I Just Became a Cripple, and My Yandere Disciple Says She Wants Dual Cultivation

The novel is very concise and clear. The protagonist travels to a master who failed to overcome the tribulation and lost all his cultivation. After being surrounded by a group of yandere apprentices and old lovers, he begins to teach and train [laughter] oh yes, it's out [cool] No, I mean you came out of the dark room, what the hell are you guys thinking [face covering] In fact, they are the same person before and after time travel, they are both a "man" [laughter] Although there are more and more flaws, I will live with this setting for the rest of my life. [Cool] Hey hey hey, why haven't you reached the next "climax" yet?

It is an extremely rare harem story because the others have been blocked. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

It took me three nights to read the entire book, but it didn't end? With so many chapters, the characters are very full, not that they are special, they look quite comfortable, but there are too few normal people. Ji feels that after reflection, he has become more normal. The only bad point is that the author often inserts a sentence in the article that the protagonist's soul was a man. It feels unnecessary. I read Lily just to read Tie Tie, and read BG's own novels. If it is to make up the word count, pretend I didn't say it. Very good novel Still good

I will not give a bad rating to any book that I can read, but let me say a few more words. For me, this Lily novel is good, but the biggest shortcoming is (the following is just a very narrow personal feeling): the pace is slow, and not just slow, it can be said to be stagnant, especially emotionally. Metaphorically speaking, it is like a person digging a tunnel and digging all the way down, but not digging forward. Moreover, I feel that some parts have appeared two or three times in the short period of more than 200 chapters that I have read, and they are relatively repetitive. This is complementary to the shortcoming above. The two made me feel a little irritable while reading. The second problem is the content of the book, especially the problem of the protagonist Yue Ling (not really a problem, it's just that I don't like it as a reader)-that is, in the chapters so far, I rarely feel the protagonist's subjective initiative in macro aspects. I understand that as a time traveler with amnesia, she is not suitable for this place, but from the beginning to the end, she has been pushed by things. She is either forced or threatened every day. It's really frustrating to be threatened by someone using her weak point - her disciple - without moving. It's like a novel I read before. The protagonist is either being chased by that one or this one from beginning to end. This makes readers feel a lot of pressure when reading this kind of online article! Apart from the above, everything is fine I can't just talk about the shortcomings and drive others away. Let me talk about the advantages here. The advantages are - after all, it is Baihewen, and some parts are still very enjoyable. And this subject matter is also very novel. Although it is repetitive, it is not routine.

This book is really the best book I have read in several years. The author's character creation is very successful. Especially our heroine, she is so beautiful and kind. Her every smile and every breath attracted me deeply. After she was injured, I felt unparalleled pain. Let's talk about our male protagonist again. He is handsome, charming and graceful. The love between the male and female protagonists is so touching. When they confided in each other, I not only burst into tears, but when they were separated by the villain, I hated myself for not being able to travel through the book to save them. The whole book is rich in content and is a good book worth reading!!!

If you like to read 10 yandere vs the master who pretends to be calm, you must read this book [Shy]

As a reader who read this book as the initial starting point, the subject matter and writing style are good, but the biggest point of this book is that the protagonist and Bai Yueguang (Qin) have never been able to get along. Bai Yueguang's character is too paranoid, and it is heavier than the cp character in the books I have read (referring to similar characters) Yandere is too paranoid), but after more than 200 chapters, Bai Yueguang is suppressed by others because of her personality. I hope she can "optimize" her body and let the protagonist accept it again. Some people just take it lightly when they see that it is still an emotional game. I hope the author will pay more attention to it [Blow kiss] I typed the wrong name of Bai Yueguang (Ji) before I got it right [face covering] [face covering]

Very good, the plot is very compact, and the female substitute for the male has many disciples is also good👌🏻

I've already recommended it to my friends, I can't let myself get frustrated by myself [laughing evilly] [Like] I think Ji's feelings for Lao Yue are actually somewhat sincere, but his character is a little too twisted. As for the eldest disciple and the second disciple, I even feel that they are just purely possessive, which may be due to Lao Yue's physique. Although the eldest disciple can be regarded as a relatively loyal and obedient one, I think it is more to satisfy his possessive desire. As for Lao Yue's master, it's true that he is a scheming, deep-minded, bt, smart, capable of manipulating people's hearts, tricks, deep pua master, and a senior dog trainer. One of my favorite characters, I can't wait to see Lao Yue's reaction after she falls off the horse. (I'm really sick It's good to watch. Good luck. Normal relationships are healthy, but abnormal love is really sweet.

It's really exciting [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss], show me how excited you are