Harry Potter: You Can Repay My Kindness by Falling in Love with Me

I really want to know how many JK Rowlings the author eats in one meal... The writing is so on point, the light humor and the feeling of an adolescent boy... I really want to rush to the author with a pale face and take a few bites of the author and then stick my head into the author's manuscript box to take a look. So beautiful, Ji Xing Di Zhao, who are you... JK Rowling is known as Xiao Ji Xing Di Zhao ()

The setting of the heroine is particularly novel - Quidditch commentator. I have never seen this setting in HP fanfics before, and the author also writes it very professionally (I really doubt that the author has played Quidditch). The heroine is particularly charming, smart and decisive whether she is explaining Quidditch or playing Quidditch. The relationship development with the male guests was also very natural. It didn't feel like industrial saccharine. When I saw that clip, I would naturally say something. In addition to love, the friendship with Pansy is also written very naturally. The little awkwardness between adolescent girls is really sour and delicious. And I think the author is very good at describing scenes? (I'm not sure if this is it), when I wrote about the scene where the Slytherins celebrated in the lounge after Slytherin won the Quidditch House Cup, I was so overwhelmed with joy that I wanted to cheer for them even if I wasn't a Slytherin. . I'm going to write this much for the time being. It's expected to be a long story. I guess I'll forget the previous plot and watch it again in the later stages, so I'll give it a stable score of 9 first, and then I'll review it after it's finished [please update]

Huge Huge Huge Looks Good! It's been a long time since I've seen such a good-looking first-person HP story. I didn't see it from God's perspective. The content felt very everyday and real. There was no OOC, and the sense of immersion was particularly strong. It also reversed everyone's stereotype of this kind of protagonist as "wooden". After all, from the perspective of the heroine, I really can't understand what the boys are doing. Especially the light and casual sense of humor, which is funny but not cliché. Moreover, the plot starts from the third grade. Who knows this age point? It is really grasped just right. It especially poked me. After all, I didn't start falling in love like an adult at the age of eleven or twelve! Moreover, the teacher writes the characters very delicately, and directly and indirectly understands the psychology of the characters from all aspects. Although there are no big actions, the small ambiguities between the male protagonists and the female protagonists are fully reflected, especially the part where Blaise is wow wow wow, especially the part about copying the family rules. The cautious sense of immorality is overflowing, and I really want to fall into a trap. The only fly in the ointment is that it's too! Too little!!!! Not! Enough! Look! ! ! Teacher, write quickly, write quickly, write quickly, I open my mouth to beg for rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice Don't miss it if you pass by, the Quidditch plot is superb! ! ! Sijia is so charming, and each character has extremely distinct characteristics, which are truly unique among HP novels. Lucky star, who are you... You are simply the Rowling of HP online literature.

It's amazing, and the most authoritative one is the confrontation between Blaise's pseudo-bone and Harry. Well, actually I like everyone What's special about this book is the setting that Harry has a vicious tongue, which is very rare in HP fan fiction, and the Quidditch writing is also very passionate. After reading it, I was so obsessed with this book that I couldn't find an equally good-looking setting even after searching through Tomato. For those who were persuaded to quit from the beginning of the third grade, please stay and read it. It is really beautiful and the writing is really different! Each chapter has something I really like. Author, please update! ! !

