The Ten Thousand Worlds’ Lounge

One thing to say, what Lao Shoudao did in The Devil Boy, if it wasn't the massacre of the city in the end, I would still be indifferent to it. After all, humans are humans, demons are demons, and racial wars are understandable. But if he massacres the city in the end, then I can't bear it. Just be a villain with peace of mind.

Others are okay, except that the name is Wanjie Leisure Room, but the tasks are seamlessly connected. One appears as soon as the other is completed, which is not relaxing at all.

What is your golden fairy setting like?

To be honest, there are very few casual and daily fan fictions that I have seen on Tomato. In particular, my favorite is Inhumanity, which is the first comic I have read. However, there are still a few problems that I think from the perspective of daily novels: ① As for the part about writing rewards, I wrote several chapters. In fact, when I read this part, I basically brushed it off. If the reward is not needed, maybe just summarize it. If it is used, you can wait until it is used to add its specific functions, but a general introduction to the main functions is enough. ② I think that the main body of the novel is about daily leisure after all, and it might be better to insert some extras or a small theater in the middle. ③This is just my personal feeling that as a group portrait article, I feel that the personalities of some characters are not very distinct, especially the protagonist. It lacks the relaxed feeling of inhumanity. For example, when the protagonist is being masturbated by Brother Yang, if it were replaced by a feeling of anger or despair, the character's image might be more three-dimensional. I always feel that the protagonist gives me a feeling of no emotion, anger, sorrow, or joy, and always maintains a feeling of indifference. At least the image in my mind is always that of the protagonist smiling all the time and doing everything nonchalantly. It's not like the character of the characters in Inhumanity. ④Although the novel mentions many characters, there are very few characters and plots in this part. For example, Hulk, Black Widow, Hawkeye, Captain America, Zhongli, Wendy... In fact, referring to Inhumanity, it should be possible to focus on describing a world character in each mission, and at the same time, for example, members of one or two worlds will not participate, so that some people will not feel irrelevant. ⑤The most important point is, update quickly! ! !

It's very peaceful and there's no intrigue. It's very interesting. Life is already very boring. When reading novels, I also want to read something warm and peaceful.

Look at the cover, it can't be the heroine of September [laughs evilly]

How to say it? When I saw the last one, it was stable, smooth and silky, with no OOC or anything strange. I was deeply impressed. Overall, it was normal.

Does the protagonist travel through time? Is there no heroine?

Overall this book is very good, the characters are not OOC. Creating your own characters is also great. The plot is very smooth and not too abrupt.

@Techdodo You can consider including Honkai Impact. I want to see Lao Yang meet Otto. [Laughing evilly] By the way, it can also change the tragedy of the collapse. [Sending Hearts]