Wuxia Crossover: I Can Hear Their Thoughts, and the Heroines Are Acting Strange

This is really good. The best thing is that he is not a dog licker. He analyzes the female protagonists and supporting characters based on the characters of the original novels, and then decides which ones are suitable to accept. He will not continue to warm up to the heroines who are very difficult to conquer, but he will slowly change the thinking and perception of the heroines who are difficult to conquer. Although I know there are a lot of female protagonists and supporting actors, the method seems very comfortable, which is good. Finally, can you use [ ] to distinguish the main text and the inner words, otherwise it will be very uncomfortable to read. There is also a paragraph that should not be written too much. The densely packed words are like reading a text and my scalp is numb. I hope to change it in the future. Come on.

So far, the writing is good, and it feels like a normal novel. It is not the kind that is invincible and directly reposts. The basic logic can be self-consistent, and the writing style is also humorous and normal. The plot development is not too fast but not too slow. Women are not too brainless, and men are not too licky. It is considered a masterpiece of the same type. Others are too brainless. I like this kind of diary voice, but it is not a bunch of reposts right away. At least it feels like it will develop slowly and naturally.

After a few bites, there are reasons why the rating is so low. I won't go into too many details. I've said all that needs to be said in the comment area. Scroll down to read Erxin's comments. The high-star comments have no reference value.

You must read such a good novel, not just for me, it's so good! In the early stage, the protagonist's voice was heard by the heroine, and then the heroine cut off the protagonist's opportunity and scolded the protagonist. In the middle stage, the women plotted against the protagonist. One of the passages was written by a heroine who said: We can marry the beautiful woman who has the first time to someone else. This way we will have less competition (roughly this is what it means). It should have caused the protagonist to lose a lot of women. Why is it "should"? Because I thought the female protagonists were too good, I just couldn't stand it, so I skipped it. At the end, I actually saw a female protagonist who could hear the protagonist's voice, and she was in love with someone else. I guess I didn't read the others carefully because they looked so good, so I skipped a lot of chapters. The protagonist or the woman in the protagonist was too good, and he gave away the woman who should belong to the protagonist for the sake of others. You must read this good novel! ! !

It looks good, it has a few flaws but it really looks good if you can't stand it. The more I look at it, the more I feel sick.

The author's writing is okay, but he accepts a bit too many women. In fact, there is no need to accept so many. Those who have a bad life or are anti-human in the original work, such as Duan Yu's group of sisters, can be accepted, but not the others. Otherwise, there will be too many women in the future of the book. In fact, A'Zhu does not need to accept them, let her marry Qiao Feng can be regarded as making up for the regret of being a martial arts man. In addition, I hope that the author can add some good-looking TV dramas in the later period, such as "The Sword Roaring Jianghu, Lotus Struggle for Hegemony, The Legend of the Legend of Cicada Wings, Wujin Blood Sword, Wandering Dragon and Frightening Phoenix" and other TV series that are loved by those born in the 1980s. I wonder if the author has watched them. I wrote it wrong: The Heroes of China, not The Heroes of China.

The rhythm is good, the combat power is pretty good compared to the general mixed martial arts cards, and it doesn't expand too fast and lose the fun.

It seems quite interesting so far, but the amount is too small, and mixed martial arts novels often have several big problems, including confusing maps, confusing character relationship logic, and the fact that it is obviously the same world, but the characters in each original book seem to only interact with the characters in the same original book. Five stars first and then look at the follow-up. After seeing the latest 100 chapters, I can only say that the plot arrangement is very average, or even a little bad. First of all, if the protagonist has Bei Ming Shen Gong and does not arrange for the protagonist to improve his strength first, but then runs around to hook up with girls. With your strength, Yun Zhonghe can beat you all over the place. You can't beat anyone. Why don't you have a bunch of girls running around with you? Also, among the heroines and supporting characters in the original works, which one of them doesn't have their own pride? Not to mention that the protagonist is as strong as a grand master, at least as a grand master. Just because your strength is not even innate, you will revolve around you because you are a bit special? There is no rational logic. Another biggest poisonous point is that she loves Wang Yuyan too much. She wants to keep the harem while pretending to be a gentleman and wants Wang Yuyan to nod her head.

After reading these chapters, it's not bad, you can get into it! Coupled with the Zongwu worldview, there are many collision plots to be developed! Looking forward to it! There are almost no poisonous points that I don't care about. The logic is self-consistent and does not affect normal viewing! Book lovers who like it but are hesitant can join in! It's messed up behind, run! ! ! What a pity this beginning...

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