A Pirate King fanfic, paired with Shanks, featuring an original heroine. Akari, the first mate of a merchant ship, thinks she'll only ever do two things in life: sail and wield a blade.
That is, until pirates sink her ship and she looks up from the shattered deck to see a red-haired man. Shanks, one of the Four Emperors, stands at the bow and asks with a smile, "Do you have any booze?"
She trades a bottle of homemade rum for his help, never imagining that this one bottle will set every story that follows in motion.
The routes of the New World. She gets knocked down and gets back up at a Marines training ground, rescues a stranded young Marine officer in a storm, and faces one of the Four Emperors' old enemies in the depths of the sea.
Marine Admiral Kizaru discusses which kind of ginger is best for soup with her at a market. Former Admiral Aokiji rides up on a rusty bicycle to ask her for a light. Whitebeard's First Division Commander drops from the sky to fend off a pirate attack. Straw Hat Luffy loudly declares, "Akari, you're the best!" after eating the fried potato cakes she treated him to. A green-haired swordsman guards her flank in the deep sea with three swords. The blond cook... is acting very strange.
On this sea, some are waiting for ONE PIECE, and some are waiting for the Straw Hat to be returned. She is waiting for the next time they meet, so they can finish that half-bottle of rum.
It looks good, and the writing style is more mature than most of the novels. The emotional scenes between Akari and Shanks are also good and gradually deepened. I just always have the feeling that a storm is coming, and I am worried about whether there will be a knife in the future? Will Akari change the plot? Ace and Dad still died according to the original work, which was quite sad. Disadvantages: 1. There are many bugs in the original work. For example, the Shanks crew only wrote correctly that Beckman and Jesus Bu, and Usobu will also be in the Daughter Kingdom within two years (?), This is a completely avoidable mistake based on the update time. 2. The importance of Akari in the new world situation has been emphasized, but her strength and status are just that of an ordinary merchant ship mate, so how does her importance reflect? 3. It is repeatedly mentioned that strangers see her and see her wearing an old sword with red hair, and guess that she is a red-haired woman. This makes people feel uncomfortable, and they hope that the heroine's strength will improve. 4. Since the romance with Shanks broke up, the plot has become more and more dull. It focuses too much on situation description, resulting in two chapters being updated every day, but there is no plot advancement. The novel still needs conflict and tension. I see that now I feel like the heroine herself doesn't know what she wants to do and has been drifting with the crowd. Is it because the main plot of this article has not been released yet🤔
There are too few articles about One Piece Shanks. I like Shanks very much. I hope more works will appear🥰🥰🥰🥰
Awesome. Seriously watched. Super detailed article, but that doesn't mean the plot is dull. On the contrary, it has ups and downs but also a steady flow of daily life. I fell in love with the heroine. I feel like I learned a lot from reading this book (really, it's great to read this book)
The writing is very good and delicate, and the plot is quite novel 👍
It's Kizaru but it doesn't seem to be Kizaru. I'm looking forward to a different general.
It's a good read and recommended. Those who like the plot and details will find it more comfortable 😳