Pokemon: My Trainer Is Sweet and Sassy

This is my first time writing a story set in a League of Legends game. Yuna's character is very well-developed, and the plot twists and emotional arcs fit perfectly. I finished reading it in one go! 😳 I especially loved the interactions between the boys—not romantic love, but the bonds they formed as teammates, rivals, and friends. The author clearly put a lot of effort into each character.

I think it's very well written, but why does the main character only have two Pokémon so far? 🤦🤦🤦 Isn't he the main character? Even if he's going for a small but high-quality Pokémon build, he shouldn't only have one by now! 😄😄😄 And that silly fish doesn't listen to the main character! 😄

The author writes so well! I was pleasantly surprised by the part with the clumsy fish; it's the first time I've seen a Pokémon (outside of the original work) that doesn't obey commands on Tomato Pokémon. Seeing the clumsy fish start to trust Yuna gave me a feeling of my daughter growing up and making friends (?). It's great, I love it, please update more! [Requesting more updates!]

It's very well written. The plot and dialogue aren't awkward. There are a few skill-related errors, but they're minor. There's a slight feeling that the journey isn't fully explained, which is normal for a first-time writer. It's quite remarkable, considering that Pokémon fanfiction with a female protagonist is rare, and aside from a few excellent works, most others suffer from awkward writing…

The fight scenes were fantastic, the character development was great, and the plot was very engaging—it was amazing!!! (By the way, will Yuna get Zeraora? The big cat is so cool! [Full][Full])

This novel is a slow burn, and unlike typical "leveling up and monster-slaying" stories, its narrative is truly excellent, featuring both regular battles and wild skirmishes. Inspired by the popular Pokémon fan comic "King's Festival," this book is definitely worth reading for Pokémon fans. However, it's a slow burn, so patience is required! 💕

It's pretty good. The protagonist is witty and natural, gradually growing stronger, and the battle scenes are also very well-developed. However, I still have to complain: 28 chapters in, and the protagonist still only has one starter Pokémon. He's already fought two gyms with just one Pokémon, thankfully winning them. The pacing is a bit slow. Can you tell me in how many chapters the protagonist will catch new Pokémon?!

I've discovered another amazing Pokémon fanfiction!

It's generally not advisable to evenly distribute the Pokémon catching plot throughout Pokémon stories. Increasing the number of catching stages early on, allowing you to catch two or three Pokémon before focusing on the later stages, will significantly improve the overall viewing experience.

[Please update more often!] I love this kind of travel story. The author is clearly a huge fan of the King of Glory celebration series; they really captured the feeling perfectly! 😘😘