Breaking the Boundaries of Reality to Become the Light of Ultraman Hope

In the Severn world, because the Pedan people were about to attack two scholars, the protagonist chose to save them. However, when the protagonist was rescuing people, he had to pretend to save them even though he could directly save them. During the process, others mistakenly thought he was a Pedan man and did not explain. , But knocked the opponent down directly (of course, this is because others thought that the protagonist who suddenly appeared was a Pedan star and pointed a gun at him, but in this case, normal people would think that a person who suddenly appeared and said incomprehensible words was a Pedan star, right? ) It feels quite confusing. I have to pretend to transform in front of others, and then I am quickly deflated and blown away as soon as I transform.

The fighting scenes are very detailed and shocking, and there is always a sense of pride that overflows from the heart when watching them. What is even more commendable is the arrangement of the plot. There is no bloated plot that is constantly repeated. The placement of foreshadowing and the description of the characters are unconventional. They are presented in a variety of ways and are amazing. It is definitely a rare masterpiece in the Ultra series, which shows how much the author has put his heart into it. In fact, in terms of my feelings, I like the author's description of Ultra's spirit the most. The three views are very positive and make me feel warm. I sincerely look forward to the follow-up. The only flaw is that the author's arrangements for increasing the protagonist's strength are a little overdone. Of course, if the author wants to write about a larger world, and his vision is not limited to the Ultra world, just pretend that I didn't say it, but this will test the plot arrangement of the author, and I look forward to the follow-up. I also hope that the author will do more to measure the combat power system and strength comparison. The official data is really fake and too confusing. I just read what the author wrote before, and I have to say that he has made great progress. In fact, it also reflects that the author is not very skilled in describing family relationships and love. Fortunately, the author uses his strengths and avoids his weaknesses in this book and basically does not write about it. But the emotional output of a novel is essential. I still hope that the author can write about family love and not use a lot of space. I think it would be better to write this to highlight the "humanity" of the protagonist. Otherwise, the protagonist will appear too "divine" and fall into the cliché of cool writing. It might be better to have more vigor and vitality that college students should have. I have some suggestions for writing about family relationships: describe more about the daily life with parents, so that the protagonist can have a choice when facing major difficulties, and the emotions will be more intense. It is best not to write about the protagonist's identity being exposed in front of his parents. If it must be exposed, it is best to reduce the frequency of family relationships after writing. I hope the author will write better and better.

Five-star praise! The writing is good, although I can't say it's particularly good, but it's higher than the average level of Tomato, and it's one of the few good Owens in Tomato. The world view is very grand, and the characters are well created. The protagonist is Ultraman and has his own Ultra spirit. He does not go on a killing spree after gaining power like some novels. It feels like the pit is dug very deep, and the plots of each branch are just right. The acquisition of power is also very reasonable and step-by-step. It is not too strong or too weak, nor is it too weak. Also, the updates are really fast [like] I hope the author can write a masterpiece with millions of words and a thousand chapters while ensuring quality [Love] [Love] [Love] By the way, the combat power of the main world is also very reasonable. There is no special power like ordinary Owen, and there is no poisonous point where the power is too strong to suppress the protagonist.

Yes, it is very well written, especially the first three golden chapters, which are very attractive and continue to attract people during the period. However, we still need to carefully consider the actual organizational issues. Many articles fail here. I hope to reduce the realistic plot as much as possible. I feel that writing realistic things is not very good.

Okay, it looks good, but that female classmate feels a bit redundant [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ]

It's quite satisfactory. After reading Chapter 65, I feel that the protagonist's character is a bit too lazy to go to the toilet. However, the author is very careful and will keep working hard. Recommended for readers who are new to or have some knowledge of the arcane system.

There is no Ultra core, I just write for the sake of writing. But much better than most bragging, arrogant, arrogant novels. If you really want to make an evaluation, this is just an ordinary novel, but its ordinaryness is better than most similar novels, or the author is very real. He does not write fake and empty content, but just uses ordinary text to narrate an ordinary story.

It's very good to watch. I've been watching it for a long time. [Thinking] The author's writing skills have been improving, and the protagonist also has an Ultra spirit. I just recommend skipping to read it at the beginning, because there are still some problems with the early plot. [Hold your face] I recommend skipping to read the campus chapter and the main world chapter. This part is a bit poisonous.

It's so beautiful. I saw it yesterday morning and couldn't stop watching it. The logic is clear and the plot is also very novel. The rating is fake. It's really, really beautiful. [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration]

It's really beautiful. I hope it's Jiang Chengxin's single female lead. I also hope the author will update 100,000 words an hour (=^▽^=)