This book is so in line with my taste. It starts with a third-grade heroine who is so charming that she doesn't even know she is stupid (I love her so much!!!). The emotional line is very delicate and I fell in love with it inexplicably right away. The heroine's personality is very charming. I also fell in love with Scarlett while reading the article. Every male protagonist is super delicious. I will eat whoever is mentioned in the article. After reading the original novel, I said that the male protagonist is not OOC at all. After two days, I said that my nasolabial folds have deepened a lot (the interaction is really sweet, and there is no obligation not to rub). It is a very normal view of love, and each has its own deliciousness. Upper-year group: Straight-ball player Wood (Chapter 235 must be used with the recommended BGM. Substituting Wood will really make you love Scarlett for a lifetime), considerate Said (gentle senior, completely guiding lovers, warm and caring), Percy (hot Nerd type, currently: What should I do if I fall in love with my good friend Crush? I can't handle it well~), Fred & George (Fred is really fighting and fighting, very free and easy, but he is surprisingly reliable when it comes to Scarlett. George was still a bystander in the early stage, but he was also fascinated). The same age group: Theodore (who always understands what Scarlett wants to express, has a tacit understanding, prefers action to prove it rather than talking about it, and has many mysteries), Blaise (I won't tell you what the gold content of the fake bone is, my brother is a natural husband... Very dignified, but why won't I tell you behind my back, the subconscious behavior of my brother and sister is very poignant), the arrogant Draco (who is flammable and explosive to people who like Scarlett, has an awkward speech but is very honest physically) , the little dragon who can open his screen), the confrontation with Harry on the track (while others have already entered the track and run a long way, poor Harry is still anxious outside the track, with a venomous tongue and a bit of a slander. How can the number one most hated person not be the first? It is also delicious), Ron (what should I do if I fall in love with my brother's rival?) There is also a male protagonist (right?) Who appears in a few chapters and then loses his role (what a tragedy for a male). Each emotional line has its own value. In addition to the emotional line, the friendship and the interaction between the colleges are also very well portrayed in the article, and the supporting characters also have their own characteristics. Highly recommended! This is not the first hp book I have read in 🍅, but it is indeed the first one where I have read all the contents completely without skipping any works. As a result, it is almost boring to read other books after reading this work, because this one is all based on my preferences. Please keep updating it, it's really beautiful! Looking forward to what follows. Prepare to re-read and write a better book review next time.

It's rare for you to see an author with such mature writing skills on Tomato. I almost wonder if the author has started a small account. The author has obviously thought about the outline carefully, which makes the whole book read very smoothly and the rhythm is very well controlled (at present, it seems that it is mostly daily oriented, with little involvement in the main plot of the original work. I don't know how it will be written after Voldemort returns). In addition to the logical and self-consistent story and character behavior, the author's handling of the ignorant emotions of boys and girls is also excellent... It is not deliberate, and it naturally reveals the personality differences of the characters, as well as the seemingly non-existent "sense of distance" (and the protagonist has a very strong subjectivity, she is a very individual girl, and probably everyone will like her (especially readers)). * Some digressions: In fact, I really like reading novels that are not deeply connected to the main plot... I think the charm of the original author (this kind of subject) lies in this. She is showing us another side of the magical world. This is not only Rowling's and Harry's magical world, but also our magical world that countless people are looking forward to... I am very grateful to the author for bringing us such an excellent work. From what the author said, it seems that the author went out to play. I hope the author has a good time! Then come back for more... (Devil Whispering)

I think this book can become the first novel in HP fanfiction. It is rare for an author to write 800,000 words without breaking the style, and the heartthrob will have a bit of Mary Sue, but this book is acceptable. I will recommend this book when I have time. It is really well written, and the first person seems to be very smooth. I am looking forward to the follow-up. After all, the heroine's character should not be like joining Voldemort's camp, but the friends around her may not. I feel that the heroine fakes her death and changes her identity to secretly plan the plot.

I have read a lot of heartthrob-type hp fanfics, but the emotional lines in this book are too relaxed. Some heartthrob novels look too Mary Sue and you will get tired of them after reading too much. This book is very good. It has a sense of youthfulness for boys and girls, mainly because the heroine has a lot of personal charm. The author's writing style is also very good. It will not make people think that the writing is a sloppy account or a novice. It is good to read.

Emotional scenes are actually quite to my liking, especially the fake-boned parts. But the character's personality is untenable, and the Snake Yard OOC is actually nothing. But, how should I put it, especially for the female protagonist, the double standards in details will be very embarrassing. It's okay to have shortcomings, but some shortcomings will not make the character attractive but will make the character a bit lousy. Let's say 8.5.

So cool! The dialogue is natural, the person pronouns are correct, the plot flow is not OOC at all, the emotional connection is very strong, the personality of each character is very obvious, the heroine's personality is also very good, although it is not a typical Snake Yard personality (but it is consistent with it), the various scenes can immediately come to mind, especially what makes me sigh is the dialogue inside, which is very natural, as if the characters are really talking! Awesome