
I Picked the Wrong Target to Woo, and Now the Unhinged Commander Is at My Door
搞错攻略对象,疯批指挥官追上门
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- Completed
- Length
- 345k Words
- Genre
- Modern Romance
- Subgenre
- Modern Romance High-Concept
- Updated
- 12mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
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It's really quite good-looking, because I prefer the kind of strong male and female protagonists who can take care of each other and help each other. Together they can conquer the world. Overall, it's very good😄😄😄
This book is really good to read. It's really not a loss to invest in it. There are just too few ratings. If you like the kind of sad and sweet book, this book is perfect. All the characters here are very vivid and the language is also very vivid. It makes people's mood always fluctuate. I can't help but read it again. The author's writing style is also very delicate, and there are many funny parts in it. There are many touching places. I have been short of reading for a long time. This type of article makes my eyes shine again. I like the kind of little treasure that is sadistic, sweet and not embarrassing. Go and read it. You must read 10 chapters before deciding whether to continue reading. The author is very awesome [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like]
I think it's okay. The heroine can be said to be very strong. Except for some necessary scumbag abuse, the characters in the book are basically not crazy. Yeah, it's a tough black heroine. The heroine also takes revenge on the spot when she has a grudge. It's quite satisfactory. The most prominent point is probably that the Tiandao system, that is, the decent system, is more protective of the heroine. At least it puts aside the traditional vicious system, and the heroine is very firm at all times. Disadvantages: Some places have wrong names, which may make you confused if you read them quickly. The heroine's character seems to be a bit broken later on, but overall it's still very good, five stars, highly recommended [sending heart][sending heart]
It's really good to read, good to read, good to read, good to read. I've been short of books recently, so I discovered this book. I read it in one day. There are several points in it that I find very interesting. Not only are the protagonists highlighted, but also the supporting characters. Among them, I really like the shaping of Fu Lingxi's story. Lin Qiao said in it The sentence "When you were eight years old and picked up a knife, you were not killing someone." "You were just saving yourself." I think it is a point that I have not described in other plots of manslaughter due to injury, and I have not thought deeply about it. I think it is very interesting. All in all, this book is really good [Blow Kiss] [Adoration]. Off topic: I never thought I could write such a long book review [laughing]
The heroine is super strong and beautiful, cold-blooded. She loved her mother the most. In order to resurrect her mother, she completed the task with the system and successfully defeated the male protagonist. She left this world by pretending to die and saved her mother. Male Protagonist Male Protagonist's Sister Her brother is going crazy and wants to save her and resurrect her. The heroine must have found the secret of the connection between the two worlds. She will definitely gain her family, friendship and love, and she will definitely be happy.
The family is so invincible and so beautiful that I can't get enough of it, ahhh, you must work harder~~~ (Wriggling darkly) (Rolling) (Crawling violently) (Twisting) (Spasticity) (Roaring) (Wriggling) (Eerie growl) (Crawling) (Split) (Walking ashore) (Twisting) (Spasticating) (Wriggling) (Twisting walking) (Attack regardless of target)
The author writes very well, with a dual world design of interstellar and apocalyptic worlds. The story setting is novel and the plot is compact, making people want to keep reading. The foreshadowing laid in the early stage is explained and used later. The heroine is super powerful and has a very sweet relationship. The male and female protagonists are both smart. There are no misunderstandings or weak points. It is very enjoyable to watch. Strong recommendation, strong recommendation👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
It is a refreshing article that combines many wonderful elements. The story setting is novel and unique, cleverly combining cyberpunk, apocalyptic and other elements to create a world full of crises and challenges. The heroine Lin Qiao's experience is eye-catching. She devoted three years to conquering Lou Mingzhe, but she became the laughing stock of the base. This contrasting plot setting can easily arouse the curiosity of readers. The plot has constant twists and turns, from Lin Qiao discovering an error in the strategy, to joining the team of the real hero Fu Qingyan, to taming a group of crazy team members, the rhythm is tight and full of surprises. In particular, the complex emotional entanglement between Lin Qiao and Fu Qingyan, as well as her travel adventures between different worlds, make the story even more exciting. The characters are vivid and three-dimensional, whether it is Lin Qiao's tenacity and courage or Fu Qingyan's dark and crazy appearance, they all leave a deep impression on the readers. In addition, the personalities of the team members are also very prominent, and their interactions add a lot of fun. Overall, this is a refreshing novel with an exciting plot and vivid characters, suitable for readers who love apocalyptic and refreshing themes.
I finished reading it in one sitting, and I have to give it a rating no matter what! Because I read it in one sitting, I give it full marks. The heroine has a very high martial arts value. It's really enjoyable to watch. She's sweet enough in terms of relationship, and quite sadistic. Fortunately, it's the end of the story. Otherwise, she will die and he will go crazy, and she will sacrifice her life for him in return. My little heart can't stand it.
The climax of the book comes later, in the contest between the two worlds. I originally thought it would be a love story between the male protagonist and the female protagonist, but it turned out that the protagonist showed very little, a lot of forbearance, and even self-mutilation. The author's writing style is quite good, and most of the foreshadowing has been explained, such as the seal on the male protagonist's hand, and A Che who is looking for it. But where did Bai's obsession come from?