The Legend of Luo Xiaohei: Retiring in Luo Xiaohei's World

I feel that the author is definitely not the kind of person who just writes articles. You can tell from the style of writing. Author, tell the truth, did you post on that platform? ʕ⊝ᴥ⊝ʔ The author's writing style is really good. It has a slight sense of happiness. I like it very much. But not many people seem to read it, come on, author! I believe that with your ability, you will be able to get good results on Yangshizi. If you don't, I won't contact you. Yangshizi is not the only platform where you can post. At worst, you can continue to post on another platform, but you must tell me which platform you are posting on. Otherwise, I won't be able to read your article and I won't be able to sleep all night long (bushi) Come on! I like you, author! 😘

This is a rare, gentle and healing article. After reading it, my heart is full of warmth. It is a high-quality fan article that can make people calm down and think about it again and again. The author's writing style is delicate and gentle, and the rhythm of the whole text is slow and moderate. There is no forced advancement of the plot, and there are no abrupt and bloody scenes. Every frame of the plot is delicate and healing. Character creation is the biggest highlight of this article. The author accurately captured the character core of the original character, without being OOC or exaggerated, and retained the original character and background of the character. The warm interactions filled on this basis are natural and sincere, and the delicate detailed descriptions make the characters come alive. The delicate companionship and tenderness between the characters are plain but touching. We can see the author's care and tenderness, using pen and ink to continue a stable and fulfilling time for his favorite characters. The full text is moderately sweet, full of warmth, and has a delicate and moving layout. It is a treasure worth reading over and over again. I sincerely recommend it with five stars and look forward to more excellent works from the author. Please keep reading, more and more people will like this book. [Working on draft]

A super nice book. I personally feel that it has the flavor of Luo Xiaohei's original work. It is warm and mixed with some humor. Especially the way the characters get along with each other and the description method are so right. It feels like a real parallel world of Luo Xiaohei. The heroine's sexuality The character is relatively rare, but it is really my favorite type. It is cold on the outside and hot on the inside. In my personal opinion, the heroine is really a gentle person. Every time she secretly adds amulets to others, it really makes my heart melt. Come on, I really like this book. By the way, are all the "all" characters in the profile "friendship" characters? [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]

It looks good. The main character is taciturn but a soft-hearted and cold-faced cute. Qing Ning is even more adorable. Except for the one who bought Naga, everyone is very nice. Wow, wow, wow, it's so good that I cried. Please update me on my daily life. Since I am a child king, I should be able to make a cameo in the series. . . (/~0~)/

The emotional description is very delicate, making people feel the same. The plot mainly revolves around the memories of the original work and the heroine's previous world. The scene narration and the expression of the characters' emotions are very contagious! I already like the teacher!

Please keep writing!!! I was so touched to finally have Luo Hei's main meal...

The overall impression is good, but there are too many pictures and descriptions of Laojun smoking, and I remember that Laojun is not a regular smoker (it has been a long time since I read it again, so I have forgotten it. I am sorry if I remember it wrong), but I have read a lot, so I still want to express my reading experience, and I think it is a bit weird to depict Laojun smoking (if my review is not good, you can say it, you can delete it, it is just an opinion)

The writing is very nice 😘😘, but some words are very tiring to read over and over again. For example, "It's not what" is repeated many times in this chapter. It could be reduced.

The plot is quite heartwarming, and the author's writing doesn't sound like a newcomer. It's worth a read.

The narrative and characters are both good, but the pace of the plot is a bit slow, and the main plot has not yet been reached. In the current daily life, I can't see much deviation from the direction of the original work.