With Flowers, Death; With Wind, Life

It has a sense of old-time literary youth, and the writing style is delicate and green. It can be seen that the author is actually writing it for the first time, but the characters are described in a very three-dimensional and prominent manner, and the title of the book is full of poetry, which makes the whole novel full of hazy and dreamy colors, which is more in line with the theme of Western fantasy. At the same time, the description is relatively real, which can make people think. (The only drawback is that the plot is a bit delayed, but this is also an advantage. It is otherworldly and independent of the tomato environment, which makes people's eyes shine!)

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This is indeed one of the more unique novels I have read recently, and it is very popular among readers, so I will express my humble opinion. 1. The writing style is good. Although the author seems to be a senior high school student, he unexpectedly has his own characteristics in this aspect. It is a bit green but delicate. It is probably quite good at describing what the author imagined. 2. The style is fresh and very much in line with the pastoral side of Western fantasy (especially the first volume). It is similar to the sense of leisure brought by Fulian (I feel that the author also intends to rely on this aspect). The pace is slightly slower but overall it does not feel too stressful. 3. Character presentation. In this aspect, it can be seen that the author really wants to bring each specific character to life, especially represented by Phantom Light. The long psychological monologue completely reflects the growth and mentality changes of the characters. Other characters also left a certain impression on me. The fact that they have corresponding distinctive brain portraits shows that the author's description is quite strong. 4. It's very good in daily life, and it just feels good to my appetite. I won't go into details. Personally, I think the look and feel is not good enough: 1. Excessive psychological confessions. Although I know that the author probably wants to express Huan Guang's inner loneliness and a certain prejudice against the world, but there are too many images, and the "rules" (this type of psychological monologue is specially broadened by "") seem to have had some counterproductive effects, making people a little impatient. I suggest that you don't need to write a large number of paragraphs, just reflect it in your daily life like other chapters. 2. The integration of memes is unnatural, because it can be seen that the author has put a lot of effort into writing, and his attitude is very serious, and even has a certain meaning of literary creation. Considering the age of the author, there is a problem here. Especially the hot memes on the Internet sometimes make me feel stiff and out of touch (even though it may have something to do with the setting) 3. In terms of settings, I won't go into details about this. The author probably has his own arrangements, but it's just that the performance of individual characters is a bit confusing at the moment. Overall it's fine. The above comments are subject to wisdom. I think the author's literary creation has a certain degree of seriousness. I just express my own opinions based on this. By the way, if the author is in a tight schedule, he should put his studies first. The most important thing in writing novels is not to give up, and not to let other major events lead to giving up. In that case, it will be a big loss to both the readers and the author. [Off-topic] Note: Only read the first volume

The writing is quite good. If I maintain the current quality, I will probably get a 9 points to start with.

The writing is very beautiful, and the characters' emotional portrayals are also very delicate. It's just a little short, and the story has just begun. I ordered the author to quickly update a hundred chapters so that we can read it thoroughly.

Forget it, just be alive. I first discovered it in 2025 and didn't read it because there were only a few pictures at that time. Now I found it again. I couldn't help it. I looked at the update rate and felt like I didn't want to continue reading. There are quite a lot of words and it's quite engaging. There are more than 50 pictures. It took me three days to read it. But sometimes, the protagonist's personality changed too much. However, the author is smarter in using different personalities to write it. In other words, there will be some character changes that can be rounded off using this setting. Generally speaking, it is pretty good. However, if you want to write the number of 2,000 pieces, I don't know if you can wait until this time in this life.

The writing is very good, and the writing style is also good. I really like the way the male and female protagonists get along, and I also like the male protagonist's personality, which is cold on the outside and hot on the inside. There are just too few and it's not enough to read. I hope the assignments will be updated soon.

If you keep writing at this level, you will be guaranteed to win 9.5. The writing is really good😆The author scares me to death by writing ten chapters in a day

I received the book recommendation message and was attracted by the title. After reading 14 chapters, Extras 1 and 2 (especially Extra 2) were directly attracted to me. The writing style is also amazing. But isn't the data in this book too bleak (no rules for good books?). Give it five stars first and then let me savor it carefully😋

The author's writing style is very good, with a subtle warmth in daily life, and the shyness of youth and the beauty of life.