I Became a Snake and Worked Hard to Cultivate Immortality

It's good-looking, and what you want is this kind of feeling. It's different from the ordinary two-men, with a bit of a male channel's cool writing style, but it also has the emotional spice of a female channel, and also has a career line. Nice

The double strength is not a lie, and it is also a cultivation-based upgrade stream. It is super, super, super good-looking👍👍👍The emotional line is not a bit sad at first glance, and the description of the fight scenes is so irritating that I memorized 50 words after reading it [laughs]

Five stars is not the upper limit of it but the upper limit of the platform. Isn't it a well-deserved five-star article? ! I want to write a long review to praise you! [Laughing][laughing][laughing] The story about cultivating immortals has a faint sense of a male channel, it's neither bloody nor boring. It's been a long time since I've seen such a cool story with two male protagonists in a female channel! The interaction between the main CP is also very warm, growing up like enemies quarreling over each other. [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts] The author's writing style has a sense of ancient style. Looking at the whole article, the words in the paragraphs are advanced but not exaggerated, and have good white space art. The plot progresses smoothly and is passionate but not brainless like Long Aotian. All the points are well grasped and in place. [Love][love] At the moment, it feels like a senior brother and his two junior brothers traveling around to level up and fight monsters. It's a heartwarming story, but it doesn't lose its passion for martial arts. It's hard to find such cool writing on female channels even with a lantern. [Sending my heart] From only a dozen chapters to now, I hope the plot written by the author will get better and better, and that Chu Jing and Qi Shi will get better and better [Sending my heart][Sending my heart](ps: The author will write it quickly, I hope I can see the final chapter in the summer vacation of 2026 [crazy][crazy]) As for the emotional line of the main CP, it's like the long-flowing life I've always liked. I have seen your growth, your past, but now we are fighting side by side. If it weren't for Chu Jing, Qi Shi's fate would have been annihilated in the first secret realm. But destiny changed the situation, and the appearance of Chu Jing made Qi Shi return to being a genius boy, and his destiny also changed. Just like after you appeared, I was no longer disappointed, and all bad luck dissipated because of your appearance. My destiny changes because of you, and everything about me exists because of you. This ultimate sense of pull and atmosphere, paired with sincere feelings, makes it hard not to cry. Summary: Sisters who like martial arts and immortal literature can go for it! No loss in investing!

Yes, it is a female channel with a male flavor, non-traditional and weak, Snake (0) has always been strong, and is currently guiding the male protagonist (1) to improve his strength. The fighting scenes are also exciting, and the emotional line is relatively slow, but I like it. Come on, the author [Learned]

Why isn't it popular if it's so well writtenヽ(._°)ノ? It's an orthodox fairy tale about people who transform into animals. I love the character design very much and it's very charming. I ate up the loyal dog who is a little young and young. I didn't forget the main plot and emotional line. It was a natural thing and they connected with each other so I held hands. The plot was also written very well. This writing style made me fall to my knees. The pace is very good, although the world view is unfinished now, but it doesn't feel like you're a Riddler in two steps. It's really not easy to find this book among the swarms of system books. I was almost persuaded by the ratings to give it a try. I went to shock the deliciousness. The plot and emotional lines are well written, and the protagonist's character is very cool. I'm really excited about it (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡

I don't comment much. In summary, there are no weird points. It has a strong male channel flavor (the sentence "Brother Snake fucked me back to male channel [laughing and crying]" and the description of the battle is also very good), and there are some female channels inserted (I don't know how to count it as a female channel, but you will know if you go in and take a look. What am I talking about? That's what I mean anyway. Chu's appearance is also great in the pictures. Very good-looking.), The two channels are very natural, Qi Shi has a lot of tricks (it just feels a bit unsafe, it is not safe in the first place! [Smile]) Chu, just spoil him. The 16-year-old Qi Shi is childish in front of Chu Jing, (in modern times, he is only about the age of a junior high school student). He is very cute, and the bickering between the two is also very interesting. Chu is currently Shi's guardian, right? It is a guidance type. (? Called brothers, friends?) Good-looking, really. The plot is not cliched either. It's a good thing to be motivated! (Qi: I don't care, I want to form a golden elixir! The battle between the foundation and the golden elixir is also a classic male video, Long Aotian [like]) I really like the two of them in the youth competition (just watching the warriors, I remember it is a youth competition, I can't remember the specific name, haha 😃) in order to get the first place (Chu: looked at the prize [like] The plan has changed [punch out] you go and do them and get the first place [punch out] [like]) The protagonist has a brain. There are no emotional scenes yet, but it doesn't affect the viewing experience and feels more natural to me (I also think they are suitable for long-term relationships and long-term love. Don't criticize, it's just a personal opinion, OK) The sad thing is that it is being serialized [crying]

It's wonderful. In terms of writing, I can only say that I finally struck gold. As for why I deducted one star, it's because Zhu Yun gave it to the protagonist after his rebirth. Maybe it's because I am the protagonist controller. Zhu Yun wanted to kill the protagonist but didn't. So why should the protagonist raise it? I don't understand. I'm really disgusted. Other than that, I personally don't think it's poisonous [laughs]

It gives me a faint smell of male porn, and I look forward to the author's continuation.

It's very beautiful, it has the feel of a man's cool novel, and the writing style is also nb. The battles are vividly described, not stiff. There is nothing to read at the moment, as long as the rest of the book doesn't end badly and the feeling remains in the middle, it will be alive. The emotional scenes are not obtrusive and delicious🤤It's so cute that it doesn't feel weak or strong.

It took me a day to read it, and I couldn't stop. To be honest, when I first read the book reviews, I saw some people saying that the plot behind it was boring. I thought about it and hesitated for a while, but in fact, it was not okay at all. Every plot connection is very meaningful, step by step, and the characters of the young couple really hit my xp. In the early stage, the two of them slowly upgraded to fight monsters. The taste of the male channel is very good, and the transition of the emotional lines is also very natural, as if it comes naturally, and the stories of the ancestors are also very touching. The world view gives people a feeling that it can't be more awesome. When the two young lovers grow up, the subsequent plot is also paving the way for the decisive battle. One link after another, I go, the final wedding of the young couple is sweet to me.