Dragon Raja V: The Return of the Departed, Continued

It's not too much to give the author four stars, hahahaha!

Come on, even though it is different from the original work, it is still a good fan. After all, the world view of the Dragon Clan is really big. It is impossible for a fan to be perfect. Some places are not well connected. Qisa's autobiography feels a bit long, but it is also very interesting. The story is quite enjoyable. Judging from the author's description, the friendship between the author Ke Lu Mingfei and his senior brother is well described in the article and can be reflected. I also quite like the friendship between the two of them. I haven't finished reading it yet, I only saw the autobiography of Qi Sa, but I feel that Lu Mingze in the early stage seems a bit OOC, probably in that car, Lu Mingfei didn't agree, Lu Mingze took over his body, but later in the chess stage of the black dragon and white dragon (it seems to be the ultimate place in the world), it was good. Overall, it's good, and the best thing is that it's finished! 🥳 After reading it, I will talk about the advantages and disadvantages of this book. My tone may be a little harsh, so let me talk about it in advance😵 First of all, for me, this book is divorced from the original work, and this book is a "continuation" of a "fan", so I think it is not advisable to break away from the original work, but as I said in my last comment, the world view of the Dragon Clan is relatively large, so it is okay to break away from it. After all, it is a fan, and it is understandable 😘o(o･`з･´o)ﾉ!!! But if it is according to my thoughts, I always I feel that Lu Mingfei and Lu Mingze deviated from the original work. Lu Mingze seemed to be OOC in the early stage. Lu Mingfei didn't agree, so Lu Mingze took over his body and suppressed Lu Mingfei. In my eyes, Lu Mingze is not like this. He seems to be a brother control~ In the later period, it is normal. Lu Mingze is really good, but some of his things are a bit "big"~😈. It is mentioned here that Lu Mingfei and Lu Mingze are "twins" but it seems that is not the case (who told the old Jiangnan thief not to update and fill in the holes😭) Let's talk about Caesar's autobiography. It's very good. I was very moved when I read it. But it's too long. The author wrote more than a dozen chapters in a eloquent manner, which was a bit annoying for me to read. Also, Senior Brother and Xia Hong are the third level of Lu Mingfei's resurrection. I understand the author's desire to make up for his regrets. , I also hope to make up for it, but it is not advisable to be too long. For me, three or four chapters are the most for a plot like this, but the author wrote nearly ten chapters (maybe wrong, I didn't count) mainly in this place. I want to know if Lu Mingfei will be resurrected? Will "Father" be written to death? What would happen if Lu Mingfei was resurrected? Will he merge with Lu Mingze? 🤔... Many questions make me a little impatient with these sweet things (Sorry, sorry, sorry😥) The wedding of Lu Mingfei and Hui Liyi later made up for the regret😊 But at this time the author made a big joke for me - it's all over To be honest, when I saw the ending, I felt unbelievable, like I was about to see the climax! We are about to reach the hottest place! But gave me a sudden ending? ! We have been preparing for this for so long, isn't it just for this moment? The foreshadowing laid before has not been filled in! 😡In "A Thousand Years of Loneliness, Twins Screaming", the description of Lu Mingfei and Lu Mingze is the brotherhood in my imagination, because the little devil is the brother control! Lu Mingfei can't live without the little devil, right? After being resurrected in my imagination, I would first do all those old guys, and then deal with some of the other things behind. Lu Mingfei must be similar to the Dragon King, and then the academy will probably not accept him anymore. After all, Anger hates the dragon clan very much, and then Lu Mingfei will stay away from the academy and become the lonely king, which is also the "Blood Sorrow". (◞‸◟ ) The author replied to me that he didn't dare to write it, but Dragon Clan itself is a tragedy, isn't it? If you want to write, write towards the original work, towards the tragedy, instead of forcing an ending or a good ending. This makes me particularly annoying (sorry😭) and makes me feel a strong sense of separation😰 This comment represents my own point of view, and it took me about half an hour to write. Please feel free to scold me if I find anything wrong (／_＼) Finally, I would like to say that the tone may be harsh. Author, if you feel uncomfortable, I am sorry, sorry, sorry＞∧＜

I hope the author will continue to work hard and keep writing, come on

The most comfortable sequel fanfic I have seen so far. Previously, the characters and combat power settings of the original work were abandoned. One person used three or four word spirits. Lu Mingfei directly gave a complete list of word spirits.

Awesome, no lie

The writing is great. . This is the most beautiful Dragon Clan fanfic I have ever seen.

Personally I think it looks pretty good

Is this already the end? It's a little hard to accept [crying]

Thanks to the author for finishing the follow-up to Dragon Clan, allowing readers to realize their childhood dreams.

Good health, good health, good health