High Martial: Come on, You Call This an E-Rank Ability?

The writing is very good so far, the writing is good, and the plot is coherent. I hope there will be no female protagonist, and I will not be ambiguous with many girls, and I will be a sober male protagonist! Keep getting stronger and reach the peak of superpowers!

It's so good to read, I hope it doesn't have a female protagonist. I've passed by this book many times before, and this time I read it. It's really good, but it's gone. I feel so sad. Come on, come on! ! Author, please hurry up!

It's good to watch. I hope there won't be a female protagonist. It's just too slow. The author will update it quickly. It's not enough. [Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss]

It's really well written, I haven't read such a beautiful article in a long time (♡⌂♡). There is no big poisonous point, although I was stabbed in the back by my girlfriend at the beginning⁽⁽ଘ( ˙꒳˙ )ଓ⁾⁾ But I think the biggest difference between it and other cool novels is that it has very rich character descriptions. I also like the character of the male protagonist. I have automatically added a beautiful buff to him. The windbreaker rustled fiercely in the face of the strong wind. Although I know that this is a world of high martial arts, it is not suitable to have long hair. Maybe, but I really like it. Every time I slash, the blood will fly through the air, sink deeply into the long hair, and fall to the ground with the change of movements. Next to it are the ruins of several monsters. I am deeply ravaged by the Internet. I really can't accept the big guy ˃ʍ˂ (personal xp) It seems as if I saw the male protagonist facing tens of thousands of beasts single-handedly, with the ghost fires that never go out surging around him, the spears tearing apart the flesh and blood of ferocious beasts, and the madness and brilliance carved into the bones and blood of the young man. The action plot is also written very smoothly and smoothly, as if every word is turned into a flowing line and hand-drawn close-up in the mind. It is immersive. It is the kind of thing that doesn't want to sleep until 3 o'clock in the morning. The author please update me quickly! !

It's very good to read. The collective honor in the article is very touching [crying] and the darkness of human nature is also written in a very real way [pitch] The male protagonist is brave and resourceful, and he can hide everything. He is not the kind of impulsive person, and he is not pretentious or troublesome, but he is not afraid of trouble either. I really like his character [laughs] Can this novel not have a female protagonist? [Grief] The author doesn't write well about the relationship between boys and girls, especially the girl named Chu Chu [face covering] Because the background is modern technology, supernatural beasts, and cults, so I couldn't help but use words like "beautiful eyes" and "breathing like orchid" to describe it. Are you embarrassed? [Hang face] The situation in this article is not suitable for a female protagonist. The male protagonist has a martial arts heart. The higher the level, the more he wants to move up. He has no time to get along with girls. The country is also facing dangers everywhere. At this time, girls also need to strengthen their studies. How can they sometimes encounter these things? [Grief] However, the author is very suitable for writing about friendship. I really like all the friends of the male protagonist, and they all have great personalities [full]. I will not be jealous of the male protagonist because his ability cannot keep up with him. Instead, I will work hard on my own and help the male protagonist when he needs it. The male protagonist will not look down on his friends because they cannot keep up. It is a two-way street [like] I like the lone wolf male protagonist, I like him to kill monsters to earn power points, I like him to take missions to destroy cult gathering places, I like him to compete with geniuses from the same school, and now I see that he and the seniors can go to win glory for the school, the fighting scenes are very interesting, the author is suitable for writing these fighting scenes [like] but never write about girls, you can't control the love line author, don't touch it [crazy]

Don't think that a licking dog must be at least four stars, five stars must be interesting. The so-called licking dog means that there is no love for no reason, and there is no hatred for no reason. As soon as I traveled through time, I had a full sense of belonging to this world. I love everyone here and I want to protect them. Even if I die, I will protect them. Without a seat, I am this licking dog.

Come on, author! I have read so many interesting articles on Tomato, but this one doesn't seem so brainless. The protagonist's strength has increased steadily, and the steady and steady style seems very comfortable. The author's description of the battle scenes is also very good. If you have a good imagination, you can come up with it. I hope there will be more updates every day! ! !

The writing is okay Let's talk about the shortcomings first. ①The portrayal of the female character is not appropriate. For example, most female characters are introduced because of their appearance, but there is very little description of their strength. Also, his senior sister is portrayed a little too much. If there is no need to write emotional scenes, try to write as little about her as possible. ②The progress of improving the protagonist's abilities is too slow. Judging from some words in the article, there is a huge gap between double S-level and S-level. The abilities of two S-levels cannot even compare to one double S-level. The protagonist's more commonly used fire power is still only at S level. ③There are many mentally retarded characters. I think people whose families are relatively strong, or who are relatively strong themselves, generally won't deal too hard against another genius. I hope the author won't show any more brain-dead characters like Sun Xiaoguo in the next few paragraphs. Also, the public opinion inside can be too incited. A top university should not let someone on the Internet just fan the flames and cause the whole school to be angry. Let's talk about the advantages. A The brotherhood and comradeship are portrayed very well. For example, the protagonist's good friend at the beginning discovered that the protagonist was very strong during the college entrance examination. At that time, the protagonist planned to lead him through, but he chose to break up with the protagonist so as not to become a drag on the protagonist. This is very good. There are also a few inconspicuous little characters, such as a beast wave during the joint entrance examination of the three schools. There were two veterans inside. They discovered that the protagonist was still young and took the initiative to take him with him. After the beast wave ended, they even drank with him to say goodbye. Also, Teacher Wu Yu's sacrifice was something I never expected. I even cried when I read that section. B's portrayal of the school is very powerful. I thought it was like some previous novels, that there were almost no major differences between schools. However, this novel described the difference between top schools and ordinary schools in my imagination very well. Moreover, he did not describe how powerful the school is in the novel, but made me feel the power of high-end schools from some details. This is very worthy of praise. C The description of the realm of cultivation is appropriate. The author gave an accurate overview of the determination of cultivation in the article, and the protagonist's cultivation realm and strength are indeed quite satisfying. All in all, the author's main problem right now is that the relationship between the female character and the protagonist is not properly depicted, and there are too many mentally retarded characters.

Two hundred thousand words, thank you Liu Yifei and Eddie Peng, Bai Zai thanks everyone, thank you all for the gifts and reminders. Bai Zai gives everyone a mouthful [Thinking]

It looks great. I beg the author not to have a female protagonist [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]