The Legend of Luo Xiaohei: Becoming Luye's Final Disciple

I personally think that the foreign persimmon Luye GL is the best looking among the fics😋 There is nothing to say about the writing style. The author has strong narrative ability, the plot is very interesting, and the original setting is very thorough, so it is very comfortable to read [Love]

The description is very good, Xuezhu's character is very distinct and very cute. Everyone in the little black world is not occ. The interactions between Infinite, Xiao Hei, Lu Ye and Master Xue and his disciples are very heartwarming. [Shy] Xuezhu is completely a native of Xiaohei's world. And judging from the great description, there are a lot of foreshadowings. There should be a big conspiracy behind it. I look forward to it [Like]

It's quite good-looking, and the characters are basically not OOC. It's a double-female story about Lu Ye and the original heroine. The writing is relatively fluent, and the master-disciple relationship with Lu Ye is quite heartwarming, and because the timeline is basically an original plot, it's good👌🏼. However, the timeline is a bit long at 100 chapters, and the emotional line has not yet been developed. The plot is a bit bland, but it's not like a movie or anime. The abrupt ending of the humor may be a little boring, but you can still taste the different flavors if you taste it carefully (everyone likes radish and green vegetables), and because the protagonist is young now, most of the main perspective in some chapters is in Luye. I hope the protagonist will grow up quickly and do more things with the protagonist. I'm too young now, so I can't see the attributes, but I'm more paranoid about being under 1 year old. [Like] [Like] [Smile] [Salute] (Also, I hope the author will update more. The update frequency is indeed a bit slow. Come on, come on!! Chef, cook quickly! I'm so hungry! I'm addicted to reading enough books)

This is one of the highest quality novels I've read. It's good and I love reading it (except for the short length, there are no flaws)

The characters are written with vitality. I haven't watched the movie, but I know a little bit about the characters. Anyway, the writing is pretty good. But now it's about 100 in this state, and I haven't seen the love line yet. Is it still considered early stage to take more than 100 pictures? Therefore, this book is suitable for not reading for a few days and then reading a dozen or so pictures. Otherwise, it feels like you can't poop and have constipation [face covering]

Well... It just looks good. Falling in love with Luye is very easy.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. The heroine is so cute, when will the relationship turn sour? When I stand on the top of the year, I am the most fragrant [Adoration]

I haven't read much, only nine chapters, and I can't wait to comment. First of all, author, you have only reached less than 100 chapters. It is understandable that few people have read it. Many people only like to read the ending, which also leads to low ratings and fewer people to read it. Secondly, your subject is the recently popular Luo Xiaohei, and it is also a dual heroine with a small audience. The popularity will not be too high, and the ratings will not rise. Finally, many novels with dual heroines are popular because of their own writing. I read your profile and have only updated one novel. I don't have any loyal fans. Your writing style is very good. As long as you stick to it, you will get better and better at Tomato!

I finally found the book about Senior Sister Luye! Or two heroines! ! Love it so much! ! !

The characters are well grasped, and it fits the image of the original work better. The plot logic is smooth, and the writing is acceptable. It is interesting and not embarrassing. It is worth watching and deserves five stars. [Praise]