The Alley: I Became Lin Dongzhe's Daughter

Super pretty! Completely in line with the original character design of the alley family, this is what the children of Lin Dongzhe and Zhuang Xiaoting should look like! Each character is very three-dimensional and has the feeling of being a group of people in an alley. I beg the author to update it more! ! ! !

My favorite type, cheerful but not depressing, I finished it happily, but I hope to make more efforts to read more, it's not enough.

I originally thought it would be a light-hearted, joyful and non-depressing novel. The part about my childhood was really interesting. The setting of traveling through time and becoming Lin Dongze's daughter was also very interesting. It was very enjoyable and immersive to watch. But as I grew older, the plot became more and more boring, with the best characters popping up one after another, either jealous or deliberately looking for trouble. The banker and the Xiang family had so many troubles that it made people feel panicked, and the warm and cheerful feeling at the beginning was completely gone. But the author is really good at writing about childhood and alley atmosphere, and the character creation is also very clever. It can be seen that he is writing derivatives with great care! The previous plot is really eye-catching, and it can be seen that the writing and rhythm are very good! I hope that the sequel will be less sad and more enjoyable and sweet, and don't let the protagonist suffer anymore. I believe you will be able to bring the plot back to a comfortable rhythm and continue to have a warm and relieving follow-up!

It's so good! It's the best "Alley People" fanfic I've ever read. It's just not finished yet. I beg the author to update it more! [Adoration]

The writing is very good and makes people want to keep reading. The heroine has a good character. The interactions between Dongzhe, Xiaoting and Song Ying Lin Gong are very warm. The heroine is very smart and there is nothing that makes her look angry. The author is not good at making up names. Many girls' names are all repeated words, including the heroine's name. There is also a lot of female rivalry. After a few chapters, a girl quarrels and then resolves it. After a few chapters, another girl quarrels (there are also many boys who come to cause trouble). But not as many as girls) Another thing is that I like to enchant the male protagonist. The female protagonist's grades and Mathematical Olympiad are not as good as those of the male protagonist. But these are minor flaws. The book is generally very interesting and I couldn't stop reading. It's just that Huang Ling's character and behavior are not as brilliant as in the drama. It just looks like a background board, which is very boring.

They are beautiful and Zhen Zhen and Tong Xue are also very cute. I hope they can become lifelong good friends.

This book is very heartwarming and everyday, and the writing style is also very good. I highly recommend reading this book! This book is mainly written around the daily life of the heroine as she grows up, and there is no mistake in the book! I really like the friendship between the heroine and her best friend Tong Xue, and the cp with my best friend Fu Sinian. But my younger brother is always being stupid, which makes me want to beat him! ! Also, at every stage of the heroine's growth, there will be some cute and fun-loving little characters, but the heroine is not accustomed to it throughout the whole process. (The heroine is super excellent, beautiful and kind-hearted, not a fake virgin, just hate it if she doesn't like it.) So it doesn't affect the perception of the novel at all. Those little Karami who appear just add fun to the heroine's life [laughing]

I hope Zhen Zhen can enjoy youth, life and love in the future (multiple paragraphs, never give up a forest for a tree [Adoration])

After watching the ending of the original play, everyone thought that only the old Zhuangjia and Xiaozhuang could not be described in words. After watching this continuation, they found that those who were close to the dealer were all in words. The daughter-in-law Fu Di married by the dealer and the daughter married by the dealer were not so clear-headed. The idea of ​​buying pigs to watch in a pen makes so much sense!

There are many excellent things in the book, so read it rationally and don't make yourself angry.