Lord Yae Shenzi, Stop Urging Me!

Youxian is a new author who has just opened a book. The difference between his novels and the best-selling fast food and banquet novels is that the stories he writes are like a quietly flowing stream, neither fast nor slow. People can't help but follow it all the way down, like a cup of black tea, which makes people savor the sweetness and bitterness. His books are both sweet and bitter. There are ordinary and interesting daily life, but also thought-provoking character stories. He can see a real world through ordinary plots. The characters he describes are as if they are real. The contradictions and conflicts never seem abrupt, but they can make people unprepared. I hope he can continue to work hard to write and let the world in his heart never die.

Dear book friends~ I have received a lot of comments recently, and there are also many criticisms. I will reply here. Problems in criticism do exist, but this is also one of the reasons for the existence of this book. After all, it is my first book, and it is too normal for problems to exist. I welcome book friends to raise questions, and I am happy to exchange opinions with you (here I am complaining that the author of Tomato cannot see the paragraph comments in the background, and reading the comments from book friends has to go through chapter by chapter). In short, if you have any questions, feel free to ask them. Forget it this time, the next book will be revised. Sure enough, there is something so poisonous about this book that you really can't stand it and are angry. You can skip it or come to the comment area to talk about it. Book friends, hurry up and give me some experience [cool][cool][cool] Bad reviews will make me stronger! Finally, I shamelessly gave myself a five-star rating. About the new book. I'm writing, I'm writing, it's roughly a story about traveling through Liyue and slowly growing up to become a true king (because Liyue is relatively complicated, in the history of Payuan... I'm in a hurry just to arrange the timeline... So I'm writing it slowly...) The following is the new edition: New book has been released. The title of the book is Genshin: Records of Liyue's Development. In fact, I started updating it on May 15th, but it was not visible if it had less than 20,000 words, and it couldn't be searched unless I signed a contract. It took me a few days to write it down to 20,000 words. Now that the contract has been signed, I guess I can search for it in a while.

It's great. It's the best cp Yaegamiko article I've read so far. I just feel like there's a little little interaction between Tadpole and Yaegamiko as a couple. Or am I just fine with this everyday? Forget it, I don't understand. Anyway, I'm looking forward to the author's next book. Come on! ! ! [Blowing kiss]

A very good Genshin Impact daily novel, worth reading. The protagonist is Wen Chao Gong, but there is no plot of Wen Chao. It is more about the daily life of the protagonist in Inazuma, and getting along with the Genshin Impact characters, non-harem, pure friendship.

After reading the author's second book, I liked it so much that I came here to read the first one. The author will not limit the story to the existing main and branch lines in the game. It is easier to use the entire environment of Teyvat as the background to describe the story of "people". These ordinary people, living ordinary or extraordinary lives, are more likely to resonate with readers. Perhaps this has moved towards a real creation, rather than a simple fanfic. The initial writing skills are obviously immature, but the progress is also very rapid and obvious, so one star is deducted here. In addition, regarding the emotional drama, I have some personal humble opinion: the relationship has developed and progressed, but no matching scenes have been arranged. After analysis, it is found that the daily interactions are becoming more and more intimate, and the dull state of an old married couple has entered early, lacking the sparks that burst out when emotions break out. Therefore, from the reader's perspective, when determining the relationship, it is inevitable that it will be a little abrupt. Overall, it is a work that is easy to immerse in and get involved in after the early stages.

It's so beautiful. Why is it over? I wasn't very interested in the introduction of this book at first, but when I read it out of boredom, I started to like it more and more. It's been a long time since I found a book that I could keep reading to the end. Most of the books I read with gusto on the first day, I was too lazy to read the book the next day, but! This book forced me to finish reading it, even though it took me several days. I don't know how to describe it, but it's just to my liking. I even cried when I saw it afterwards [awkward laugh] I want to see more interactions between Duko and Shenzi. Woohoo.

