Western Fantasy: Saving the World Starts with Persuading the Goddess!

Objective evaluation, compared to before the change, there is indeed less artistry (the first chapter of the original version is really super burning, "The life of the legendary great magician disappeared in ten seconds, just to protect two more children from entering the teleportation array, I left my homeland, believers, and honor there... "Headwind game, I want to try." "What?" "I want to try." Every brave man is saying, "I will resist until the end of my life." Even if the book is deleted, I still remember it) There are more "cool points" in ordinary cool novels, such as what the original protagonist did. The tightrope-like reasoning and talent are reduced, replaced by a cheat-like effect of "free trial and error" in the spirit space, which reduces the time and reading threshold required for "slow warming" (such as fighting with the assassin dad from the original version, being hung with a hammer, flying with delayed magic) (Knife Crack, changed to the current more brainless "Magic Array Pretending to be cool"), I made a choice for the sake of traffic. I don't know if it is good or bad, but it is still a rare and good book. I will keep chasing it. Come on, author, I hope you can write a brand new story.

The protagonist Lin Feng has an online IQ, relies on details to deduce clues, and has outstanding combat and magic talents. He is usually casual and reliable at key points. He occasionally "talks a little". Ignoring this, I think the portrayal is quite good. Among the teammates, An is kind and healing, and her growth is moving; the goddess breaks the rapport but is cute in contrast; the supporting roles are few but lively. I personally think it is a very excellent novel (of course, after all, the book on July 14th only has 100,000 words, so my book review should only mention a few for people who will read it later) 1. Character description and personality: 1 Characteristics of the protagonist Lin Feng: his thinking ability is relatively advanced, he can link small things and deduce answers, his talent is strong, his combat skills and magic talents can be reflected, his personality is decisive, his wit is smart, his style is casual at ordinary times, he is reliable in critical situations, and he is decent. 2 The first teammate An: Kind, cute, after accepting the past and deciding to pursue the future, he has higher energy and is more reliable. 3 Goddess: lover, friendly and approachable, with the characteristics of a rebellious goddess (when shaping the image, I feel that the character is highlighted through contrast, those who have seen it should understand) The 4 secondary characters, such as An's parents, An's friends, the knight (which is considered polydactyl), and the grocery store couple all have their own characteristics and are well developed. 2. World view and settings: belief in gods, self-consistency of settings, and magic profession level system. Currently, there are relatively few descriptions of demons. 3. Plot: I think the main climaxes are: 1 Let the goddess regain her confidence 2 Help Brewster point out the direction 3 An's assessment and apology 4 The night Fennir attacked the hotel I feel that these plots are well described, and readers can resonate with them emotionally.

From the original version of The Black Tower, I briefly looked at the differences. The overall layout gave me a very distinctive feeling. However, this book's score is poor. In my opinion, it is due to the difference in the amount of content in the story line. A simple comparison of the first part of the two books (about the first 30 chapters), it is obvious that the amount of information in this book is a bit large. If the amount of information is enlarged in fewer chapters, it will feel that the progress is too fast (it may also be my problem) Another point is the introduction of characters. Not to mention the fan fiction, the introduction of characters in this book is a bit blunt. Taking An as an example, from contact to abduction, An's character was established by the description of abilities at the beginning. The subsequent descriptions are well written, but I think it is not natural and rich enough to understand people based on information about abilities alone. The same goes for the protagonist. The starting point of some ideas is difficult to understand, such as the male protagonist's obsession with the lucky A (maybe it will be mentioned later, but I didn't find it). There's a tacit sense that I understand the character. Finally, I hope that my writing will get better and better, and that I will recover soon (I don't know if I was still sick when I posted this) The above and following are all personal thoughts and feelings while reading. Kalan chapter over, I feel that there is still a lot of information, but the look and feel is much better (maybe I am gradually adapting to the style). The processing of the emotional line feels a bit fast. Personally, I like the daily style of emotional lines. Generally speaking, the writing style is very good, and the details are clearly grasped. This time, I have a lot to say about the introduction of characters and the feeling of character creation. I hope I can write better and better.

Each character has its own personality characteristics. Although it is an older theme, it is not an ordinary battle calculation. The character's IQ is online, such as the writing depth, such as the poor nameless Xinan [face covering] [face covering] [face covering]

After reading it, I read the book in The Dark Tower. The characters are very good, the supporting characters are also very charming, and the main plot is very clear. I can only think that the western fantasy genre is not popular here. Maybe the cover and title are not that attractive (?), I hope to see the ending one day.

The protagonist is really charming and can be said to be the core glue of this team

No one is watching? A very good novel.

To be honest, when I first saw the setting of the demons, I thought that the gods and humans might not be good people, but after seeing the setting of the gods, I felt that the demons were not a good thing.

Nice! Come on, author!

The novel is actually pretty good. Although it has some flaws and minor flaws, overall I can still read it.

The plot is coherent, the writing is good, the world view is clear, and some gag elements are added just right. I highly recommend reading this novel

No wonder it looks like an old friend. It turns out that the old friend has been reincarnated?

It's a nice book, but no one

It's nice, but there are no people around

Looks good, but no one is there

Love to watch, not brainless

My evaluation is very nice [top post][top post]

This is what I want to see! Lei Suqing is so beautiful!

Exquisite writing style, well written [eating melon]

The story is interesting and the writing is pretty good.

The thinking is clear and the logic is very good. It is very comfortable to look at.

No need to say more, you will know after watching it

I have only read the first 16 chapters so far, and I feel pretty good about it.

Although I only read the beginning, it is really good. I hope the author can finish it one day. Are there really two thousand people reading?

Love to watch. The plot is cleverly conceived, the characters have distinct attributes, and the protagonist has a strong personality and strong combat effectiveness.