A Woman in a Man’s Body, Chasing the Heroine: I’m Serious!

First of all, I want to say that it is very beautiful, the subject matter is novel, and the writing style is also very good. It has connotations in many places. However, let us talk about the shortcomings. First, there are too many psychological descriptions of the protagonist. The psychological description is normal, and he is also a woman wearing a man's body. I can accept a little more psychological description, but there is too much psychological description. In the early stage, I wrote about the protagonist's conflicts, and in the later stage, I wrote about the protagonist's desire to get close to the heroine. There is a lot of psychological description. The plot seems to be dragging, but also monotonous and boring (many people have reported that the protagonists don't have long mouths) Second, I know that the protagonists do have great charm, but there is no need to create some abnormal suitors in order to highlight the charm of the protagonists. (For example, in the scene where the protagonist is surrounded by girls in the botanical garden, a distinguished guest has a cold face, but those girls still dare to come forward? I believe that some people do dare, but not in such a large number. When you go to eat Malatang, since you are already a young lady, the description is like a crazy girl, which is not good, okay) Third, I really don't think it's very sexual tension for the protagonist to say that he wants to hug, kiss, and crush the heroine. I feel like a beast in heat. I can understand those normal physiological phenomena, but it feels too cumbersome to talk about his thoughts and restraint every day. Just say it once or twice (and it has a very deliberate feeling, as if you want to create this image. When you say that he wants to protect him silently, where is the silence? You should let the readers discover it for themselves, rather than deliberately telling it) There is still a lot of room for improvement in this book, keep up the good work. This book is really good. As long as it is improved a little bit, more people will definitely like it!

The subject matter is very novel, and the female protagonist likes the female protagonist. But when I looked at it, I felt that the female soul was suppressed by the male body, and it was difficult to see the female character traits in her, which made me feel a little uncomfortable.

It's good-looking. The male protagonist doesn't dare to admit his love because of his father. The female protagonist mistakenly thinks that the male protagonist doesn't like her. It's full of tension. Especially the female protagonist's coldness and brokenness but her inner strength and bravery really touched me.

It's so beautiful, both babies are adorable, hehe, I hope Sui Sui will be able to work hard soon, defeat the scumbag, and rescue his wife. Maybe there was a misunderstanding between the two babies at the beginning, which made everyone feel bad, but I think there is a reason. Sui Sui's family reasons make it difficult for him to determine his feelings for Xia Tian, ​​and he just wants to let go. Because of this, it also reflects the depth of his feelings for Xia Tian. Xia Tian also subconsciously avoids sudden warmth because he has been deceived. Readers have a God's perspective and may find it difficult to understand the two babies, but if they were to think about it in their own shoes, their hearts would be so unsettled. (Personal opinion after reading, sorry if I am offended)

Oh my god, it's this top-notch pulling feeling. Qin Sui's love is very obscure, and it feels a little crazy. She surrenders to Xia Tian willingly. Xia Tian is also very smart and sober. She is not the kind of brainless heroine. She doesn't have many tricks, but she is a little bit sadistic. She has a slightly longer mouth at the back, which makes me feel more comfortable. The only shortcoming is that there are too few more [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

It's so good-looking and will be updated soon. There are too few good-looking women wearing male BGs [Blowing kisses][Flowing kisses][Flowing kisses]

Reading it in the middle of the night is really touching, so sweet, I want to sink into their feelings. This is a good book, the feelings are very delicate, a person who wants to take summer as his own, but chooses to let the summer stars hang in the sky forever. No, it was never the freedom I gave her, but she is who she is. I love her, I love her as much as I love summer.

Yes, yes, but isn't Qin Sui a bit too masculine? Who still remembers that there is a female soul in his body😭❓

What to do? I feel like I'm in love with the heroine, how could she be so miserable? How could that man named Li destroy her? (The person named Li seems to be a book wearer, or someone who has awakened and knows the plot) Stop abusing the heroine, it looks so heartbreaking. She was supposed to be like a little sun, always innocent and cute, without suffering torture, but she became like this because of that surname. Lin Lin is so miserable. I hope she can find her own freedom and not forget herself while being with the male protagonist. Author, you must first give Lin Lin freedom, and then let them fall in love with peace of mind and no worries. (I think Lin Lin is right. How can she be so cute? She has such a good personality. Lin Lin wants to be at the top.) Moreover, the male protagonist and Lin Lin originally ran in both directions to redeem themselves. When the male protagonist was originally a girl, he was afraid that he would become a domestic violence victim because of his father. He felt like he was seeing the sun for the first time. He wanted to touch Lin Lin, but was afraid that he would hurt her. Moreover, he also has flaws in his character. Although he looks cheerful, he is actually very anxious because he is afraid of ruining everything like his father. He also wants to touch, According to Lin Lin, she should have been happy. She was cheerful, upbeat, innocent and cute. He is the kind of character who is goal-oriented and very tenacious. He is working hard for his goal, but everything is destroyed because of meeting that person named Li. However, from the small details in the article, it can be seen that she still hopes to move towards the light, she still does not want to fall, and she still has the right to pursue happiness. How can she be so cute? She had always wanted to stay away from the man named Li, and even if she was hypocritically entangled with him, she had always moved towards the light. Both girls are very good babies, they are slowly and nakedly meeting each other, it is so cute. You must hold each other hostage to the top (You must climb to the top very calmly and then be together.)

Big cheers for the author! Hurry up and update it. It's not enough to watch. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is too delicately described. The male protagonist's feelings for the female protagonist have reached their peak, but they have always been restrained. The two of them are so matched. ! ! The author is great, the pace is too slow🥹, I want to see the life of the young couple together