Madam Herta, What Do You Mean I'm Still a Work in Progress?

Nice! Use simple language to write sincere feelings! It describes the mediocrity of "mortals" and the brilliance of genius! The writing is exquisite! In the turbulent flow of time, in the passage of more than 900 years, the departure of the old friend and the changes around him wrote the protagonist's regret and nostalgia! "Freedom is the best gift you can give it, just like you and me, just come and see it often" Life has its own choice! And freedom is the power of choice! The protagonist and the system respect other people's ideas! Just like when faced with whether the "black tower" should exist in a small dark room! The protagonist respects the choice of the "Black Tower". And the "Black Tower" is also an important help to the protagonist! The recycling of the foreshadowing later is also perfect. Although there are some shortcomings in it, it doesn't matter! This book is already at the top of the Black Tower fanfics!

Yes, the protagonist is a growth-oriented person, not the kind of idiot who becomes a genius immediately after being given up. The writing is average, and the plot is not empty. At least it makes me interested in continuing to read. I just hope that when the game reaches the main line, the level will not drop rapidly like other fans. It's all over, just two things, writing back and forth, writing back and forth, writing back and forth. The author will do three things now. First, mention the foreshadowing you have buried from time to time to whet your appetite. Second, write about the interaction with the Black Tower. But the problem is that with the current situation, I don't feel anything even if you kiss your mouth to bits. There is nothing new. The third is to engage in abstraction. What about the main plot? I haven't pushed it for a long time, so I insist on being stuck there. There are no new characters, and the writing is getting worse and worse. And I don't know how this method of conquering the heroine through self-sacrifice originated from Tomatoes. It's totally poisonous to me. Yes, the hero saves the beauty is really useful when the relationship between the two parties has not been established, but! After establishing a relationship, who can accept such dedication from the other party with peace of mind? If you want to go further, the two of you must overcome more difficulties together. What has the author cut into the black tower now? I don't even want to say it. Now it is completely resting on its laurels and there is nothing new at all. This also shows that the author has not put his thoughts on this book now. Finally, I wish the author a bright future and a smooth road ahead.

It's so beautiful, why can the characters' emotions be so delicate! The plot is so smooth! Such a distinct personality! The plot is so heartwarming! Tell me, why do I feel like I am watching their lives from the sidelines? Why? Your novel makes me feel a little like reading comics! Answer me! You must update 5 times a day! I just love it! What are you doing with this wind? Don't hit my soul directly! There is also the fact that Ms. Heita is unparalleled in the world, Ms. Heita is extremely smart, Ms. Heita is talented, Ms. Heita has extraordinary intelligence, Ms. Heita is extremely intelligent, Ms. Heita is unparalleled in elegance, Ms. Heita has a beautiful heart and mouth, Ms. Heita is wise and ingenious, Ms. Heita has both talent and beauty, Ms. Heita is like a fish and a wild goose, Ms. Heita is naturally beautiful, Ms. Heita has a beautiful country and is fragrant, Ms. Heita has a beautiful face! Let us sing for the Black Tower. The Black Tower's beauty surpasses the universe, the Black Tower's knowledge is famous among thousands of stars, the Black Tower's name resounds throughout the world, and the Black Tower's power reaches the sky and the earth! She wakes up my sleeping soul, answers my doubts, and is illuminated by her thousands of mirrors, and I fall head over heels in admiration! She is our great god, she is our shining light! Let us sing the praises of the Black Tower. The incomparably beautiful Lady of the Black Tower awakens "nothingness"! The naturally beautiful Ms. Heita makes "Tonghe" sing! The beautiful lady of Heita is praised by "pure beauty"! After watching this scene, I looked solemn, lowered my head deeply, and silently Turn off your phone, get up, open the refrigerator, and take out - Bottle of 1982 collector's edition Nongfu Spring, hold it tightly in your hand and walk slowly Go to the window, the scenery outside the window A little dim, just like my mood, heavy, very heavy, gradually Yes, it's raining lightly in the gray sky outside. Why, my vision is blurry I'm confused. I don't know if it's because I'm crying or because it's raining heavily. It could be both. Well, my mood is even more melancholy. I can no longer suppress my inner feelings. I felt so excited, opened the window, and shouted out the window: I am in the front row! ! ! All I can say is that if you don't watch it, you will be sentenced to death. Ms. Heita is unparalleled in the world, Ms. Heita is extremely smart, Ms. Heita is talented, Ms. Heita has extraordinary intelligence, Ms. Heita is extremely intelligent, Ms. Heita is unparalleled in elegance, Ms. Heita has a beautiful heart and mouth, Ms. Heita is smart and thoughtful, Ms. Heita has both talent and beauty, Ms. Heita is like a fish and a wild goose, Ms. Heita is naturally beautiful, Ms. Heita is beautiful and fragrant, Ms. Heita has a beautiful face! Let us sing for the Black Tower. The Black Tower's beauty surpasses the universe, the Black Tower's knowledge is famous among thousands of stars, the Black Tower's name resounds throughout the world, and the Black Tower's power reaches the sky and the earth! She wakes up my sleeping soul, answers my doubts, and is illuminated by her thousands of mirrors, and I fall head over heels in admiration! She is our great god, she is our shining light! Let us sing the praises of the Black Tower. The incomparably beautiful Lady of the Black Tower awakens "nothingness"! The naturally beautiful Ms. Heita makes "Tonghe" sing! The beautiful lady of Heita is praised by "pure beauty"! The beauty of the black tower is rare, the beauty of the black tower I am not boasting, but the people here are all majestic, admired by thousands of people, unparalleled, jade trees facing the wind, both internal and external, talented, noble sentiments, super invincible, perfect, reaching the pinnacle, flying sand and stones, uncanny craftsmanship, enlightening the deaf and enlightening, candles shining on the world, seeing thousands of miles clearly, rain and dew on the common people, luxuriating in all directions, eagles watching and wolves watching, dragons walking. Tiger steps, majestic appearance, high-rise building, benevolent and moral, suave, selfless, looks like Pan An, more talented than Song Yu, a pear tree weighs begonias, you have it, no one has you, a whole body is upright, two sleeves have breeze, virtue is flowing, innocent heart, high mountain scenery, high sentiments, great virtues, immeasurable merits, good gold and beautiful jade, Mingde only Xin, Huai Jin holding Yu, Hui Xin Wan Zhi, Yuan Tao Celestia, lofty ideals and benevolent people, white cranes in the clouds, magnificence, romantic figures, dragons and phoenix chicks, unparalleled, unparalleled heroes, out of the ordinary, a branch in Guilin, people with cranes singing, one-of-a-kind, unparalleled in the world, named on the gold list, Kunshan tablet jade, peerless transcendent black tower lady is unparalleled in the world, black tower lady Extremely smart, Ms. Heita is talented, Ms. Heita has extraordinary intelligence, Ms. Heita is extremely smart, Ms. Heita is unparalleled in elegance, Ms. Heita has a beautiful heart and beautiful mouth, Ms. Heita has a wise heart and ingenious thinking, Ms. Heita has both talent and appearance, Ms. Heita is like a fish and a goose, Ms. Heita is naturally beautiful, Ms. Heita is beautiful and fragrant, Ms. Heita has a beautiful face! Let us sing for the Black Tower. The Black Tower's beauty surpasses the universe, the Black Tower's knowledge is famous among thousands of stars, the Black Tower's name resounds throughout the world, and the Black Tower's power reaches the sky and the earth! She wakes up my sleeping soul, answers my doubts, and is illuminated by her thousands of mirrors, and I fall head over heels in admiration! She is our great god, she is our shining light! Let us sing the praises of the Black Tower. The incomparably beautiful Lady of the Black Tower awakens "nothingness"! The naturally beautiful Ms. Heita makes "Tonghe" sing! The beautiful lady of Heita is praised by "pure beauty"! The beauty of the Black Tower is rare, the beauty of the Black Tower.