The overall outline of this book is completely the ideal type in my mind, although the writing style is average (it just feels better sometimes, just a feeling, if I am wrong, please spray me qwq, I will not care if you spray me =)), if the writings written by those big guys are like a glacier, then the author should be like a small iceberg, which is a little bit attractive. I don't know if I listened to books in the early stage and was attracted to reading in the later stage. I feel that compared to the early stage, the later stage is a bit short (don't blame me if I'm wrong). It's like an airplane taking off. The early run-up and take-off is perfect, but the subsequent flight is a bit unstable, and Maybe most of the emotions are a bit obvious and could use more silence. For example, at the beginning, the protagonist actively responds to the death of his teammates. To be precise, he is optimistic. But later, as cherished partners die one after another, the protagonist breaks the defense, visits relatives with knives, kills people, and smashes the shogunate. All in all I thought it was well written, at least to my taste. My above suggestions may appear to be a bit over-the-top in front of the author. The author may have considered this possibility, but it is just my opinion and you can regard it as fart.

What can I say? This book has both knives and candies. What makes me most happy is that the characters in this book have their own thoughts, as if they have come to life, which left a deep impression on me. I like it very much and am very happy. It has always been with me when I read this book. Although the time is short, it left a long impression on me. I will never forget that I had this book in my life (. ❛ ᴗ ❛.)

Except for soul penetration and some minor problems, most of them are okay. Come on, author! Such a protagonist is really rare in Tomato. Most of the protagonists in Tomato are scumbags.

This is my first five stars on Tomato. The author's writing style is really good, the description of emotions and the creation of characters are very good, and there are also many knives. (￢_￢) The overall transition is complete, the structure is reasonable, and it can be considered a good masterpiece. It has the sense of daily life and the unique charm of the second dimension. The author blends it very well, and it can make people very embarrassed from time to time. ˃ʍ˂ This book gave me the feeling that he did not deliberately create a character, but a person's character can be seen in every bit of text. Because this is a recommendation, I won't say too much about the plot. (=^▽^=) The characters are well created and the author is very responsible. All in all, I highly recommend it. (｡>∀<｡)

It's really possible, but it's too short, and the writing style is flawed. But I don't know what happened later, and it felt like nothing, but it was very uncomfortable when I first started reading it. Anyway, this is a great novel.

What can I say about this book? It's very comfortable, has heartwarming places, is happy, and makes me smile like an aunt. As expected, I really like this book. [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

It looks good, the dialogues are great, it has a relaxed and everyday feel, it is very smooth, and the narrative at the end is also good (although the battle part is a bit weird at the beginning, but it is a good book so far, I hope the rating will catch up)

It was well written, and the characters were all flesh and blood, but it ended hastily, and there were still many subplots that were not written, such as the story after the travelers arrived, the friendship with Kamisato Ayaka, and the conflict with Kujo Sara, etc.

Manhun, Tomato is a rare high-quality Genshin Impact fanfic. Although the protagonist is a copywriter, he does not focus on describing the reactions of the people to the work like other articles. The author also has a good grasp of the emotions in the book. It is not like other clichéd articles that secretly promise not to marry Feijun in a few chapters. The protagonist gives people a feeling of wandering around in the world. The stories of several original characters in the book are also good. They are not just tools to promote the plot. I look forward to the plot after the travelers intervene.

When I saw the treasure thief group, I couldn't help but rate it. The author's writing is really capable of mobilizing emotions. I also like the way the protagonist solves problems. He is kind, gentle, careful, smart and rational. He is really likeable.

It's not bad, but I spent a lot of time writing some original characters later on. How can I put it, although I know that the author wants the protagonist to grow from it, but on the one hand, there are a lot of originals, and on the other hand, they are all hacked. This does affect the perception a bit, but overall it is not bad.

It looks pretty good, there are no poisonous points, and the characters in the plot are not too OOC; there are original characters, which are not bad, and there is a system, but there is no sense of existence. Support! Write more, kids love to eat!

After reading many Genshin Impact fanfics, I still felt my eyes brightened after reading the author's book. The warm daily life is very good, and the protagonist is also very good. It is a very comfortable book to read.

I really like this book. The early part is about ordinary fishing and foreshadowing, but it starts to get sweeter when you reach Haizhi Island. The interaction with tide is very warm. However, there is a knife after chapter 94. I suggest you read chapter 94.

