After Witnessing Pangu Create the World, the Retired Geo Archon Wanted to Slack Off

After reading about ten chapters, I don't feel that there is anything poisonous about it. The world view should belong to a relatively low-end prehistoric world. The author may not know much about some settings and so on. After all, he is the protagonist and has the green light. Cool article, not too brainless, four stars for encouragement [like]

It looks good. Compared with most of the shoddy Liushuihuanghuang novels nowadays, it looks much better. It feels like I have gone back to a few years ago. [Praise]

It is different from other novels I have read. It feels like reading a classical Chinese novel. Just like watching Journey to the West, it has an unknown charm. Anyway, it's... Just magical. Anyway, I like this very much. There are lengthy explanations for every sentence and everything. Even though things move at a fast pace, it doesn't feel rushed, it just feels compact.

The emperor of the prehistoric worldview is so handsome! The discussion and understanding are superb, and I feel that the author has given the emperor a big trick! Only inferior to Hongjun. I wandered around the world, created the world version of the Chensong Pot, and fished many creatures from the calamity. It's a bit strange that the cave is built in the East China Sea. The emperor himself should love the mountains more, but considering that the ancient land is too chaotic, it is normal to write it like this. It's just that I fell into the trap too early. The process of reading the Teyvat chapter must be very long. I should wait until it is finished before reading it! (Sad and sad) I thought it was over just by reading the chapters, but it turned out that I haven't even finished the first step yet, and it's so painful to catch up on the update. TAT

Good-looking, love to see, want to see I just accidentally clicked on this book at first, but when I saw it was recommended by me, I took a few glances at it and realized: eh, it's not bad. So I read it slowly. It was a long time ago when I first read this book, but there was no review. This is the second time I clicked in and added a book review by the way. There are still many advantages to this book. It almost restored Zhongli in my heart. The content I have seen is not feminine or ambiguous to greasy, so I am quite satisfied. As for shortcomings, there aren't any big shortcomings so far. Let me read the update and then add comments. After reading a few book reviews, I first went to read the last few chapters. The first part was okay, but the second part can be summarized as follows: it captures the arrogance of Yuan Long, but loses the tenderness of the emperor.

It's well written, not a cookie-cutter upgrade stream.

I usually give a grade after reading the entire text, but now that I have read 200+ chapters, I feel I have some qualifications and can give a grade first~ As the Emperor Du Wei, I personally feel that this book is getting better and better. It is a male version. It focuses on the gentleness of the divorced father and his leisurely travels in the world. There are also many stories of cats and cats having fun in various places (accidents?)~ And it's 200 chapters, and it's still mainly about Lili. There are no messy side plots, side plots, side plots, side plots, and outsiders ~ and there are no messy nicknames (this is really important to Du Wei. Many articles are just a nickname to persuade me to reject it. Although I know the author is just joking, Du Wei can't see those!) ~ And there are no messy emotions~ In the early stage, the author may be a little constrained due to the different power systems of the two worldviews. Some cats in Cat Dragon are sneaky~Hold on~ It gets better as you go to the back, especially after Cat Dragon has established its path(?)~ In short, there is no loss in investing~ Please put your knee down first, please, there won't be any accidents for me to comment on later. . .

Except for the fact that Zhongli is a bit OOC, the rest of the story is okay. The author has changed some of the settings of the prehistoric era, eliminating the catastrophe of the ferocious beast, and some characters were born too early. All in all it's pretty good, it depends on how the author writes it

The author's writing style is very good, and the book is also very beautiful, but I feel that I have forgotten what I wrote before, and there are often repetitions or parts of the book [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] Give me four stars to encourage you, and you can continue to improve.

I am the Great Holy Mandrill to subdue demons. The Emperor Yan Wang has passed away, and the demons are ready to take action. Liyue is in urgent need of immortal protection. Please give me 16,000 rough stones to help me obtain the He Pu Yuan. After the demons are eliminated, you will become the next Tianshu Star, holding the power of heaven on your left and the jade scale on your right [Note] Good looking [like]