Awakening Spirit Eyes, I Turned a Good-for-Nothing Elf Into a Myth

I can read this Pokémon fanfic, but I'm worried about one thing. Can you, the author, respond to me? 1 Will there be a female protagonist? Will the heroine's role take up the majority or a small part? Have you ever been in love? Do you know how to deal with sexual relations? How to deal with Pokémon scenes? 2 There are too few daily Pokémon scenes, and the interaction that the world should have is not written, such as the interaction with Pokémon when sleeping, rather than a simple response. After three Pokémon, all Pokémon scenes have changed accordingly, or become a bit rare, and there are very few Pokémon characters. The fire dinosaur is good, but there are few others, and there is no strong three-dimensional feeling. Plus after you wrote about the girl, I think there are even fewer. 3 I hope you understand that what you write is a Pokémon fanfic. If you like human emotions more, then why don't you write school fiction? Your foundation is the bond of Pokémon and the daily battle scenes, not the love between two young men and women. It is based solely on this.

There are currently 52 pictures in progress. I will continue to check the situation and change the rating later. It felt strange to me, the pace was too fast, and there was too little description of interaction. As well as the plot arrangement, I feel that there is often too little foreshadowing. Such as Rayquaza and Zoroa. The progress is so fast, I feel like I might try to write more. Especially Rayquaza is too fragmented. A lot of trust appeared out of nowhere. Soraya simply progressed very quickly. I feel like both need more detail. In other words, Rayquaza is too early stage and is not easy to write no matter how you write it. I should put the plot later and start describing it later. The combat description is good, which reflects the author's writing style. There are no problems with daily development and skill adjustment, and the protagonist's growth is also relatively good. She has a calm personality, which I prefer. The fruit will be given four stars, it depends on what happens next.

I like it very much. It's not like other Pokémon stories that tell me that they suddenly become stronger. As for the early selection of Charmander with flaws, I also understand that it's good for people with abilities and ambitions to have their own pursuits. Not to mention that the breeding process is well-founded and has explanations on how to become stronger. The bond between Pokémon and the protagonist in the process of getting better also really poked me. The problem now is that I clicked in when it was a sapling. It's not enough to read. I hope the author will update this intensive Pokémon book more. If each one is well written, it will be great.

I really like the author's writing style. It's very relaxed and everyday, and the cultivation method is realistic and doesn't feel abrupt. When I read it now, I feel that the article has the feeling of daily ups and downs! ! !

The rating of this book shouldn't be so low. It's really well written. I've read so many Pokémon books that there are only two that deserve my recognition. This is the third one, and I really hope to have a female protagonist. Ash's only regret is that there is no emotional line. He has a lot of experience, but after seeing Semei's thoughts and the end of Ash's journey, who doesn't regret that Ash is an ignorant idiot?

The author's writing is quite good. Whether it's daily plots, battle details, or climaxes, the author has better control over the rhythm when writing. It's relaxed and moderate, and there are no major problems overall. But if you look closely, there are still some small details, but I feel that this varies from person to person. The relationship between Xiao Gu and Xiao Chen is handled very well [laughing evilly] Sorry author, I was a little bit picky about them [shy] However, the emotional line between the male and female protagonists is still handled very well and is slowly advancing. [Laughing] The description of each character is unique, with their personal growth position and turning point. It is obvious As for combat, I think the author writes it very seriously, with passion and warmth. You can read more works by other authors to see how to describe combat better.

This article is so beautiful! The soul of Pokémon is completely written, and the sense of bonding and passion is particularly good. After reading it, I feel warm in my heart. You are so good at writing! The emotional descriptions are so poignant! Especially [a certain plot], the bond between the trainer and the Pokémon was written so delicately that I almost cried while watching it! It's just that the description of the environment and atmosphere is a bit lacking, and the visual sense is weak. This aspect can be improved a bit.

The Pokémon written are great, with super abilities, and too many incurable diseases. This Pokémon's healing ability is horribly low! More fragile than humans! [Vomit][vomit]

It seems to be pretty good so far. In the early stage, I focused on a lot of knowledge about cultivation and how to train. I can intuitively see and imagine that the training mentioned above will be really useful and come into play in the subsequent battles. Looking forward to the author's follow-up, I wonder if there will be any surprises later [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

Since Charmander recovered from his injury, the pace has accelerated. In the field test, he met the cub of Rayquaza and gained a bodyguard. In the next step, he met the champion Zhulan, and then at the Elf Breeding Center, he was attacked by Team Rocket and met Mewtwo. Isn't this pace a bit fast? Since recovering from the injury, the elf has taken in several animals at once [Thinking]