Zhanxiantai

Divine book! It's truly a divine book! The third young master of the Tang family was about to cry when he saw it, and Tiancan Tudou was amazed when he saw it! This is the reincarnation of the Four Great Classics, the leader of the literary world in the 21st century! "Holy Ruins"? I lost some of my literary talent in front of it! "Dou Po"? I owe it some connotation! "Zhu Xian"? In front of it, my feelings fade away! "Covering the Sky"? In front of it, I lost three cents of my imagination! "Buddha"? Half of the layout is missing in front of it! This is a once-in-a-century classic of online writing! The greatest literary masterpiece of the 21st century! From Luo Guanzhong, Shi Naian, Wu Chengen, Cao Xueqin, to Confucius and Mo Laozhuang, Shixian Shisheng, Sansu Jiaxuan; from Qin Emperor Hanwu, Tang Zongzu Songzu, Genghis Khan, to Sakyamuni, Plato, Copernicus, Aristotle - who can't read it without being amazed? ! This book by the author is truly the work of heaven and man! The writing is brilliant and the rhetoric is exquisite. It inherits the style of the Wei and Jin Dynasties and promotes the charm of the Tang and Song Dynasties. It is deeply penetrating! It is truly a blessing to read this book in my lifetime! However, after reading this book, a feeling of sadness suddenly emerged: If I never have the chance to see such a masterpiece again in the future, what would be the point of my life? What's the point of my life? ! Fortunately! Make a decision immediately and put it on your bookshelf! A restless heart can only find a moment of peace. Otherwise! If these masterpieces are covered in dust and the world cannot see them, wouldn't it be a waste of resources and the author's efforts? ! After a battle between heaven and man, I finally made up my mind: sacrifice the small self to fulfill the greater self! This book review is dedicated to everyone in the world! This book must be held up to the sky again and again, so that the whole world will know it! Walking between heaven and earth, the scorching sun and bright moon are witnesses: Is this book enjoyable enough? --Not enough! Traveling across the rivers and lakes, rivers and seas serve as evidence: Is this book enjoyable? --Not enough! Standing on the top of the fairy mountain, Qionglou Yuyu echoed: Is the update fast enough? Not enough! Not enough! Far from enough! Not enough chapters! Not fast enough! Not enough content! Not enough! [Come on] [Come on] [Come on] [Come on] [Come on]

This version of Tang Seng is the closest to the original work I have read on Tomato so far. Although he is pedantic and even a saint, he can accept his own life as a wolf, but cannot bear to see evil people harming others. One sentence in it pointed out the difference between "transformation" and "protection", which overturned my previous understanding of Tang Seng.

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to sound, and the number of dead harvests starts to decrease. When you update five times, readers' support will spontaneously form and praise you The voice becomes louder and louder, When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates.

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This book gives me quite complicated feelings. I have read Chapter 52 so far, and my mood has been quite ups and downs. Lu Fan didn't hold back when his parents died in this life. He was as sad as a needle pricking his heart. He resolutely shouted that he would avenge his parents, which made people feel happy and admired. There was no strong emotion after that. Overall, this book is really good. The writing and sentences are well-suited to the subject matter, and the writing is brilliant. I hope that the subsequent lives described will be more novel. I also believe that the author does not need me to remind him that the current data in such a short period of time is very good. I am very curious about what the author will write in the future. According to the current development trend, it seems that it is unlikely to have a sufficiently exciting direction. It is impossible to unite the three rebels to rebel against the West. If it is a normal upgrade, it will be a bit the same. I will not put any requirements on how the author will write in the future. I look forward to the author's own ideas to make the story reasonable and exciting at the same time. I have followed it all the way from chapter 52 to chapter 114 so far. It feels like it's no longer as amazing as it was at the beginning, and the subsequent routines are a bit boring. Some people try their best to discredit the protagonist, then clear his name, get involved with some big shot, and then cause an uproar. It is better to retain the five-star rating and wait until the pursuit is completed before deciding on the final rating and evaluation. The third rating ended at chapter 146. Four stars for the first seventy chapters. The first part is quite good. I felt amazing when I clicked on it at the beginning. But then it gets really watery. I take back what I said before about the author writing carefully. Is it because the Buddhist wording is too distracting and leads to a lack of plot? At first I thought this book was a male porn story Fourth rating, ending at chapter 206 I no longer have the desire to read anymore. I was very happy to read the first fifty chapters, but then I became more and more disappointed, and it felt like it was being played out.

