The Heavenly Secrets Pavilion’s Wandering Agent: You Want Me to Be a Spectator?

Chapter 15, I'm not sure whether I can read it. I just don't want any commercial funding or anything like that. I don't know if it's just me or what, but I see this kind of thing as very fragmented in the ancient context. Then, in the early stage, the Son of Luck is weak and useless, which is normal, but the protagonist has little expressiveness, and his identity is only a passerby in the system plot. After all, he is the protagonist of this book, so it should be more enjoyable. In fact, when the protagonist is operating later, the protagonist can control the entire plot and proceed step by step according to the protagonist's arrangement. The protagonist watches his masterpiece as a passerby. Later, you can also write some force majeure factors that make the plot of the protagonist out of control to add some twists and turns.

It's pretty, very much to my taste. Humorous and a bit refreshing. But limited by the author's writing style, it's not exciting enough. I can only say that my five stars are for encouragement. The actual level is only three and a half stars. Some places in the front look really bland.

The setting is quite interesting, but the author knows that if you don't know how to write emotional scenes, you don't have to write them. Don't add heroines indiscriminately. For example, his junior niece has a relationship inexplicably, which doesn't feel good. Don't open a harem randomly, hey, please [cry], I feel like there is a top-notch beauty waiting for you somewhere [face covering] Besides, the updates are too slow.

As far as this book is concerned, the themes and themes of the systematic essay are not new, but they are written with new ideas. Ingenious and creative system, unconventional story design. In terms of plot direction, although it is somewhat formulaic, there is no cookie-cutter routine, and the story structure and imagination are both outstanding. And there is nothing toxic in terms of content. Both the narrative and the rhythm are well grasped, and the overall feeling is warm. However, the characterization is not excellent, but the author's intention and precipitation can be seen. Overall, it is a very good book and I can give it 4 stars. But the others have higher scores on Tomato The back part is just average [laughing evilly] not as good looking as before.

Personally, I think it's okay, a little bland, but it fits the setting. There are always some people who jump to read it and force the score to be low. I finally understand why there are always book reviews that give low scores without thinking.

The content is not bad. The author can arrange a heroine who is in contrast to the protagonist and is fun-loving. In this show, it is both funny and adds sweetness and excitement to the interaction between the male and female protagonists.

It's still very good. I've read more than 100 chapters, and I haven't seen any bad points, but there's nothing too exciting either. The score is still a bit low. Personally, I think it should have a score of 8.2. I hope the author will not stop updating.

It's okay, the pacing is well controlled, but I don't know if there is a female protagonist.

It's not bad, many places in the book are quite funny, and I was very happy while reading it.

The writing at the beginning was okay, the setting was very novel, and the plot was well-executed; but at the end it gradually started to falter, and some poisonous points appeared, and it slowly moved closer to the harem story. I originally thought it was a story about a male protagonist cultivating immortality, but from the beginning there was no female protagonist, and it seemed to be a single female protagonist, but later on it slowly started to look like multiple female protagonists. However, the character of the protagonist is very good, he is a fun-loving person, and he has a sense of responsibility in major matters. It is cool if it is a little bit fun, but later on it feels like he is too powerful and flying bricks. He does not need to practice his cultivation by himself, and he focuses on having fun. In the early stage, he did have the feeling of being a passerby commenting. Later, he may be affected by the emotional line. It is a bit like praising the heroine specifically. I feel that it would be better to delete some emotional lines. There are already two or three suspected female protagonists. But overall, I can't say it's particularly bad. This book is still in a readable direction. It just depends on what the author writes later.