The White-Haired God of War, Hated by All, Can No Longer Hide His True Self

It looks so good. I fell off it so quickly after the first one. I must give this praise, and Yunji is so handsome and charming. I want to see how handsome Yunji is after losing the horse, and he also looks like the Yun family cannot reach them (￣へ￣)

It's so good to watch, baby Yunji is super cute [Send my heart] [Send my heart] [Send my heart] The previous plot made me want to put my palm into it ಠಠconvex What kind of things are there in the Yun family, except of course the Yunji (*ᵒ̶̶̷̀ω˂̶́∗)੭₎₎̊₊♡ Each member of the Yun family received one slap, and Yun Mo even received the Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms [laugh][laugh][laugh]

I think this book is very interesting. Although the background of his world is ABO, it does not describe things like pheromones too much. It just gives me the feeling that their relationship is natural and is a real relationship. It is not controlled by the so-called pheromones. The relationship between two people together is more natural. The narration rhythm of the story is also okay. The pace of Yunji's identity being recognized is not very slow, but also the description of the family. The main reason is that I like Yunji very much, and the description of the family made me a little angry. This is another way to prove that the author's description is very good. I am very much looking forward to the author's next description, and I also hope that our Yunji will receive more love from everyone in the coming time. He is not only a general of 101, but also a child who has been away from home for 15 years. Even though he has gone through so many ups and downs, he is only 28 years old. Even though his body is disabled, he still has good intentions towards the world. I hope that Yunji, Huo Lin and several pairs of deputy CPs in the article can all come to a happy ending.

It's really good to watch. The live broadcast of "Sick and Weak" in the Star Twins Vest is all my favorite elements. I didn't expect it to appear in a book! ! ! The character of the protagonist is also very good, and the writing is not bad. I hope the author will work hard to update it [laughs]!

It looks good, but the time is not right. He should come to see me in a finished state, not when he has hundreds of thousands of words [smile]. It's probably like the feeling of a big boss going to a novice village, there's a secret sense of refreshment. I know Zai is very powerful, but idiots don't know, hey, it's just like watching a clown. [Eat melon][Punch hard]PS write quickly——!

Watch it well, watch it well, it's just for the reason that the waistcoat is dropped. [Full][Full] When the waistcoat is dropped, it's very satisfying to be in the spotlight. It's not sloppy at all! In the early stage, the Yun family only knew how to favor their adopted son and even said that the protagonist's younger brothers were suffering. I actually believed the slanderous words of my adopted son [smile] [smile] But it's okay. It's very fast to recognize each other with just one glance. The plot rhythm is well controlled. It might be a little irritating early on. But in the later stage, Shou recognized the faces of the Yun family [smirking] and would never forgive them! I really like the setting between the general and the general. Come on, Shuangqiang! !

Not bad, good looking! The emotional line was very fast, and the two people fell out of love with each other. I thought it would take a long time, but I didn't expect it to be so fast! It's exactly what I want. This article really pokes me

I hope the author can update two articles a day. One article is not enough to read [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration] Why are my comments swallowed? [Cry][cry][cry][cry]

It's a new book, the emotional line is very fast, and the author also updates it on time. It's worth reading. I look forward to Yunji falling off his vest [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully]

Demining: 1. In the early stage, Shou was a bit nervous, and he was always unaware of the rejection and blows from his family. He was often bullied, and because of Shou's longing for his family, he did not fight back, so he might feel a little aggrieved. (But this got better after Chapter 80) 2. There is a childbirth plot! There is a childbirth plot! There is a childbirth plot! (Say important things three times) And the plot is very curious. I am pregnant, but I am suffering from morning sickness (I don't know if this is normal in reality, but I can't accept it. Doesn't pregnancy sickness only happen to pregnant people) 3. The characteristics of ABO are not obvious, and people often forget that this is an ABO. Children who come here for ABO themes should think twice. Overall review: Overall, this book is quite well written. It has two strong points. Shou and gong are equally matched. There is no such thing as a strong Shou but a strong attack. The experience of Shou is also very distressing, and it feels good after falling off the horse. But the ending is a bit rushed. Starting from the birth (probably the last five or six chapters), the pace suddenly becomes very fast, and I feel that the character design is a bit broken, and the plot is also very strange (pregnancy, morning sickness), as if it was a different author. But it's just the small part at the end, but overall it's still very well written. Overall, I still recommend it [Blow Kiss]