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It's so cool. Another book that unites three villains to fight alien gods. I really like this theme. The protagonist is the introduction to this matter, and a lot of the content is short stories from the past that he generated using the system. The writing is very smooth, write quickly! [Please update] It was too slow, so I saved up forty chapters to read it in one go, but there was no push. The bald cult kept sophistry, and the fun became less and less. The blood pressure kept soaring. There were more people watching, and now the short story started to drag on indefinitely. I will wait for the ending to watch 8.

This episode of Tang Sanzang is one of the most pleasing to my eyes. "My Buddha's compassion is to relieve the suffering of all sentient beings." "If this compassion needs to be at the expense of another person's injustice, then it is not compassion, it is partiality, and it is hypocrisy!"

Like more and let others take a look, too. When I was in high school, I once held in my feces for three whole days. At that time, my stomach was so painful that I could press the hard and huge feces in my intestines through my belly, which stretched my lower abdomen. When I sucked my stomach, I felt the edges of the hard and huge feces scratching my intestinal wall. The amount of feces was even The squeezing of my stomach caused me to have no appetite and burp frequently in those days. Finally, I felt a strong urge to poop. At the same time, my stomach slowly moved, stirring with my hard feces. I felt a huge thing turning in my stomach. I had unbearable abdominal pain and was extremely painful. I hurried to the toilet. So, because the feces was too hard, I could only feel the tightness in my intestines. Even though I pulled hard, the feces was still stuck there and motionless. Later, my intestines slowly wriggled on their own, pushing my feces forward. I broke into a cold sweat in pain, and felt the huge feces pressing into my anus. The door was almost cracked, and the shit stopped again. The sharp edges of the shit pierced my intestinal wall. I was at my wits' end. Just when I thought I would have no choice but to leave the toilet this time, suddenly an overwhelming strong urge to fart swept over me. At that time, I had been squatting for too long and had been pooping hard. My strength was nearly exhausted, my brain was congested, my eyes were dizzy, and I was in a dizzy and unconscious state. Moreover, the fart was too urgent. Without thinking, a huge fart with a loud noise was like thunder, and at the same time, the hard feces rushed out with the fart, like a missile, and it was shockingly fast. After that, my stomach turned upside down, and I pooped out piles of shit. The amount of shit was unimaginable. In the end, my stomach was still twitching and pooping out, and I was almost exhausted...

The details of the concept are well handled, why not give it five stars? The protagonist has been kneeling on the Immortal Killing Platform from the first scene to Chapter 72 [laughing and crying], and the protagonist has not said a few words or done much in the whole story. The author has always used a narrative form to describe the story of this book, just like writing a character story [laughing and crying]

