning when he broke the bottom line to survive and became a pawn of pirates, to when Mika gradually realized the darkness in his heart and changed it. Adopted Mika, from using him at the beginning to treating Mika as his partner later. I have only seen this much so far, and it can be said that the author has brought the characters to life. The development of the plot feels a bit slow now. There are a lot of descriptions about the time-traveling pirates. The perspective should be more focused on the protagonist. There is no need to write down the details of the time-traveling pirates themselves. After the protagonist saves the pirates, they can directly describe it. This is more concise and clear, because the male protagonist is also determined. If I hadn't read the introduction and spent so much space describing a time-traveling pirate, I would have thought he was the male protagonist.

It's very beautiful, and the descriptions and settings of the energy in it are also very interesting. Some things are described very delicately, but they are too rigid to describe and express. It makes you feel dizzy when you read it, as if you are not reading a novel, but a short composition. Also, the plot is a little slow.

Objectively speaking, the author of this book describes the climax and everything very well. It is a high-quality text by Seer. Even those who don't know Seer will enjoy reading it. Of course, the only drawback is that I personally think that the early stage is quite slow and has nothing to do with the Seer number. It is almost like the jungle of the jungle of another world. In addition, there are a few tricks to avoid boredom. For example, every crisis must awaken something, and then another crisis will come immediately after one crisis. Of course, this really fully reflects the cruelty of the jungle of the jungle. In addition, there is a part of the perspective that is always on Carlo (the pirate traveler), which some people may find a little uninteresting. But the author writes 10,000 words a day! With such high quality, what kind of bicycle do you want? (乐)

Actually, I want to ask when the light attribute switch in the protagonist's body that has not disappeared will be used. It was originally thought that this part of the light would be a balance for her to control the darkness after evolution, but it has no effect at all at the moment. I feel that the fruit and the potential in my body are both in the stage of being rejected or forgotten by the protagonist. Although there are actually no famous characters in the main line, the story of solving the protagonist's own problems and Mika's growth is very interesting, but I can't see how it will be solved in the end. How will TN 77 bring transformation to the protagonist in the end? Can the experiments they are doing now, the subject about fusion, help the protagonist complete the basically impossible transformation?

It was a pleasure to watch directly. The author was also very quick to care.

The writing is very delicate, and I personally think it's pretty good [laughs][laughs], but does Chimera have a light form in the later stage? 666 I haven't seen so many updates in a while, that's really great [laughs][laughs]

After reading it, I am looking forward to when the protagonist will start the next chapter. After all, CP has not appeared yet, and the volume is still very large. [Eat melon]

It looks good. Then the CP is Cassius? Before I watched the CP, I always thought it was Mika [face covering]

The writing is good, it's considered a top-notch Seer fanfic, but the picture of the protagonist elf is a bit... Ennn, I saw it based on my own imagination.

This author writes very well, and this book is also very interesting. I love it.