Did My Junior Sister Get Rejected When Giving a Gift Today?

Dear readers, thank you for clicking on this work. Before reading, I would like to share a few notes about this story with you: Regarding character growth: Yunchu is not a traditional heroine. She is a growth-oriented protagonist who started out as a pampered "group pet" and experienced cognitive shock and Taoist heart reshaping. As for Lu Nian, as the incarnation of Iceberg Snow Lotus, he was emotionally closed off in the early stage due to practicing the ruthless way. The changes of both of them need time to settle. They are all looking for possibilities beyond their own limitations - this may be a story about "shackles and transformation". About the narrative style: The early stage of the novel has a relaxed and humorous tone, and as the plot progresses, more complex world views and character relationships will gradually unfold. Some plots may appear exaggerated to create a contrast between cuteness and comedy, so please bear with me. Regarding reader feedback: I saw some very thoughtful comments, including: · "Is the heroine particularly licking?" - In fact, she is just struggling between system tasks and nature · "The plot is not spread out" - the world view will gradually unfold after the secret realm chapter · "Losing the Spinal Cord" – Parts of the plot do sacrifice logic for comedic effect This feedback is very valuable and I will continue to improve it in my subsequent writing. Reading suggestions: If you can accept: · Slow-heat two-way growth · A narrative that interweaves sand sculptures with seriousness · Imperfect but vivid characters You might as well give this story a little more time and follow Yun Chu and Lu Nian to see how they break the shackles and find their true selves. Every reader has unique reading preferences. If you find it not to your taste, we will meet again in the next book. If you are willing to stay, I will repay your trust with more attentive creations. A heartfelt thank you to everyone who gave this story a chance. ——Your authors sincerely (PS: When will Lu Nian realize his feelings? How will Yunchu truly grow? The answers to these all need to be found slowly in the story~)

Overall, it was good. The early stage was so sweet that I lost my Spanish. It was the senior sister who was rescuing the younger junior sister. It made me anxious all the time. You know how excited I was when I saw that they were getting married [crying]

Personally, I think the early stages of this book are well written, very joyful, the plot has its ups and downs, and in many places it feels like it has reached a point where it can be concluded directly. It's a pity that the author may want to write more plot or fill in the holes and force the continuation. The plot in the later stage is basically nothing interesting. After the senior sister fell into the demon, she made a decisive attack and killed all the sects that were watching the fire from the other side. But in the later stage, when some freaks jumped in front of her senior sister, she stopped killing them. The author has no clear direction for the later plot, and it feels like he is taking it one step at a time, and there is no end when it should be. However, this is still a novel worth reading.

Two heroines who love pure love and cultivate immortality! The charming and willful little junior sister and senior sister Bingshan are super good-looking and highly beneficial!

The front is not attractive. I read this book many times and could not get into it. I was exhausted, so I took it out and read it again, starting from the back! The storyline behind it is very attractive and the concept is interesting. All in all, for me, it's a good book that I was delayed by earlier [Salute] (Note: It's actually a bit cruel)

What a nascent system

I've been reading it for a long time, and I really feel that it's good. The novel about cultivating immortals is not necessarily worse than the more famous ones, but I just feel that the writing at the end is a bit lengthy, and it's good to end it in a timely manner.

It's worth recommending in itself, eh (omitted)

It feels okay, but the overall feeling is a bit white.

It's good-looking, growth-oriented, and the subject matter is very novel.