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"Who is on the Immortal Killing Platform" Chapter 1-90 Lu Fan was brought to the Immortal Killing Platform by the gods to question his crime. A loose cultivator killed thousands of Buddhists. Unfortunately, a modern person traveled through time and became her. When faced with such a certain death situation, the protagonist awakens to the system editor. This system can freely edit the host's life history. Lu Fan is surrounded by gods and Buddhas. In order to convict Lu Fan, a mirror is used to see his past evil deeds. When he was a child, the protagonist's parents were killed by bandits in order to deliver a bowl of rice to Sun Wukong who was trapped in Wuzhishan. Then the protagonist cultivated immortal magic and avenged his parents. , A leader ran away and hid in a temple and became a monk. Those monks protected people who did bad things. They used to work with bandits. The money they stole would be given to part of the temple. The protagonist killed them all, killing thousands of people. Later, it was learned that the protagonist worshiped Fang Cunshan and became a closed disciple. Sun Wukong was determined to save his junior brother. The first master he worshiped was Patriarch Bodhi, so the protagonist is his junior brother and must protect him. Sun Wukong caused trouble, Erlang God Yang Jian came to fight, but was stopped by the Jade Emperor, and used the Three Lives Mirror to reflect the memory of the protagonist's past life. Unexpectedly, it was Yang Jian's dead brother, Yang Jiao, reincarnated. Now it was better, Yang Jian also stood by the protagonist's side, and the quarrel started again. They let Nezha decide. Later, I watched it again, the reincarnation of the protagonist. This is his parents are monsters, and the protagonist is a human. His parents are both good monsters, helping to bring relief and provide food. The protagonist encounters an evil person and teaches him a lesson. Then the evil person invites a master to kill the protagonist's parents, and the protagonist's younger brothers and sisters escape with the protagonist. Later, when they arrived at Chentangguan, the protagonist was self-reliant and had to support his younger brothers and sisters. At this time, the Dragon King happened to flood Chentangguan, and all the protagonist's younger brothers and sisters died. The protagonist was also destined to Nezha, and would burn incense for him every day to reshape his body, but Nezha's father was burned and refused to give Nezha a way to survive. The protagonist encourages Nezha to get rid of the Dragon King to take revenge. In fact, the fun part is to keep slapping him in the face. In the process, someone will keep saying how evil and evil the protagonist is, and then prove through facts that the protagonist is a good person, and then there are the unreasonable things that seem to make others happy. Sun Wukong, Yang Jian, Nezha, and the three rebels in heaven are all the protagonist's brothers. That's about it.

The life editor is used in the prehistoric world, and involves the well-known Sun Wukong and Yang Jian. This idea is still very novel and fascinating, comparable to the Memoirs of the Great Emperor next to it. The editing of those few stories is indeed excellent. Even though the general ideas are similar, they are indeed unique. When I saw Yang Jian recalling his interaction with Yang Jiao when he was young, I felt the complicated emotions firsthand. It was probably because I was no longer young, and I was deeply moved. The writing is quite good. The author will continue to work hard and not to end this novel hastily. There is hope that the story written in the future will also have new changes.

Just my personal opinion: Ahhh! This is the first time I have seen such a beautiful book. The plot is rigorous and the protagonists and supporting characters are well distributed, so that the whole book does not look too crowded and feels comfortable to the eyes. It's just that the update is too slow

Yes, I am very familiar with Journey to the West, and the speaking style of the characters also attracted me very much. However, the plot is very repetitive, and I will easily get tired after reading too much. I suggest innovation in the future, at least not to have four parents every time, and our protagonist is not a disaster star. In short, this book is not bad.

One fresh trick, eaten all over the world. Someone broke the rules of heaven, Sun Wukong came to see the fun, and then "Sun Wukong, why did you stop me?" "The one you want to kill is my junior brother!" "Er Lang Shen, why did you stop me too?" "The one you want to kill is my eldest brother!" "Nezha, you're here too! Why?" "What do you think? Look at the gun!"

I don't know how to describe it. The settings are very good. It's a bit similar to a simulator and has a bit of a memory exposure feel. It's quite nice.

It's a classic, and it's similar to what those who gave low scores said, but I really think the author's writing style and ingenuity are really strong. Although I can directly tell what the next plot is, the vividness makes me really happy to read it. I don't see much of this kind of writing. It's really comfortable to read this kind of classic and refreshing writing. For works with a score of 9 or above, you will quit after reading a few chapters. For a work with a score of about 8, you must taste it. [Adoration] I'd better downgrade one star [smile] Sometimes it's a bit of a downer. Also, this book was posted on my homepage two months ago. When I clicked on it and looked at the homepage, I was instantly redirected [laughing]

I think the best thing about this book is that Tang Sanzang is not weak and incompetent. He practices his own Dharma in a difficult place and is worthy of the status of the Tantan Merit Buddha. Avalokitesvara is not a cunning villain, but the compassionate Avalokitesvara Bodhisattva. This book is a bad description of Western Buddhism, but it does not violate the Chinese people's impression of Buddhism. It chooses some unfamiliar Buddhists, or people with poor reputations, as villains. This kind of reading has a strong sense of substitution, unlike other Western villains who are all in the villain camp. It gives people the feeling of "if there is such a situation" and "possible under certain conditions", rather than the current "maybe this is true if the protagonist travels back in time" and "if the protagonist really appears. This is absolutely true." Other books actually talk about what will happen when the protagonist appears under specific circumstances. Although this book is also in a specific situation, it gives people the feeling that only the protagonist appears as a variable, and there is no specific situation. I really like it, good luck to the author!

