I’m an Eastern Quasi-Immortal, So How Did I Get a Second Chance in a Western Fantasy World?

I haven't seen any female characters that I admire since I turned 45. They are all relatively flat. Even the protagonist gives me a very strange feeling. The portrayal of the characters is very weird. There are also relatively few female characters. Maybe there will be more good characters in the future.

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Advantages I can understand it and there are no serious flaws. The plot is relatively novel, and it's fun and well-organized. I really like this type of writing. I've read five or six similar instant noodles. It's an old routine, but I love reading it. The plot line is also relatively clear, and the writing can at least express the meaning clearly, so there is no obstacle to reading. Disadvantages From the current point of view, there is no plot that can make my eyes shine, it is relatively dull. The crisis was resolved before it even arose, and there was no sense of oppression, which resulted in a less satisfying feeling. The heroine's character is not clear enough from a literary perspective. The thousand-year-old cultivator of immortality feels childish. Maybe it's due to the setting? [Suggestion] Add more environment description and character description. It is best to make it three-dimensional and vivid, and express the character's personality from some small details of the character. It's all acceptable for now, look forward to more updates! There are really very few articles that suit my taste, so I found them with great difficulty.

It's very interesting. The heroine came from the world of immortality to the magical world. She is ahead of the magical world in all aspects. You can understand many things after just a little study. It's very interesting to pretend to be cool and slap in the face invisibly. One part that impressed me deeply was that everyone looked at the class division and course schedule on the public column before class, and then they all crowded together, scrambling to read the class schedule and chattering, but our noble heroine just used her spiritual sense to scan it clearly, and then went straight to the classroom. I felt so handsome hahaha. The heroine should be the kind of heroine who devotes herself to training and learning just to become stronger. There is currently no female competition. The current content is about studying in the academy. I also prefer this kind of feeling of learning knowledge bit by bit and rising in level step by step, just like the feeling of cultivating immortals. I am a big fan of the author. The fairy tale I wrote before was particularly good. Now I have read a new book. Although I don't often read western fantasy magic novels, and I prefer novels with CP. This book does not have CP, but I still read it because of the author. Unexpectedly, after reading it, I discovered that Western Fantasy is quite good. There are only a few dozen chapters so far and I finished them all in one go. So I had to find other alternatives of the same type. Anyone who has seen any good Western Fantasy or Magic Academy would recommend it to me~

The plot is quite interesting... But I personally feel that the character of the protagonist is not good... I shouldn't say personality but temperament... The protagonist is not like an oriental boss but more like a modern person who has just traveled through time... He is always startled and looks like he has never seen the world... Especially in the back... Basically every time he opens his mouth Before speaking, you have to add all kinds of smiles... No matter whether the person is good or bad, there are all kinds of smiles... You have to laugh more than a dozen times in one chapter... Could it be that in the past, when cultivating immortals and understanding the way of heaven, you cultivated the way of laughter... It belongs to the use of too much force in shaping the character image, which shows that it is very deliberate... But it is a small flaw... Overall, it looks good...

The beginning of this article is not very good. A high-ranking person in the world of immortality feels very childish in his thinking, especially when he was hiding from the archbishop to test his magic power for six years. He was helpless and indecisive. It will be better when I go to the academy later. I feel that the author is slowly finding his voice. The fighting scenes and story narrative are becoming more and more exciting as I read them. I look forward to the author's future updates.

The plot has no poisonous points and is enjoyable to watch. I hope there will be more collisions between Eastern immortality and Western magic in the future. It would be better if the heroine's character was more fleshed out. It feels like there is always a gap between her and the world. I hope that she will not only be an independent "immortal cultivator" who loves to learn, but can better integrate into this magical world. I look forward to her making good friends in the academy and encountering more touching stories as she grows up. [Sending Hearts] Five-star praise

It's really well written, why is the rating so low? [What] The non-CP direction here is very well written. There is no ambiguity with men or women. The only bond is her family and teachers who are good to her. I am very annoyed by the kind of people who write about having ambiguities with men and secretly rubbing women away from the harem under the banner of non-CP, and those who secretly have Lily. The heroine here It is a real heroine. So far, everything has been written around the point where the heroine returns home. The heroine is engaged in her career throughout the whole story. She is very careful not to reveal any trump cards belonging to the world of cultivation. It is a bit exciting but not brainless. The heroine is very smart and thoughtful. She is worthy of being a person who can ascend. She is extremely calm. The heroine is not a typical monk in the world of cold-blooded cultivation who has cut off the mortal world. She can feel that her family treats her unconditionally. Her parents and two brothers are also very good. Knowing that the heroine may be a so-called "god-killer", she does not feel afraid or disgusted by it. She does not believe in the Church of Light (after all, this is too typical in Western fantasy novels), but chooses to protect the heroine. You must know that even though they are nobles, they are just nobles with ordinary ideas. They do not understand the conspiracy of the church like the principal and teachers of the college. I think it is very rare that they pretend not to know about this or hand over the heroine when ordinary people basically believe in the church without any brain. I already feel reluctant to let go when the heroine goes home in the future. I hope the heroine can give them a good ending by then [almost crying] The author's writing skills are quite good, and the characters are also very three-dimensional, rather than NPC-style driving the plot. I have always wanted to find this kind of Eastern and Western magic confrontational articles, but there are very few. When I search, they are all male ones. The female ones are either discontinued or Eastern magic. They are just Eastern fantasy with no Western fantasy flavor. The only one I have read is "Ascension to the Magic World" by JJ. There is a big difference between this one and that one, and this one is more to my heart. But so far, there are no particularly grand scenes. Although there are quite a lot of copies, the narrative is a bit bland and there is no sense of passion for killing. The crisis is resolved before it arises. It is recommended that more descriptions of the environment and character movements can be made during the fight. Generally speaking, the writing is quite good, and it is a book that can be updated all the time. Just don't stop updating it. There are too few books on this subject. It's hard to find such a book that suits my liking. I will be really sad if it stops updating [I'm about to cry]

Can the names of the protagonists be unified? One is Mia, the other is Ye Wangshu. I thanked Mia for a long time at the beginning, and then changed to Ye Wangshu in the middle, and also reflected who Ye Wangshu was for a while [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh]

This book is well written, with complete character creation and plot lines, so there will be no difficulty in reading it. The protagonist has a big golden finger, and the novel has no cps. This really impressed me, and I highly recommend everyone to read it. At present, the plot seems to be well organized, with foreshadowing and twists and turns. The upgrade process is clear at a glance. Basically, there is explanation and foreshadowing of the protagonist's upgrade process. I really recommend everyone to watch it. The author is paving the way for the subsequent plot, and I feel it won't end soon. Furthermore, the author basically updates every day, so there's no need to worry about interruptions. The protagonist cannot be said to be a particularly good person, but as long as it does not go against her own interests, she will help her, but not the Holy Mother. For me, this is a very good read, and it is very good for my heart. I started writing it from the author, and I have been reading it until now. In my opinion, this book is very beautiful, and I really recommend everyone to read it. I just don't know why there are not many people reading the book, and there are also few people who rate it. The rating of this book is relatively low, but it is really good! I hope you will take a look at it first and then decide whether to continue reading. Don't quit immediately after seeing the ratings, please! This is really beautiful [sending my heart] [sending my heart]