Naruto: I'm Not Interested, and You're Not Talented

It's good to read. I really like the friendship between Xiaoman and Sakura. The unreasonable plot of the original book has been changed very well [crying] This book is the most comfortable day-to-day writing by a Naruto fan that I have read on Tomato [please update]

The writing is beautiful, but Konoha Laoden is very annoying. There is also a little suggestion (you may or may not adopt it), that is, don't always insert extras in the middle of the main text, otherwise it will feel like the plot is interrupted. Is there any foreshadowing of the film viewing body in the parallel world? Well, in the early stage, it felt a bit tasteless and a pity to abandon (it feels a bit boring if it has it, but it seems a little less interesting if it doesn't) Overall it looks great, keep up the good work (ง ˙o˙)ว!

There is no long comment! Then let me be the first long comment! I always thought it was an e-sports article about a female anchor playing farming and fire, so I never read it. It was recommended again yesterday, so I clicked in and took a look, and fell in love (? The combination of barrage is very moderate, and the memes that appear are also very interesting and not bad. For example, there is a joke about Lucky E of the Lancer, hahaha. The plot is also healing and melancholy. The character of the girl is very lively and lively. Although she looks lazy, she is very powerful. She has maximum force but cannot use ninjutsu that requires chakra. I understand! You are the heaven and the curse! (Not) Sure enough, I can't like the Sandaime no matter what. If he is as stupid as a pig and was deprived of power so he didn't know the disgusting things Danzo did in private, then he is stupid and bad; knowing but hiding it in his heart and keeping silent because the benefits outweigh the disadvantages is even more disgusting and infinitely bad. Although the root cause is due to institutional problems, whether he is stupid, bad or extremely bad makes this character hateful. Unexpectedly, it turned out to be a projected real world, and there was a problem while capturing it, so people in the original world saw it. I originally thought it was just a simple drama setting, and people in the original world saw it just because it was a small side story similar to the movie viewer x. In this case, I am quite curious about what the so-called third creation that will be officially stamped will be produced. Is it just that the author and teacher wanted to write a side story, so is it set like this? Or is it that Xiaoman in other world lines will be forcibly distorted by the real world and turn them into what they look like in the extra story? In short, I am looking forward to the teacher's creation!

Good-looking (○｀ε´○) Xiaoman is super charming, but also a bit miserable, a typical beauty, strong but miserable, and a super good kid Xiaoman is like a gust of wind, gentle, and takes away many people's longing. The writing is so handsome, and it feels high-spirited [shy] By the way, I think the original cover looks better, very cool (whispers) As a teacher, can I make a little suggestion? [Sending Hearts] Use boy to describe male characters, and use the word boy to describe female characters; or use boy to describe a male character, giving a feeling of being in full bloom and everything is going well [Sending Hearts]

The emotions between Xiaoman and Sakura are described very delicately. Whether it is CB or CP, it is very easy to follow. Xiaoman's character is also very full. On the surface, he looks very casual about everything, but on the inside, he is a gentle person who will take the initiative to protect his friends when they are bullied.

I was attracted by the cute cover of Xiaoman. It is my first time to read this type of Naruto fanfic, and I like it very much. After reading all the content up to the serialization in one go, it was a bit unsatisfying, so I searched for Xiao Man's CG and watched it for a while. I had a very strange feeling that the Xiao Man in the CG coincided with the free and easy and quirky look of Xiao Man in the author's article that was still fresh in my memory after reading it. Yuan Ge is also mentioned in the latest chapters. I kind of want to see other heroes make brief cameos in one or two battles (I digress because I really like Yuan Ge, hahaha...) In short, it is a very good article that I like very much! I will see it till the end, happy new year!

The writing is also very good. However, teacher, your update is a bit too slow. . . Just because of the slow update, I missed the peak period of this book, and then people slowly left. Alas, it can only be said that I did not seize the opportunity. [Cover face]

Xiaoman is a very strong and brave child, sometimes quite arrogant, and has his own ideas and ambitions. If you don't impose other people's requirements on yourself, you will feel free and at ease. It is this free and unruly Xiao Man who is truly charming. He is not just mindlessly revolving around the protagonist. Everyone has their own ideas and should go their own way. Each is growing, and invisible bonds are intertwined...

The best Naruto fanfic in history. I will always follow the author👐❤️👄👄😋😋

It looks good, but there is one flaw that is not good enough. I hope there will be more [Chigua]