Honkai: Star Rail: I Have a Few Too Many Love Debts

This work has a base, so people who are familiar with the official main line will find it confusing and unfriendly to the character chef. The male protagonist has a honey background and is a top-level succubus, so the progress of the love line is a bit fast, and almost everyone has already conquered it at the beginning. However, in the Bengtie world view, this kind of fast-food love line is considered normal. It is better to say that Xing/Qiong in the official main line is only a few years old, so he has no idea in that regard [face covering] The character traits of each character are well understood. There is no OOC in general, and it is understandable that there is a slight OOC in some parts to promote the plot. However, the plot framework has been changed according to the official main line. There may be some places that make people feel like they are repeating the plot, but due to the insertion of the male protagonist, the feeling of repetition has been avoided as much as possible. Friends who are familiar with the original main plot should try their best to substitute the protagonist's perspective when reading. Although it is not easy to substitute the protagonist's honey background, but if you don't substitute, it will feel awkward, which will affect the viewing experience [face covering] The author's writing style is okay, but Beng Tie's worldview is too large and has too many characters. The control over the plot remains to be seen later. At the same time, some characters may be chosen, resulting in less plot. If you can accept the above questions, then this work is suitable for your entertainment after dinner, and maybe it can also satisfy your fantasies about some of your favorite characters [smile] Having said that, the purpose of second creation is to supplement the spiritual satisfaction that is rare in the official world, so you should fantasize hard [laughter]

The writing is really good, there is no sense of inconsistency, it fits the plot very well, and the relationship between the characters is well described. It is not the kind of plot where you are a superman when you are happy, but you are also a superman when you are unhappy, but there is also a story about Cao Pi [laughing] The book that I have read so far is the most suitable for my taste [laughing] [laughing] [laughing]

Cocolia is still saved. They really tricked Tiewei to death. Who will speak for the dead Tiewei?

So far it seems like they are just ambiguous stories. I want to see Shen Ru who actually opens a harem.

It's beautiful, it's beautiful, the characters in it are all very well written, I want to play a few more times after watching it [laughs]

I spent several hours watching it, and I found it to be really awesome, and the character design is uncensored. Compared to others, it's pretty good. The speed of the car also made my aunt laugh the whole time [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] I always feel that this book will become a god, and I am just sitting here waiting for the author to become popular [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

The writing is quite good. I found a small number of novels among a large number of memes. The emotional line is quite good, but March 7th is too much. I won it directly [laughing]. Author, I want you to update your teeth ten times a day.

It's simply too nice [Top Post][Top Post][Top Post], the emotional line is simply invincible compared to other fanfics of the same type, but the author stops updating at the most exciting point, which is really annoying [Punch Out][Punch Out] The speed of the update is explosive

I am majoring in Chinese language and literature, and I feel that the writing is very good. There are some contents that can be exchanged. Let's focus on the plot of Belloberg first. At least it is not easy to be backstabbed. The main plot is slowly advanced and there is no rush. The main thing is character creation, especially the relationship with the protagonist, so that it will not appear abrupt. (Also: I want to watch the sisters Natasha and Landau [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration])

The protagonist is well portrayed, and the heroine is not for nothing. Some characters have done their job. They should be given more roles, more care and interaction, and add a group chat or something, so that they don't miss it so much. I have regained my memory, and I should reply to the girls in my memories. I like this book very much. The plot is a bit off, and some plots feel weird and can't be connected. I hope you can pay more attention, come on, author!