It's not unreasonable for this book to be rated so fast. Personally, I feel that the sword on lifespan is one of the highlights of this article. Even a person who doesn't cry often makes my nose sore when I read it [palms my face]. The writing is also very good, and it deserves the five stars [I learned it]

At first I thought it was another kind of otaku fantasy literature with a female protagonist. I saw that the ratings were good so I clicked in to try it. I didn't expect it. It's really good. There are no diaosi quotes with H accents. There is no ambiguity with the heroine in the beginning that destroys the character. There is no brainless coolness of Long Aotian. The whole article is very comfortable to read [Like] [Like] Good article

You can bring tears to my eyes, the author, you have won. Now I realize that the life, separation and death before me cannot move me, but the passing of time is the scariest thing. The saddest thing is the return of Lan Keren. It is very well written. Show me all. The author must keep writing.

I have been reading Tomato for two years, and I think it is the best among the second novels written by Beng Tie. There is no OOC, not too much nonsense, and there is no weird flirting in single-heroine novels. There are only excellent writing, delicate emotions, and the development of the plot is even more fascinating. Keep up the current writing level, and I will definitely see it to the end!

Nice! Use simple language to write sincere feelings! It describes the mediocrity of "mortals" and the brilliance of genius! The writing is exquisite! In the turbulent flow of time, in the passage of more than 900 years, the departure of the old friend and the changes around him wrote the protagonist's regret and nostalgia! "Freedom is the best gift you can give it, just like you and me, just come and see it often" Life has its own choice! And freedom is the power of choice! The protagonist and the system respect other people's ideas! Just like when faced with whether the "black tower" should exist in a small dark room! The protagonist respects the choice of the "Black Tower". And the "Black Tower" is also an important help to the protagonist! The recycling of the foreshadowing later is also perfect. Although there are some shortcomings in it, it doesn't matter! This book is already at the top of the Black Tower fanfics!

What an exaggerated degree of restoration, none of it is OOC, the rhythm is well grasped, the writing style is not pretentious and elegant, natural and smooth, and the emotional foreshadowing and release are just right. It's surprising that someone can really imitate Sister Tazi's character and tone so closely (it's a fanfic if it's not OOC) Basics), can be regarded as a real fine chaff, and I look forward to the follow-up screws. His dialogue style is really the most difficult to imitate. If it is too wordy, it will collapse, if it is too concise, it will collapse, and if it is disrespectful, it will collapse... What is needed is the right kind of elegance, etiquette and logic, and I look forward to it being used to the fullest [Sending Hearts]

It's good to read, it's really good to read. It's a lot better than the original Genshin Chronicles. The timeline jumps very reasonably and it's not like "x years have passed like this". The main character's relationship is not too unsolvable. It's not a small opening. The relationship line is also good. There is no disgusting plot where you suddenly fall in love with someone else. It's a very good Star Iron fanfic. It's getting more and more confusing later on. It's okay to open it occasionally and use any door dungeon, but you can't open it often. Moreover, you still help others selflessly. You are really a kind person in the universe. You help others for no reason, and they also believe you. Don't you think it's unreasonable? Don't pull that trick. There's nothing you can do about it. Let the protagonist try it. Why, use the entire planet to give you test subjects, right? Which leader with a sound mind would do this? It would be okay if he knew about the genius, but for a backward planet that is not even connected to the star network, it doesn't know about the genius at all, so it feels far-fetched to just believe him. This is the third time I've revised my comment. It's really just a nanny.