The characters are very good, and the daily writing is really good. With the knife, there is a love-hate feeling, and the philosophical questions are always interesting. It is really unfinished at the end, and there are still more than 9 points left. If it is not unfinished, it should be above 9.5.

The writing is so good, thank you so much to the author.

So far, it's a very heartwarming story

It's good to watch, but it's a bit shabby. Although I saw the author's message saying that some readers felt that the protagonist's growth was too slow, for me, the pace was relatively moderate (maybe I like to watch slow-paced daily dramas), and the original characters were also well portrayed (although it smells like being knifed). It's a pity that this book is gone with dozens of chapters left. I hope that the remaining plot will be more daily and less invasive. I'm also looking forward to the author's new book.

In my eyes, this book is considered very good. He depicts a world and writes the story into a real event, with flesh and blood. After experiencing suffering, he has grown and become more humane. Looking forward to another book from the author

There are knives, but not many, and not much about daily relationships. The relationship is not particularly obvious in the early stage, and it is only officially revealed in the later stage. Generally speaking, it is a light novel that is about daily leisure in the early stage and hair cutting in the later stage. It is good.

It looks good. It must be great when the protagonist is bound to a beautiful sword. Unfortunately, I feel like I can't write about a big sword, but it's also good without a sword. It's a novel that people can read leisurely. I thought that the protagonist had just left the novice village, but I didn't expect to go straight to the finale. The main plot is not as much as the daily routine. The main plot is too rushed. I finished it hastily. I feel like I have it, but I feel like I have no idea. During the rebellion, the protagonist also participated in a war. Later, it seemed that his companion died, and the protagonist's eye of God shone. Can he defeat the thunder god in a duel with him in a dozen moves? The protagonist's strength grows too suddenly. There are many other factors not mentioned, which is monotonous. The author is really sorry for the protagonist. The story of turning off Sawdust passed quickly. The kid who followed Beidou didn't explain the follow-up (maybe I didn't see it). The author has the skills to write it, but it was too rushed. I was really ecstatic that I updated ten chapters yesterday, but it ends today. It's too much. Then come on, the author.

This is a very beautiful and in-depth novel. The leisure life of ordinary people in the early stage, the layout of the Eye of God and the slapstick fights of the Son of God in the middle stage are very delicate, and the sudden changes in the later stage also describe the transformation of the protagonist very well. End with relaxation. This book, if written slowly, is a very good work. The author's narrative ability, overall logic and rhythm are all top-notch. It's a pity that such a good article ended after more than 100 chapters.

This book is very beautiful and I highly recommend everyone to read it. The overall plot logic is very clear, so clear that you can make a mind map with just a piece of paper. The relationship between the characters is relatively obvious and does not need to be particularly difficult to sort out. There is no such thing as um, you understand, you understand. This is the kind of place that leaves readers scratching their heads. It is more daily oriented, but the plot design is not very clichéd. It is daily, but there is something new to keep people reading. The overall writing style is relatively light and bright, without that sad feeling. Except for the period of the national isolation war, and the pain of ordinary people before and during the war. That feeling of being in it and having no control over it. There are some original characters, but they don't overshadow the show. The original character design is very full. It can clearly allow readers to get the ideas that the author wants to express. Emotions are tepid, and the true expression comes in the extras. His relationship with Yae Kamiko was in a semi-boyfriend-but-normal-friend situation, and he didn't fully express his feelings until the extra episode. The daily leaking of words is very similar to the feeling between friends. I wonder if you have ever experienced the feeling of having a quarrel with your friends without worries and happiness. The relationship with several other characters is also very harmonious, and there is no fun of slandering them. They are very good friends, but they are not too close. There is prosperity in terms of length. There are detailed descriptions of the main characters, and the minor ones are briefly mentioned. For example, there are relatively detailed contacts with Yae Kamiko, Kujo Sara, Haya Yuu, etc., And characters such as Toma are briefly mentioned. There was no case of biting off more than one could chew. The author knows outlines very well.

I really like this kind of warm writing style and ordinary life