Qi Refiners in the River of History

Evaluation after reading forty chapters Top grade grain and grass This is a potential new book that is close to a small masterpiece [Sending Hearts]. The author has written the cliché settings of Qi Practitioners and the Age of Ending Law very well. Although there are not many documents that can be verified on the history of the Warring States Period, it can still be seen that the author has carefully researched the data and made his own adaptation. He has cleverly reduced the number of supporting characters who directly portray the appearance and used more things to bring out the characters. This is actually what fictional historical web novels should do. After all, there are many characters. In fact, we have a basic concept of color. As for the shortcomings, I can personally feel that the efficacy of a pill is a bit weak for a low-demon world. However, many plots are closely related to the pills, and there are some small logical bugs in the writing. The pace of the plot is fast and slow. The author has a slight sense of superiority for future generations to see the ancients. The overall impression is still very good. Keep up the good work and update [Sending Hearts] Personal subjective rating: more than half three stars [making faces] Follow the entry-level bookworm Smoked Fish to take you to read online articles [Blow a kiss]

It's really a rare high-level start. This book is beyond the scope. Come on, the author.

This book is considered to be a mid-to-high-end article in my several-year writing career. It has a unique style and unique insights, and the plot design is closely integrated with history. At the same time, there is no lack of reasonable secondary creation. In the end, I just hope that the author will continue to update it. I know that good writing naturally needs polishing, and I just hope that the author will stick to it [laughs]

This book is different from ordinary fairy tales. It is a combination of history and fairy tales. The subject matter is very novel and the author's writing is good. It is currently being serialized and I have just tied it. Those who like historical themes can also come in and take a look. It is really well written! 5 Star recommendation!

It's a very good book. I hope I can continue to write it well. If you like "Poor Ghost...", You can read it. It really writes about the ruthlessness of rolling history. The laws of nature are consistent. They will not survive for Yao or perish for Jie.

It's very comfortable to watch, not toxic at all, just too little [almost crying] I pressed the author against the wall, pulled off my tie, tucked the hair on the side of the author's face behind his ears, lifted the author's chin, slowly came closer, and said to the author in a magnetic and charming voice, "Can I ask for an update? [Licking screen]

Generally speaking, there are no bad points. The protagonist may have some contradictions, but so far it is a good work. At least it is better than other so-called 9-point reviews on Tomato. As for the problem of the heroine that many people talk about, I think it doesn't matter whether there is a heroine or not. When will having a heroine become a deductible item for a book?

It's good-looking, it's really good-looking. As a time-travel immortal novel, a man takes history and does not change history at will. Many people say this is poisonous. In fact, it is not the case. How can the long history be changed by the power of one person? So what if it changes? History will always repair itself, and changing history is a big cause and effect, so just be a bystander and participate occasionally.

I saw this post again after seeing the comments and replies. How to say it? In terms of writing style, I think it should be considered a top-notch Tomato book, and it is one of the few books that I have read every day. To be honest, this book should have ended at the time when the heroine died. Until then, this book has at least a 9.3 To 9.4 Rating in my mind. Unfortunately, the author's concept has always been too narrow. In the end, I suspect that it was forced to read because of the pace. Earlier, I saw that the protagonist changed a lot of small trends when he had certain abilities. For example, I wrote Jing Ke to fake his death and retire. At that time, I thought that the protagonist would change small trends when his abilities were small, and change the general trend when his abilities were great. However, the author did not do this. He seemed to be a firm believer in maintaining the historical current, or he would not write the changed history at all. I retreated when I saw Zhuge Liang retreating in seclusion after his death. I can accept that you used one retreat to avoid changing the general trend of national peril, but you can't do this every time in the future, right? I don't know if it's due to the pacing, but the protagonist kills very hard from behind, but in the end it treats the symptoms rather than the root cause. This is essentially a fundamental conflict between the author's writing ideas and the readers' ideas. Regarding the shaping of the protagonist, until now I vaguely remember when he first became the last sacrificial wine to stand up for the people of Qi. At that time, the protagonist had just entered the immortal world and did not have much means at all, but he dared to speak for the people in front of the army. This was a successful creation. So when I wrote about the Three Kingdoms, this issue became increasingly clear. When a foreign tribe attacks, do you save it or not? When the Qing army invaded the Central Plains, didn't you save them? When the barbarians invaded in the Yuan Dynasty, didn't you save them? When the Japanese invaded, didn't you save them? Your protagonist, the being who was praised as the Taoist ancestor, and the image he originally established should have collapsed. You saved it, and the author doesn't know how to write it. So the sooner we get to the Three Kingdoms chapter, the better. Some people in the comments said that the protagonist is the second Yi Xiaochuan, but I don't think that is accurate. As far as this book is concerned, the protagonist has not become like that, or the author is the one whose thinking is biased towards Yi Xiaochuan. It is a good thing that he did not continue to write such a contradictory book, otherwise the 8.7 Points will not be guaranteed. All in all, the quality of this book is still excellent.

I personally think this is a relatively well-written novel. Although the protagonist is a person who has traveled through history, he did not rely on his immortality and ability to change the larger history. Instead, as a witness and bystander of history, he did not change the larger fate of others for his own selfish desires. Instead, he did his best when various characters died. Fulfilling what the deceased wanted to witness, or the last wish, is also an attractive feature of each character. Each character does not blame others for not being able to live forever. Each character also has its own charm. Anyway, it is a better novel for me. I hope the author can continue to work hard to maintain (ง•̀_•́)ง Come on