Raising a System, Starting with Demi-Gods and Semi-Devils

It's pretty good, but the system is a bit weak. Also, I suggest improving the protagonist's aptitude if the system is inadequate; otherwise, it feels awkward that the protagonist can't deduce cultivation techniques on their own if the system is also ineffective. The female lead is well-written; she doesn't just collect whatever she sees, and she has her own strength.

The author's descriptions and foreshadowing of emotions are exceptionally skillful, something largely absent in modern novels, which often deliver a powerful emotional impact immediately. I still remember *Xian Ni* as a novel with particularly excellent emotional descriptions.

There are only forty-odd chapters so far, and it's not bad. My understanding of Jin Yong's martial arts novels is purely theoretical, based on screenshots of original texts taken during debates among other readers and information from popular TV dramas. So far, the story written by the author is quite good.

I quite like them; their values ​​are sound, and their logic is normal. It's just that Wang Yuyan and Xiaolongnu even have the same mole—what happened to their carefree, wind-riding adventures? How did they become Hunyuan? Didn't they already copy the Nine Yin Manual long ago and then relearn it? The Nine Yang Divine Skill and the Sunflower Manual should have appeared by now; they wouldn't have forgotten them by hiding in the mountains.

The author does a good job of portraying women, laying the groundwork for Wang Yuyan's romantic feelings. Many fanfictions portray Wang Yuyan as a fool, easily won over.

Four stars is the maximum. I don't know why it only got a 6.5 Rating. The writing is smooth and the logic is clear, but the system's presence is too weak. It doesn't even meet the standards of a truly satisfying read, yet it gets a malicious rating? Is there no justice in this world?!

Although some plot points weren't great, most of the overall story was to my liking, so I'll give it five stars for now. I haven't finished it yet, so if the ending is bad or it's discontinued... Then I can only give it one or two stars. Hopefully, that won't happen. So far, it's pretty good.

This book is really good; it's well-organized, with clear structure and coherent paragraphs! Listening to it is a very pleasant experience.

It's great, I want to see more in the next world.

Not bad, the protagonist's personality is somewhat androgynous.