To Support My Little Sister, I Was Forced to Become a Mercenary

A humble author asks for book reviews online Meow Meow Meow By the way, the author usually only has time to type at night, so in order to maintain a continuous update, he will publish a small chapter at 11:55 every night, usually about 1,000 words, and then make up the remaining 3,000 words around 2 in the morning. So readers, what you read between 11:55 and 2 o'clock is the incomplete version. Remember to read the 3,000 words I added the next day, and I may make some changes to the first 1,000 words. It is best to read it again. Please be patient with me, readers. So to summarize, it is not recommended to watch this book between 11:55 pm and 2 am. It is best to watch Meow Meow later or during the day the next day. You've all seen this and clicked in. Please give me a book review, meow meow meow!

There are no obvious logical errors in the main body of the story, but the two protagonists have little interaction in the current plot. Considering that this is a group drama with two protagonists, this point can be left aside for the time being. The subsequent plot should consider two parallel lines instead of the two protagonists taking turns to appear; The regional mission is obviously the first important node of the story, and the length is expected to be the "first volume" of this work. In Weiyin's offensive and defensive battle, the space is concentrated on the battlefield. It only emphasizes the support but lacks the description of one's own support. After this part is over, the reasons for the lack of enemy engineering equipment must be supplemented. Judging from the current plot progress, this work should have a detailed outline and the number of words will not be short, so the data will not be very good. The author needs to take precautions in advance to prevent any impact on the subsequent plot. (Personal opinion only, for reference only) Considering that readers should not cause major deviations from the main body of the story that the author may complete, there are still many suggestions in my mind that are still in the draft stage and have not been mentioned. Finally, I hope that the author can achieve success in the future.

Good-looking(๑＞ڡ＜)☆ If you don't marry and keep following, then I will keep watching Ciallo~(ㄥ･ω<)☆

The writing is good, but you can add some original weapons from the IFW world view, or add some standard equipment. [Chigua] Of course, the above are all personal opinions, please let me know if there is anything wrong.

Very beautiful, the content is novel, highly recommended! ! !

Not bad, very beautiful

There's not much to say, people who like it like it, and people who don't like it don't like it either.

Big cheers for the author

Okay, just a bit boring

Come on! Keep working hard