An Unscientific Sense of Touch

In addition to the protagonist, there is also a narration from the perspective of Shokuhou Misaki and Shirai Kuroko, which is rare among Demon Forbidden fans. The "main" story (volumes 1 to 3) has been completed The fourth IF extra volume has been completed. The fifth IF extra volume is being serialized. Although it is a side story, it is actually very much like an independent story. If you read the fourth IF volume, it is strongly recommended to read Chapter 47 in one go. It is the conclusion of the entire early period, questioning the protagonist's heart and giving back to the early choices. The main story timeline has been compromised for the sake of story integrity. The if volume timeline is finely calibrated

It's very interesting, and the author updates it very quickly. He must have written it before and then released it in one go. I haven't finished reading the if line of the second volume yet, but I suddenly had a guess and couldn't wait to share it in the comment area. The identity of the protagonist in the first volume can be defined as [omniscience], knowing all the scripts, but without any ability to change the scripts, and can only use the power of other people in the scripts. In the second volume, the identity of the protagonist is changed to the other side of God [Almighty]. After the Dragon King's Sigh incident, the protagonist's ability has become able to accomplish anything he wishes. Although there will be problems with insufficient power, his heart has also begun to change in the direction of the Almighty God. And then wavering between human identity and God's heart. I guess the second volume is about a protagonist who is trying to ensure his identity as a human being and has almighty power, trying to influence the script.

The author really wrote about the fact that in a world view where a single entity destroys the world at every turn (polemic), knowing that information is really despairing. Aleister is not a good person. English Puritanism is the devil of the tree of life. The Roman Orthodox Church... Was kicked to death by Aleister. There is also the demon god represented by Seng Zheng, Othinus, who affects the fate of the world. Damn, do you know how desperate this is? How do you fight with a power ceiling? [Cry]

After reading the first four volumes, the author has a good grasp of multi-perspective group portraits. The problem is that when the plot suddenly speeds up in the later period, the heroine's perspective is missing, resulting in a relative lack of arcs and memory points for the protagonist's character. And because there are too many serious parts in each chapter, what impressed me the most is her high sense of responsibility and low stress resistance level that are very prominent among all the protagonists in the fandom. It's a hard life [laughing and crying]

It can be said that it is the only one among the Demonic Forbidden fanfics I have seen. He made me feel that the people around Kamijou Touma when we were chasing the series were not just decorations, but real people. The reason why people are called people is because they have free will.

The author worked very hard to update 66 chapters with diarrhea in three days, and then it was finished. I give this a good review. The whole thing is biased toward group portraits, and the timeline goes by very quickly, but it tells a complete story and is worth watching.

It is recommended that the author not use the first person narrative like me. This will bring a sense of fragmentation to the reading of the article, just like reading someone else's diary. If you use the third person, you can greatly increase the sense of substitution. It also makes it easier for people to remember the protagonist's name

It is better than 80% of Tomato's books (only online books). Personally I think it is well written. However, the plot of the first world line is too big, very unimportant characters and events are not written, and it is not as exciting as the Forbidden City should be. I hope the plot of the second world line will be written in more detail, with more characters appearing and more character interactions!

Very good book. The basic skills are solid, the reading experience is smooth, and there is nothing to say about its consistency with the original work. The author is particularly good at placing readers in high-pressure environments like the characters in the book, so the experience is very engaging. (?) As of January 15, 2026, multiple volumes have been completed. If you want to see multiple endings, you can try it. In addition, the sweet part is very sweet, as for the knife part... Of course there is no need to talk more. Here are some of my thoughts This is what I was thinking after watching the Christmas special. "The so-called tragedy is to tear beautiful things to pieces in front of you and show them to you." - It seemed that Miss Sato, who woke up in the bathroom, had escaped from that suffocating and exhausting fate. That bowl of udon on a summer night, that sparkling concert... All clearly tell people that Sato Akemi is alive and alive as a human being. In this, she is happy, no doubt. But this happiness is actually unreal to her, so that we found that—— Fate, this fate as precise as a gear, this fate as cruel as a millstone, still found her. In a matter of seconds, the final decision was made. In just a blink of an eye, there were only empty pieces scattered here, which made people unable to let go. … Poor writing... It's so well written... Ah …

The main story is well written. I thought it was another scripted book, but the story starting from the middle period really has its own characteristics. It has a feeling of the people's view of history that is not mentioned in the drama. That is, the story unfolds too fast. The speed in the early and late stages is a bit fragmented like inside and outside the black hole horizon. It is generally well received, you can take a look^ω^