Help! My Archrival Is Raising Me as His Daughter While I’m Still a Toddler

The writing is very good, and I almost never write book reviews, but this book currently only has a rating of over six points, and I really don't want others to leave after seeing the rating. The male protagonist has a very cute personality, he is arrogant and venomous and refuses to admit that he likes the female protagonist. The genius boy hides his little thoughts in various places. In fact, everyone knows that he likes the heroine to no end, regarding this little matter of love. It's a pity that the heroine can't see it, it makes me anxious [smile] I also like the heroine's character design. She has a clear idea but the rules are actually quite rigid. I have always said that the heroine is pedantic and teaches too much. Of course, this is what the hero and the funny fairy said, and it is a bit exaggerated. The disciples of the sect also said that the senior sister is rigid and rules-based, but this is how it should be. The heroine should have a lot of ideas. She is an interesting soul because she has shouldered too many responsibilities in her original sect. She is obviously not a senior disciple in the sect, but she takes on the responsibilities of a senior disciple in the sect, teaching disciples, arranging training and other trivial matters. She has a heavy burden on her shoulders, so even though she is an interesting soul, she has to become stable under the burden [crying]. The heroine left the original sect and turned into a cub form without those burdens. In addition, she saw the world with a new look. No one knew her true identity, so she escaped a lot without any scruples. I think it is very reasonable [shy] In addition, the male protagonist's stepfather attributes are maximal, and he can be so perfect as a stepfather that it kills me. In addition, in this world, only the female protagonist feels that she and the male protagonist are mortal enemies. In fact, in the eyes of others, it is just a way for the male protagonist to flirt. I want a huge word count to kill me, so can I update 100 chapters a day [shy]

It's very beautiful. I just want to update it as soon as possible. Also, can I have my sister get back the spirit roots and sword bones in the heroine's body as soon as possible? I feel so uncomfortable otherwise [I'm going to cry]

The male protagonist made me so miserable... As a result, I couldn't stand it after reading more than a hundred chapters. When he said that he was also a human being, I burst into tears [crying] [crying] There is actually nothing wrong with the female protagonist's character, she is very lively and very steely. Maybe it is because of this steel that the fall of the horse happened much later than I thought. In addition, when a series of authors described the male protagonist's psychology and his love for the female protagonist, I really couldn't stand it. The writing is quite good, and the settings, details, and group portraits of the male and female protagonists are very good. For personal reasons, I don't accept the fact that the heroine loses her horse too late. And I can't stand the pulling feeling between the two of them when I almost fell off my horse for the first time...? In general, people who can accept the late loss of horses can take a look, and those who want to see the breeding system can also take a look. I can't do it anymore. I followed up and watched some. Who can tell me that you, a boy and a boy, would be so ambiguous towards a heroine who looks like a child? ? ? It makes me feel psychologically uncomfortable. I can understand if the heroine is still the same age and the second hero is attracted to her and falls in love with her, but is the heroine still a little girl now? ? ? What are you going to do? ? ? ? ? To a little girl, you just promise me your life (the heroine is about 6 or 7 years old). I rely on you as a grown man. You are in your twenties and you are doing knitting? ? ? If she is not the heroine and has shrunk, you will have to eat biubiu. I don't know why I wrote this plot. It made me feel physically and mentally uncomfortable all the time. .

I think it's pretty good-looking, and I really want to have the kind of heroine who loses her horse, but the heroine doesn't know about it, and the hero secretly hides it in his heart after knowing it, and then teases her from time to time [shy][shy]

It's a very good book. The author is very good at handling the details. The emotional plot is reasonable and unconventional. It's a development (? It's considered a semi-development) story that's worth reading. It's really good-looking. The male and female protagonists are very well-shaped. I like it very much. It's very realistic. You know, I'm very picky when it comes to reading, but I really can't find any faults with this novel, maybe except for the comparison with the Canglan Sect stuff, but it's innocuous and not worth mentioning. The male and female protagonists are very smart and powerful, and they have a tacit understanding between the mortal enemies, so it's still very enjoyable to read. The old enemy is the old enemy. It is impossible for an old enemy to become a wife. My old enemy is my wife. Nice looking ones, more to come. The writing style is light, lively and interesting.

The more I read, the more passionate I felt when I read ancient novels. There is no need to give everyone a happy ending, and it is not necessary for everyone to have a significant other to stay with each other for the rest of their lives. Love is not something that cannot be mentioned, just follow your heart, even if you know that this love will have no consequences... The heroine is very charming, so she is enough to maintain the motivation of other characters to like her. Except for the protagonist, the rest of the supporting characters are not stereotyped. There are also outstanding and flesh-and-blood supporting characters. Both perfection and defects are beautiful, which is good.

