The Real Adventure World: Support Is the MVP!

Personally, I feel that the plot is a bit cliche, and the characters are a bit too artificial (too vivid, they don't feel like real people, and a bit unreal). The writing is very good, and the details are very detailed, but only a small part is used as foreshadowing. Too many details make me feel a bit boring. At least here in Tomato, I think some details are not necessary. Although the author said that it is a slow-burning novel, it still needs some refreshing points to support me in reading it, or to write some secrets about the entire worldview early to make the audience curious to read on. The excitement in the early stage was only when the protagonist group completed the mission and was paid to buy things, but it was soon suppressed by new difficult missions. I didn't enjoy it much, and the salary had to be used to buy new equipment. I did this several times in a row, and I really felt uncomfortable. As for curiosity, I only felt a little bit when I did the mission for the first time, but I still didn't see the secrets about the world view, and I really couldn't watch it anymore. In summary, there are too few exciting points, little curiosity to support me to continue watching, and too many unnecessary details, which makes it really difficult to continue watching. It's also possible that I felt something was wrong, my will was not strong enough, and I didn't see the wonderful things. Since the author writes seriously, I also comment seriously. I give four stars because I really think the writing is very good, but... (Please refer to the above) This is also my first comment on Tomato. It is purely my personal opinion. If you don't like it, don't criticize it.

No spoilers. . . . . With a score of about 9.1, The author's character portrayal of the protagonists and main supporting characters is still very good. There are no peeing spots, and the rhythm can be as high as 9 points. The plot is classic but breaks through the classics, giving people a feeling of "I seem to know what will happen next, but I still want to see what surprises the author can give us." The plot is cliche, but this book is a classic. This is not a ❤️pot article. I hope the author will not write it as a ❤️pot article! The battle is still very exciting. Overall, it's worth a read. It's a Michelin-level side dish. With more words, it's no problem to use it as the main course. Good luck, author! @ Salted Fish Ken who is not doing his job properly

The current early stage is pretty good, but the character descriptions are a little too delicate, and there are a little bit of poison, but not particularly big ones. It's just that not many people may read this subject, and I don't know if the author can stick to it. 25 Years 09.24 Follow-up review Alas, he has a physique that can kill monsters with a single blow. When he encountered someone asking for help at a distance of 500 meters, he was not sure what was going on and should not go because there were no thieves in his team. And who is the thief who laid the foundation for this? He lived a small life through petty theft, and even stole the protagonist's most important space bag, which contained food and alchemy teacher's inheritance badge. 500 Meters, with the physical fitness of these warriors, I would like to ask, do they need 2 minutes to run? Does it take 5 minutes to go back and forth? I say 5 minutes because this is a dungeon and the terrain is not flat. It's already slow enough, isn't it? This is a classic fake mercy plot. In order to show that the protagonist is not the Virgin and is not willing to die, but for the safety of his teammates, he does not help, so he returns to the Adventurer's Guild for help. . Under normal circumstances, the corpses of people asking for help would be completely cold. Have you ever thought about a question? The current protagonist group does not need this description, but this situation occurs simply because you need this thief to join the team and the foreshadowing is poorly written?

The author's novel reminds me of a real alternate world (Grimgar of Fantasy and Ash). It's a pity that it's delayed, author, please work hard to write a true otherworld novel that is better than Jumonji Ao [Like]

The description is detailed and the content gives people a creepy feeling of empathy. Anyway, when I saw the standard speech of the shield warrior in Dashan, I felt like I got goosebumps. I hope the author can keep writing.

Book title: "In the world of real adventure, support is the most important thing!" Author: Xianyu Ken who is not doing his job properly As a time-travel novel in a different world, among the foreign persimmons with many cool articles, the protagonist serves as an assistant without plug-ins, and the team grows up in the cruelty of the other world with a small amount of warmth. The writing of life in the other world is exquisite, and each person's personality is also very vividly depicted. In short, this is a novel that can make people cry in tears! The shortcoming is that it is not enough to watch [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss]

A very excellent Japanese light novel and Western fantasy work. I personally think it is much better than Japanese Western fantasy light novels. The first volume has just been completed, so this review will be based on the first volume. The plot is very well written, and every link is so smooth that you can't stop reading it. I even squatted down to read this novel and my legs became numb and I knelt on the ground... There are some places that feel a bit too coincidental, but they are all within the normal range, even much less than other books, but it is closer to reality. Reality is always full of coincidences. All in all, the plot of this book is very smooth. It does not make people feel abrupt when sudden dramas occur, but makes people feel that it should be so. There is nothing wrong with this development. The character setting is also very good. Whether it is the protagonist group or various supporting characters, it seems that they all have their own distinctive characteristics and personalities, and they will not make people feel stereotyped. Especially the protagonist group. Although the first volume has just ended because the time span is not very likely, it is only a little more than a month, so the changes and growth are not that big, but the progress of several people and the emotional changes at each point in time can be visibly felt, which I think is very vivid. As for the remaining issues such as team relationships, combat power, world view, etc., After all, the first volume has just ended and we have left the prison and gained freedom, so it is difficult to draw direct conclusions, but as of now, there are no problems, they are all very normal, reasonable and without any surprises. And reading the author's comments, I can feel that he has his own specific settings and outline of the future, so I feel quite reassured. The final summary is: this book is a rare story about ordinary people traveling through different worlds, and it is written in a smooth and reasonable way that makes it easy to read. If I had to give a more specific evaluation of this book, it would be that if this book was on a paid reading platform such as Qidian, I would be very willing to pay to subscribe + vote. It is an honor for me to see this book on Tomato.

I have been a bookworm for ten years. The pace of the whole book is very smooth so far. It is very comfortable to read on Tomato. The male protagonist has a good character and is very responsible, and the supporting characters are also well portrayed by the author. All in all, I feel very comfortable reading this book.

I searched through the entire Internet to find the latest Western fantasy novels. Those who like to read Western fantasy can use it as a fairy grass. The protagonist group travels to another world to become cannon fodder at the frontier. With the panel profession, they start as assistants and gain a foothold in the kingdom step by step. The group portraits are very detailed and have the warmth of a big family. But there are also tears and a grand and epic background. The map is large, the combat power is not broken, and it focuses on the alchemy aspect. (The only drawback is that there are too few updates and it is not enough to read, so I have no choice but to write a book review. I hope Xianyu Ken will do more for the sake of good reviews [crying]) @ Salty Fish Ken

I really like this kind of traditional Western fantasy novel. There is no excessive cheating. There is no cliché intrigue among the protagonists. Everyone has a unique personality charm. They will not blame each other and will shoulder their own responsibilities.