Demon Slayer: Starting as Kaigaku

The psychological description of Yuan Yue Yue is very good, there is no big trap, and he is down to earth. The character of this version - Yue Yue is also very consistent with the character of the character, which is quite good. I don't know if it's a single heroine or multiple heroines. There is an original heroine, but Yue Yue-this article actually gave Magatama away? ! Watch Lei's Chuchu with caution.

It's good-looking, the psychological description of the protagonist is funny and cute, and he grows up relatively quickly. According to the protagonist's personality, there shouldn't be a female protagonist. As long as the emotional line is not forcibly added and it continues to be like this, it will be good. If it really doesn't work, you can mark it as an extra and write an if line and a love line like this.

A good meal is a reward! ! ! ! It is a potential stock, right? (? The psychological description of Yue Yue is very accurate and detailed. The author also studied this character carefully. The plot is reasonable and will not cause OOC or incongruity. After the Yu Guo chapter is over, Yue Yue will become a pillar, right? I am more curious about the pattern and meaning of the markings in the later period. The reading speed is too fast, I finished reading it in one night and I fell into it unconsciously... I look forward to updating my mouth.

The writing is very good, but Higake actually gave away the magatama. Also, I thought it was non-CP, but when I saw this, I felt that Mochizuki was CP. It's really my fault. I hope the author can add a label to indicate whether there is any CP? (Just expressing your own opinion, don't scold me, don't scold me) The author writes very well.

Very good article, Butterfly Ninja and Yue Yue are CP lightning protection

After watching the Demon Slayer movie, I was actually deeply impressed by what Zenitsu said when he used Fire Thunder God, "This move is for when you want to fight side by side with your senior brother." In the original work, when Yu Yue was a child, he helped ghosts eat people and got along with Zenitsu, or maybe after turning into a ghost, his grandfather committed seppuku. It really makes me feel uncomfortable, but this fanfic satisfies my inner feelings. It cleverly integrates the memory of Yugake, and the description of Zenitsu and others is also very close to the original work. At one point, I thought it might have been written by Teacher Crocodile's trumpet account. The psychological description of Yue Yue is very delicate. Although the pace speeds up at the end and may be a bit jumpy, I think this is a very good fanfic.

It was very interesting up to the ending, and it was well written to capture everyone's feelings. The ghost transformation line in the first if is also very interesting, but unfortunately the pace is too fast. But to be honest, the title and introduction are really not very attractive. The title "Start from..." Makes people think it is an infinite stream or role-playing or something, and the introduction is even more uncomfortable. Why should the time traveler have to atone for his sins without doing anything? Still destroyed physically and mentally? , I felt very aggrieved just by looking at the introduction. Those who didn't know better thought it was the kind of super disgusting story about abuse of the main character, haha. And the if line at the back, is it really written by the same author? Yu Yue is super OOC, the main family has become the main villain, and they are all bastards. The tragedy of Yushiro and Tama's reincarnated family is also written very clearly. There is a feeling of "Oh, why did you all die inexplicably", and I don't understand what I want to express.

Although it is written in the first person, the senses are not too bad. Secondly, although the writing style is not superb, it is not a novice either. After dissecting Demon Slayer's world view, some details are written very delicately, and every passerby and every character has its own existence. The meaning of "Demon Slayer" is that although it died, it still left a mark, and it is difficult to write as a fan novel. The author not only combined his own understanding of Demon Slayer, but also wrote something of his own. My personal evaluation is that if it is a fan novel, this is a superior work.

The author is undoubtedly a genius, his writing is very good, he has done his homework, and he has the potential to become a great master. This book feels a bit like The Loneliness of the Master and The Legend of the Great Sage to me, but more like Ta Ge Xing. Tagexing is an eunuch, and I recommended it to a friend of mine, but she would often criticize the books I read to her as being eunuchs, and occasionally she could only read half of it when I reviewed it [face covering]. So come on, eunuch, I will support you if I have the conditions, but now I am at a low point and I feel very uncomfortable.

It's very well written, and it's totally like Gōdake Hondake! The character design is very solid!