Transmigrate into The Grave Robbers' Chronicles: From the Start, I Refuse to Leave Er Yuehong's House

Overall, the upper ratio is less than the lower ratio and the lower ratio is more than enough. First of all, it can be seen that the plot is a newbie. Except for the first few pictures of the 8-year-old little flower, the latter probably follows the original premise and adds a person, thus deriving different dialogue plots. The writing is very smooth, but sometimes the preface does not match the postscript. I wonder if I deleted too much when revising the text. As for the character design, the protagonist himself is a student who traveled through time and became a cat demon. The system he brings is a money addict, and he takes the route of being a group pet. The system thinks he is a bit too picky. Originally, the system issues a task, and then the host completes the task, and the task points should be divided between two people. However, the task points here are all completed by the system, and the protagonist has no initiative. In addition, only the system can see the system mall, and the system is picky. If the protagonist is not allowed to do anything, it seems that the protagonist is very passive. Anyway, I personally dislike this. As for the protagonist, a clear college student climbed a mountain and died. Then he traveled through time and became attached to Xiao Hua'er. He met Wu Xie and Hei Xiazi, but nothing changed. Instead, he used time to jump directly to the beginning of the plot. He has not yet met Xiao Hua. As for updates, the average is two per day, at least that's what's displayed. In short, there is generally nothing too poisonous about it, so book lovers can feel free to read it.

It's okay, the plot connection is still a little flawed, but the interaction with Wu Xie and the others is pretty good. It is indeed better than the best, but more than the worst! The cook made a complete meal! Very good, just keep updating. In short, it's a fragrant meal. The author is awesome!

The author's writing is very nice, and the content is very interesting. Anyway, while I was reading it, I was thinking about when the protagonist would fall off his horse, but I don't know why the score is still so low. It should be a new article. I really love the author DaDa. He should read every comment carefully and most of the time he will reply to you (beautiful and kind or handsome author DaDa, why don't you reply to me quickly after seeing my rating? Oh woo woo, don't force me... Please). It's very nice.

So far it seems to be okay, there is no big problem, the protagonist is quite cute, but there are indeed a lot of typos, I look forward to losing the horse. Emmm... It's a bit embarrassing to play against the system. The system's emotional changes are not natural.

"Urgent Fu" I admire your splendor, and my heart beats with longing. I recall how amazing it was when I first read it, as if I was enjoying the spring breeze. The exquisiteness of the words is like the splendor of a brocade. Every time I unroll my scroll, I am meditating on it. I often waste my time eating and forget about it. He suddenly stopped writing and stopped working, which made everyone feel hesitant. I am tired of reading the old chapters, but I am eagerly looking forward to the new chapters. The day is late and difficult, the night is long but not yet young. Looking at the king's door, he hesitates, and he is anxious and hurts. You are so talented and virtuous, how can you allow your inspiration to be hidden? In the past, my writing seemed to be full of energy, so why am I so hesitant now? Don't be disturbed by worldly affairs and put aside trivial matters for a while. Quickly hold on and continue to work, soothing our hot intestines. I look forward to the new chapter coming out soon, just like the drought-stricken seedlings looking forward to the rain. If the beautiful chapter continues again, hit the knot and sing loudly. May you not hesitate again and show your talent to the fullest. I will look forward to it with eager anticipation, waiting for the masterpiece to come.

Good looking, good looking, good looking author, come on, come on I'm almost done with it now. I personally prefer something that's not too depressing. So since I've lived my life everywhere, why not start it again? I don't like any world, and I can't see what the meaning of life is. I'm forced to do everything. I don't like it personally. The front part is quite good, so I quit.

I have caught up with the latest chapter. The author's writing is smooth and natural, the structure is logical and the plot is ups and downs. It is a potential good book, but it has not completely fallen off the horse yet. I am really looking forward to the plot where Xiaohua recognizes the protagonist, and I hope it will come soon.

Don't listen to what they say. I just saw them saying that the system is stingy and prepared to avoid lightning, but I went in and read a few chapters. The system is also a good system. The male protagonist has no clothes to wear when he has to do a task, so he asked the system to buy him a set of clothes on credit. The system said that the male protagonist will pay back the debt later, but in fact he bought a waistband for the male protagonist because the male protagonist is a cat demon and loves to move. This waistband is very expensive. He was afraid that the male protagonist would have problems with his waist and get injured. The male protagonist was a cat at the beginning. In order to help him transform into a human faster, the system gave the male protagonist the first task: to get the Transformation Pill when he saw one of the black flowers in the bottle. Like the male protagonist doing the task, the system did not hesitate to open a teleportation array for him. Do you think it is possible for the teleportation array to not require the energy of the system? A group of people just put it there to avoid lightning without looking. It is really hopeless. What you see is real. Don't just listen to other people's nonsense. Blind eyes and blind mind. I only saw an arrogant and awkward system, not their so-called selfish system.

The plot is good, the writing is not particularly good, but it's not bad either (the following is my personal opinion) But! I want to say! Fewer typos! Fewer typos! Fewer typos! Fewer typos! Fewer typos! Fewer typos! Fewer typos! Fewer typos! Fewer typos! Fewer typos! Fewer typos! Fewer typos! Fewer typos! Fewer typos! Fewer typos! Fewer typos! Fewer typos! Fewer typos! Fewer typos! Fewer typos! Fewer typos! Fewer typos! Fewer typos! Fewer typos! Fewer typos! Fewer typos! Fewer typos! Fewer typos! Fewer typos! Fewer typos! Fewer typos! Fewer typos! Fewer typos! Fewer typos! Fewer typos! Fewer typos! Fewer typos! Fewer typos! Fewer typos! Fewer typos! Fewer typos! Fewer typos! Fewer typos! Fewer typos! Fewer typos! Fewer typos! Fewer typos! Fewer typos! Fewer typos! Fewer typos! Fewer typos! Fewer typos! Fewer typos! Fewer typos! There are so many typos and incorrect sentences in the previous chapters! ! ! I really should change it when I have time! It really affects reading the article (;¬д¬) Spray me with tonics

Don't have no cp, 1v4 is so good