Pokemon: Ahai, Water-Type Master

I didn't expect that the initial Pokémon would be Slugton, so I'd like to support it by giving it a five-star rating (｡･ω･｡)

When a newcomer opens a book, it's more about fulfilling a dream of his or hers, so work hard and be grateful.

No heroine? If there is a heroine, I hope Xiaoxia, I will watch the punishment [laughing evilly] (I have to say Koga Ninja, Thousand-faced Lizard are both handsome)

It's pretty good, it levels up quickly, the plot doesn't drag out, and the pacing is pretty good. However, in the later period, things like family felt a bit redundant, and the description of emotions also had many shortcomings. For example, the protagonist's parents went on a trip without worrying at all when the protagonist was weak, but later became very worried when the protagonist became stronger. I don't understand. Then there is the family. The sense of existence was very low before, but later they cared about the protagonist. It felt like the protagonist had no value before so he didn't care, and then he kneeled down and licked him when he became stronger. Moreover, the protagonist's father's eagerness to surrender also made people very uncomfortable. Let's just consider him caring for the time being. It's not a big problem. Then there is the heroine. Although I am not sure who she is, I feel that there are too many single arrows. However, whether it is the entertainment industry literary quality speech in the audience during the battle or Xiaoxue and Kona King, there is an indescribable sense of cheapness. Combined with the emotional scenes of the first two parents and family, it feels like it will collapse🙃 Finally, there is the aspect of conquering Pokémon. From the early collection, influencing yourself to join, the hero saving the treasure, to the later defeating, and then seducing after disagreeing, I personally can't do it. Generally speaking, these are minor problems and not serious problems. I look forward to the follow-up.

Overall, no big problem. 1: According to your introduction, he specializes in the water system, but although the gem starfish is in the water system, he specializes in super powers. Although there is nothing wrong with it, there is a possibility of cheating, but it is not a big problem. 2: It still feels like the level rises too fast. Although you are using the game panel for reference, I think it is better to lower it, otherwise the combat power will easily collapse. 3: Purely refreshing writing. (If you don't like it, just don't come in) 4: The level of Gengar in Maiden Gap is still low, only level 49.

Better than most

Overall, it's okay, but I don't know if there will be a female protagonist. There isn't one so far, and I hope there won't be one in the future.

Slow growth is what I like. If you get a mythical Pokémon at the beginning, Goldfinger will be a bit too powerful.

Awesome, the author will arrange one for Combo Ryuu Dao Bear Master

Well written! Come on😊