One Piece: A Wizard's Rules for Sailing

Let me help with a wave of ratings! ! ! The good news is: the author writes a great ambiguous atmosphere in large letters. The magic background is also gradual and not all at once. It respects the background of the original Harry Potter and integrates it well into the pirate world. Although there is magical magic, it is very latent in the early stage and will not destroy the balance of combat power in the pirate world. Great writing! ! The bad news is: I just started writing the article, and it's not enough to read. The author is so hungry [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

It's very interesting. It's Shanks' daily sweet story. There are some personal settings that are not acceptable. Lujiu is clearly alive but has become a background. I feel that it has not had as much influence on Ace as the heroine. It is clear that Ace likes his mother so much in the original novel.

Nice! ! ! Those who haven't watched HP can still watch it without any impact. As for the personal opinions of Hong Mao and Lina's cubs, they can be put in the sidebar as a couple to watch daily. It feels a bit awkward to put it in the main text. In the end, I will make a big wish and I will definitely take the medicine and stop updating. . ^_^

From what I've read so far, it's well written. The characters' emotions are very delicate. The cp is red-haired. From what I've read so far, there's no bloody misunderstanding between the male and female protagonists. It's very sweet. It's great. It's a sweet story~ It also saved a lot of emotions. The characters are not OOC, but they just seem a bit short~

Big, that's great. It's just that if you want to write about the plot of raising a cub, it's better to leave it to the extras. I really want to read Sweet Love [Love] [Love] [Love]. It's an absolutely high-quality fanfic. I haven't seen such a comfortable plot in a long time. [Blowing Kiss] [Flowing Kiss] [Flowing Kiss] A rare fan fiction, highly recommended! ! ! The OP world and magic are well combined. Elena comes from another world, and "another world" does not seem abrupt, strange, or unbelievable, because that world seems to be imaginable. The mysterious and amazing Miss Witch should have grown up in a magical world that sounds "dreamlike". The author grasps the narrative structure very well, making people look forward to the subsequent development. Thrilling adventures and warm and interesting daily life are well combined, showing the charm that it deserves. Everything in the book unfolds naturally. The author stands from the perspective of an inclusive observer, not a creator. The characters in the book have souls. They determine their own lives and paint the color of the world. Natural, smooth and comfortable, there is no doubt that this is a story that people are willing to believe is true. The author's writing power has reached an admirable height, and the tension of the plot accommodates all fantasies. Shanks is an indispensable character in the OP. Oda created him this way: intolerant of people who hurt his friends, broad-minded, childish but calm, always trustworthy and reassuring. The author describes him very well with Elena by his side, unfolding the side of many people's fantasies. If the original author has given the character experience, appearance, and personality, then the fan authors are exploring the character's soul, thoughts, and perfecting their emotions. You don't need to write a long story, just a detail, a line, and a few punctuation marks can make people feel "we love him/her equally." You are top creators. Sweet love makes people feel at ease. Author-chan, come on! ! ! [Love]

Hoho watch [full] [full] [full] Fried chicken likes Shanks [get it] [get it] [get it] [get it] The plot is smooth now, and the hp elements are well integrated with One Piece ヾ(ｏω)ノ

Beautiful! ! ! The emotional lines are so delicately written. I really like this feeling. The slightest physical contact makes me feel itchy. [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] Hurry up! When will you kiss? The writing is superb! Very graphic! The magic is also written in the same world view as Harry Potter, not OOC at all! Just need to gain some weight before watching [send heart][send heart][send heart]

It's quite good-looking. The male and female protagonists are both good.

Super pretty [love] [love] [love] The girl is calm and steady, and she is growing up all the time. The ambiguous pull with Shanks is very touching. I will update it quickly [crazy] Modo Modo

I really like it and think it's very well written! ! The good news is that I found a good article, and the bad news is not long ago [crying]