This way of writing is good! No poison! The writing is also very good. I hope that the heroine will not be written about romance in the future!

I feel that Lu Fan is very likely to kneel down from the first chapter to the thousandth chapter. These gods can talk about it for a thousand chapters.

I want to see the follow-up development. It has been updated to Chapter 86, which is quite long-winded. I edited the background of Immortal Killing Platform, completed the cause and effect background of Sun Wukong and Yang Jian, and now I am writing about Nezha. It's just nonsense, it's quite interesting, but it doesn't get to the point, it's too wordy! ! ! ! ! ! Change the rating. . . . . I thought it was a slap in the face, but I ended up kneeling from beginning to end. When did the Three Realms pay so much attention to rules? It's not like there aren't people who kill people at will, so why are they just chirping at the protagonist? Isn't the point of watching the protagonist's killing in the Three Life Mirror? How do you go from birth to the end? The preface does not match the postscript! Just like a matryoshka doll, it is estimated that there will be more and more backstage people to protect him. It is no different from a matryoshka doll. When will it end?

The beginning is novel, the front is very exciting Then it started to water It's mainly because it's nothing to do with dragging people into the water. The main thing is that the hand of Ran Deng Ancient Buddha makes life so miserable. Then the protagonist looks very depressed when he looks in the mirror And the protagonist doesn't talk much behind the scenes, everything is reflected in the mirror... No matter what, the protagonist, you should talk more if you have nothing to do. You have to test everything in the mirror. Damn, you made up the mirror. If you don't speak, Ran Deng can't tell the truth? I need to talk about Buddhism. I keep watching Buddhism confuse right and wrong, which makes me feel uncomfortable. But the talk about Buddhism is shutting up and pretending to be silent, and the mirror is showing signs of deflation. Those NPCs outside are saying useless things, and who will listen to what the NPCs say? I don't dare to say it loudly. Monkey and Erlang Shen just pretended to be dead. Nezha kept holding his breath, holding back and trying to explode, but he didn't dare to say a few words. With so many people watching it, there is something to be said for the low rating. If you want to see it, it's almost enough to see Erlang Shen. At least these two can still be everyone's stand-in at that time, which is very refreshing. The Nezha chapter is simply irritating! I catch up with it every few days, and it's still irritating. Every time I open the book in anticipation, I leave irritatingly... It's cool in the early stage and not poisonous, but if you don't like it in Nezha Chapter, it will poison you to death!

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the rawness of the writing will be complained about. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to sound, and the number of dead harvests starts to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates.

It's good-looking, but it's just not good enough. Wow, oh, no, no, even the donkeys in the production team would rest like this.

The book is a good book and the subject matter is very novel. But there are several controversial parts 1. Is the author based on the original work of Ancient Times or Journey to the West? If it were prehistoric, the Monkey King might not have enough combat power. Moreover, the book's low rating may be due to the prehistoric kid's disapproval of combat power. 2. You can also use the narrative gaps in the article to explain where the system comes from and the identity you made up. I think the comments section is very good. Today's effects can be traced back to yesterday's causes. 3. You can improve the protagonist's combat power and don't keep suppressing the immortals. How to say it? I feel like I am still trying to trick a female channel, I keep trying to get into relationships, my own foundation is not stable, so what if the relationship becomes more intimate? Even if I am forcibly raised by the system every time I finish a little bit of relationship cultivation, I still feel better than now. And the plot is too repetitive

It's very interesting and beautiful. But your hand speed and updates are so slow. You really want to be amateurish.

I just want to ask, the protagonist has been kneeling for more than a hundred chapters, when will he be able to get up and walk around? [Laughing and crying]

It's very nice to read, and the overall writing is good, and it's the main character. I have been kneeling until almost chapter 90 and haven't gotten up yet.

Yang Jian, Sun Wukong and Nezha. To be honest, whether it is in the Heaven or the West, there are many powerful people who kill three people casually. It always seems to be exciting to write. In fact, it is almost the same as watching kindergarten children play house.