Very good book, great group portraits. The heroine is good, the hero is good, Master Xiaoyao is good, the senior brothers are good, Sister Yun is good, Zhou Zizai is good, the sect is good, even Qingheng is not bad. When I first started reading it, I just thought it was quite funny. The author's writing style is humorous (one disadvantage here is that it incorporates too many Internet memes. First, it's a fairy tale. Everyone's habitual thinking is based on ancient times. Although it is humorous, it has a strong sense of fragmentation; second, it feels like it has lowered the writing skills. It's obviously normal and can express a lot of humor, and it seems that the author has a profound writing skills, but the flaws do not hide the flaws), it was very relaxing and happy to watch, and gradually I started to wonder why the heroine didn't come back unchanged, why she kept hiding her identity, and then Later, I thought about why the hero and heroine didn't come back to save people, why the protagonist didn't appear... When I saw Zhou Zizai died in the battle at the end, many familiar names died in the battle, Xiaoyao burned himself to delay time... I realized that this was a group portrait, not only the hero and heroine, but also the Canglan Sect. , Jingyun Sect, Baicao Sect... Each sect, Zhou Zizai, Xiaoyao, each sect leader... They also have their efforts, highlights and perseverance. In the end, I only remember Zhou Zizai saying: "I feel uncomfortable again..." Being comfortable is not comfortable, and being happy is not happy. The author is really a wonderful person!

Ah, I really want to cry. I love the little Phoenix so much. When her soul dissipated, she secretly signed a contract and gave her nirvana ability to Luoluo. Knowing her identity, she silently protected her. The moment he was injured was so uncomfortable. There are other novels where the protagonist contracts multiple beasts, but Luo Xun does not. When Xiaoyao refused to contract with the snake (Rin), he did not know the real reason, but he still indulged it. This is a mysterious fate. Also, when the heroine said that she wanted to live and die together, Little Phoenix did not hesitate and was willing to accompany his sister, no matter life or death. Although Qingheng is said to be bad, he is also quite miserable. He was used by Demon Lord Ming from the beginning to the end. One Liu Ruying is stupid, stupid, narcissistic and disgusting, while the other Liu Ruying is pure and evil. Ning Zichen is also very good. He has "low self-esteem" like Little Phoenix when facing Luo Luo (for fear that Luo Xun hates him). The most terrifying thing is not death, but that no one remembers to care about you. The male protagonist has been warming the female protagonist. Even when he is not sure that Luo Shu is Luo Xun, he also protects the so-called " "Daughter"; also, the male protagonist was so handsome and resourceful when he fought against the demons as the leader. The most touching thing was that he finally succeeded in defeating the demons and saved the heroine at the last moment (fortunately, the heroine did not die, otherwise it would be so sad, Ning Zichen and Luo Xun haven't expressed their feelings to each other yet). I feel that when I was writing this battle at the end, I was sublimating the three-dimensional image of each little character. More than 10,000 people from the Canglan Sect died in the battle. It was really sad, and only one person (Yuan Hagi) was left. I thought of the hardship, persistence, and fight to the death of the predecessors during the Anti-Japanese War, and it made me feel even more uncomfortable. If Jingyun Sect and the others had not left Luofengpo, perhaps Canglan Sect would not have had so many deaths. Finally, the extra chapter is very interesting, and the male protagonist has love hidden in his clumsiness. Unfortunately, the finale does not include the two of them together, which feels a little regretful to me.

The plot is quite novel. When I saw the sacrifices of various sects in the back, I felt that it was sublimated. At first, I just thought it was an ordinary slap-in-the-face sweet pet plot, but I didn't expect that it got so high that it almost broke my waist. I feel that the author is very suitable for writing that kind of combat type of article. The psychological warfare and combat deployment are all written very well later. In comparison, the previous relationship between the male and female protagonists feels a bit... Strange. I don't know how to describe it. Anyway, it just doesn't feel very smooth, but it's not a big problem.

Praise: The story is quite good, the emotional line concept, the world view construction are good, there are laughs and tears, the relationship between the male and female protagonists is passionate and tearful, but also has a rare sweetness. The foreshadowing is well laid, the characters are full, and the logic is clear. It is suitable for reading without emotion but with a brain. Suggestion: The writing is not bad, but there are too many beautiful sentences that set off the atmosphere and describe the atmosphere. One sentence after another is like a show off, and the writing of the subsequent battle is a bit confusing. I read it. Who wants to see how to arrange the troops? Sacrificing personal feelings in order to highlight the feelings of family and country is a bit too lateral in the art of war. There is not much description of the skills of cultivating immortals. The endings of many people are unclear. For example, Qingheng, his love line has so much paving the way, but it has a beginning and no end. It is over in the end. The emotional journey is lacking. The male protagonist is a bit invisible in the last thirty chapters, and the female protagonist becomes an adult only after the finale. To sum up: from being beaten to being a personal master to the top level, it is worth a read. If you want to see the heroine sacrifice her life to save the world and appreciate everyone more than the feelings of the family and the country, you can come here. However, except for the extra stories, the romance content is not too much and accounts for about 30%. It is more towards the heroine's growth drama. What are the good free novels to choose? Just take a picture and enjoy it.