Fate: The Betrayer of the Holy Grail Meets a Fool for Justice

While I've seen fanfiction featuring Caster and Emiya before, most of them downplayed some of their stubborn traits to create a stronger bond. This one, however, is the most faithful to their characters I've seen so far, with a strong Fate vibe. The text and the tragic ending also have a game-like feel. After reading so many Sanxingdui novels these past few days, I finally got a gold card in my guaranteed pull! (Tears of joy)

According to unofficial historical accounts, Ms. Nasu Kinoko secretly created a secondary account and provided additional content related to C-Mom on a certain domestic platform. 😏 Okay, jokes aside. Let's give a serious review. This is an excellent short story about C-Mom, depicting a delicate yet concise emotional arc within a limited word count. I think this is quite rare.

It's a good read, the emotions flow smoothly, and the characters are well-developed. The bad ending makes the main character, Shirou, more three-dimensional and makes his actions more understandable. In this storyline, Shirou's growth isn't focused on Unlimited Blade Works (UBW) but rather on strengthening his magic and solidifying his beliefs.

Excellent! The character settings are very close to the original work, the story development is logical, and it's very original. ❤️❤️❤️ Personally, I only found the details of Archer's fight against Gilgamesh a bit odd. Gilgamesh should have been doomed after activating his Unlimited Blade Works (UBW), yet he still had the leeway to unleash his Ea.

It's great! The character designs are very faithful to the source material and there's no OOC (out-of-character) feel. The plot also has the feel of the original visual novel, like reading a side story. After reading it, I feel like I can even ship Shirou and Caster! It's rare to find such a good Fate fanfiction.

Great stuff. I feel like this is what real fanfiction should be—no extraneous outsiders, just the "what if" scenarios that readers want to see.

That's fantastic! Shirou's encounter with Caster (Caster) and the two kindred spirits letting go of their past pain through love—Shirou becomes the guardian of the Holy Grail for love, beginning a new future. Different from the original, but equally brilliant. However, the good ending was too happy, and it differed too much from the true ending. In the true ending, Blue Rain was completely useless and only symbolic.

A fantastic short story, completed in 61 chapters. It's an "what if" scenario where Shirou Emiya, instead of his teacher, finds Medea, and it features a single female lead, Caster. The story uses a first-person perspective with dual viewpoints, switching between Shirou's and Medea's, to unfold a unique Fifth Holy Grail War narrative.

It's a pretty good novel, and the characters aren't too out of character. The story is just too short, but it still feels very much like the original work. It would be great if there were some romantic scenes! 😜 (Although I know that given Emiya Shirou's personality, he would never have a harem.)

It's very well written, with a flavor very similar to the original Fate/stay night fanfiction. The tone is just right for me; the romance is well-defined, sweet without being cloying. The story outline also shows it was carefully conceived, resulting in excellent resolution of all foreshadowing elements. It's one of the best Fate/stay night fanfictions I've ever read.